#4 MANANSS: OUR WILD LOVE (Link to next thread PG-1) - Page 93

Hmm. last chapter bhi aa gya. so fast haa.. Oh god. manik handled nandu's tantrums so well ...indeed he is a nice guy... Wow birth scene was so unique. so different. I really liked it.. wow.. Wow their baby adiva. name is so cute... Manik literally cried... wow their family moments totally loved it .. adiva ne at last jab manan ko unke play k bare me pucha. heheh. so awesome na... I literally love whole update. about favourite part.. vo to jab nandu chali gyi. n manik won't give up on her.. manofying her.. or I literally love whole story.. sooo I loved it . Can't even say update soon. m gonn miss this . Keep writing.

too gd.. I lyk d most nandu work for manik in his office.. n try tu seduce him

Why did you end this story this soon...
Aisa lag raha ha Ki Kal hi to start hui thi...
Beautiful epilogue...
Adiva is cutey gorgeous...
Gonna Miss this story alot..

It was really an awesome update...loved the scenes of manan with adiva...such a beautiful name...

Finally I got full update which I was waiting for.
It was awesome n would say perfect n lovely ending. You made me happy
.thanks for such a beautiful ff . I know it's very difficult to say goodbye to this ff . but have toao would say in you're style. Imean you asked for good n not good scenes as per me.

Good Scenes
I loved Nandu realisation of her love for manik n also her determination to fight for her love.
She went through a lot but still never gave up. So I loved all those where she was trying hard to get her love.

I also loved maniks way of realisation of love. The way he was ready to do anything to get her back. His all efforts n different ways he tried to get her back in his life.

I am totally in love with the last part scenes. Such a beautiful happy ending.
Loved you're way of ending. It don't felt much bad becoz you gave full justice to whole ff n ending it so nicely.

Bad Scenes
As per me I never felt there was any bad scenes , rather I felt everything in ff is going as per requirement of the story.
So nothing was n is as such a bad scene for me.

Scenes I would like you to add

If possible come up with some few updates in form of epilogue about their life going with Avida. I know you did mentioned about it in last update but I felt it was too less. Its just an suggestion but its totally up to you whether you can do that or not. If it's not then also its OK becoz I know its very difficult to run so many ff together. So no issues with that.

I said this becoz I really want to know how brat like Nandini n changed manik taking their life with their new born baby.

All in all I wanna congratulate you for successful completion of of such a beautiful ff.
Truely you stole my heart through you're way of writing.

Bye for this ff for if this is my last comment for this ff.

Continue soon with other ff.

Superb update dear...i really loved the story very very much...i mean every single bit of it...loved adiva a lot...
Will be waiting fr next...
Cont. Soon...

awesome story n lovely ending 😊
loved it 😊

Amazing story.
What a wild passionate jurney.
End was amazing.
Specially when their daughter asked what they were playing at night in their room. 😆
I loved all actions of moody pragnet nandni.
We will wait for ur next story. Best of luck for future.

wow such a perfect ending for this wonderful story yaar...

Awesome super fantastic