#4 MANANSS: OUR WILD LOVE (Link to next thread PG-1)

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Arunima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#941

I cant believe its over! But just loved this ending.. I wish MaNan stay the same always! I loved the whole story! Just the separation was painful, but it was important to bring them closer.. Great job writing yet another beautiful story alisha! Thank you for this..
Thanks for the PM!

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gracyparmar

@gracyparmar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#942

awsm...so finally sab thik ho gya ab bas rishabh bhi uth jaye

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gracyparmar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#943

superb..awsm..mast hai so finally nandini manik malhotra..

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KoyelDutta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#944

hey alisha...first of all congo...u did a nice job n this story was really a hard job to carry on with...
on a whole there were many scenes which were cute enuf n I really like..
some I found bit lame or funny smtyms (no hard feelings)
bt thrn again ur next update made me forget those scenes...
anyways all over u did a great job...I really appreciate ur hard work...

but but but...I have one qstn...who gives home delivery for babies...?? precisely speaking which parent would b taking training to push their baby out...??
or can u tell me where r these training provided cz u know its better to knw...kya pata kb kiske km ajaye..!!

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#945

Awesome beautiful chapter. ..

Wow they have beautiful daughter. ..

They are one happy family now for forever. ..

I like the whole story equally ...all the scenes were awesome. ..

Their love scenes moments was awesome very passionate. ..

When manik visit pune both times were amazing to read. ..

This love story was unique. ..

Thanks for sharing this awesome story.

Stay blessed keep writing.

Thanks.

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twenkling

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Posted: 9 years ago

#946

wow...such an wild journey it was...

but very worthful...

incredible story...

manan nd their beautiful wild life with adiva was fabulous...

thanks for giving this story...

be happy

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Vandyandy

@Vandyandy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#947

Hey Alisha

Muaahhh !!!!!!!

Thks for the PM honey...

SUPERB...AMAZING...MARVELLOUS...

LIKE EVERY TIME U NAILED IT THIS ONE TOOO..

THE DELIVERY PART WAS SO SCARY ...

MY HEART WAS POUNDING HIGH...

BITTING MY NAILS AS WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOWW...

GOSH !!!!!! MANIK WAS FREAKING OUT HOW TO HELP HER LOVE AS SHE WAS IN SO MUCH PAIN...

HE REMAINED SO CALM AND ACTED WISELY TO TAKE THE MATTER IN HIS HANDS...

IT WAS INFACT THE FIRST TIME FOR MANIK TOOO...

SO CTUE ... HE DELIVERED HIS BABY PRINCESS ...

THE BEST PART WHEN SHE STARTED CRYING ...MANIK WAS CRYING TOOO... AWWWYYY...

ADIVA... LOVELY NAME...

SUCH A SWEET BRAT DAUGHTER MANAN HAVE...HEHEHE

ADORABLE FAMILY...

THE BEST PHASE OF THIS FF IS WHEN NANDANI DIDN'T GAVE UP ON MANIK...

SHE MADE HIM FALL FOR HER...

EVEN NOT LETTING HIM KNOW THAT SHE DIDN'T SLEPT WITH ARAYMAN ...

ONLY AFTER HE CONFESSED HIS LOVE SHE TOLD HIM...THAT WAS AWESOME..

THE THING I DIDN'T LIKE WAS MANIK WAS MAKING OUT WITH

SO MANY GIRLS...WAS WORRIED FOR HIM...

AND HE SHOULDN'T HAVE SLEPT WITH NANDINI'S BESTIES.

AND THERE'S NOTHING THAT U SHOULD HAVE SHOWN RATHER IT WAS PERFECT..

EVERY EMOTION MANAN WENT THROUGH WAS PORTRAITED BEAUTIFULLY...

HMMM !!!!!! I'M SO GONNA MISS OUR WILD LOVE..

THKS ALISHA FOR A BEAUTIFUL MANAN JOURNEY..

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#948

Hey dear

This is amazing jorney

My fav part was when manik trying to win back nandini

They way u his efforts its amazed me

Kaun is jamane mey kisise is hadd tak pyar karta hai

The birth giving scene is i feel incomplete

Pl dont mind

You r amazing writer

I love ur storis

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ROOP0605

@ROOP0605

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Posted: 9 years ago

#949

Amazing updates

Perfect ending

Mind blowing

Fantastic story

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Pari

@kyy_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#950

Awesm end!

Loved it soo muchhh!!

Adiva is too cuteee ^*^

Okay the part I loved is when-

Manik was here to win Nandini back

The way he fought and was determined to grt her back was my fav part!

Next the part I didnt like

Ofcourse separation track

When his wife came into the scene

And they went apart!

And abt the scene I wanted bt was nt included

No i didnt want any such scene

I loved ur story d way it was

So thankyou so much

for such a lovely story!

Lastly tysm fr pm

Lots of love

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