Manan SS - *Kiss a Stranger*/ Chapter 3(B) updated / 24-5/^_^ - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
Baba re!
That was fast.
From dismissal to a kiss and then naming one another.
I don't know what's dangerous about Malhotra that leads to them being the ones in the prologue. b I guess whatever happens they are now stuck with each other, forever I hope, with maybe things which could get them to love each other again.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhillon90

Nyccc update
Toh finally nandu ne kiss kr hi diya...dare complet kr diya...pr manik ne apna name q nhi btayea...nandu ka jaan liya...lovd it...continue soon



Hey thanks for the comment and yeah the dare is completed but naam kyu nahi bataya abb kya bolu me woh toh secret he aur anne wale chapters me khulega... 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya098

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Hello there... Love the update... Aisa lag rha tha ki manik nandu ke thought padh rha tha he is very smart... Phele toh mujhe laga ki she didn't kiss him n then suddenly she kissed him superb..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Manik asked her name...n the convo between manan manik was full mysterious...suspense...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Waiting for the next part update soon eagerly waiting...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Looking forward to read more...</font>



Thank you so much for the lovely comment i like it !
Naam kyu nahi bataya wohi toh suspense he woh upcoming chapters me pata chalega 😉

Even i looking forward to read more of your comments
Hugs and wishes
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Posted: 9 years ago
<font size="4">Hey guys rhank u so much for the lovely response i got from you all guys but the best comment was of Sneha Di so I am cheerfully dedicating this chapter to Sneha di aka meri BM 😉 agar me apki dramebaaz hu toh app bhi meri BM ho


WOW!! SACCHI... WHOLE CHAPPY DEDICATED TO ME... BALLE BALLE... I'M DANCING... OYEE DRAMEBAAZ STILL I'M SAYING THAT'S YOUR SELFIEE... DARE NOT TO SAY ANYTHING TO MY FRIZZ K BM PIC.. HUHH..



Happy reading

<font size="5">Chapter 3( He knew me inside out! )

"What do you see?" I challenged, half-expecting someone to jump out and tell me I'd been pranked. Because this guy was working my emotions like it was as easy as flipping a switch, and he looked at me as though he could see into every corner of my being.

"You're broken, and you depend on those looks to give you something you've been without. It doesn't work that way, little lady. And instead of purposely dropping those Skittles into my lap -"

"M&Ms, actually."



OMGGG!!! THIS IS JUST SUPER AMAZING... Hehehehehe... HE CAUGHT HER ALMOST... THAT SKITTLES LINE CRACKED ME... 😆 😆 ERRR!!! M&Ms


"Next time a simple hello' would suffice."


I swallowed a lump in my throat as I replied, "That's not true."

"Which part?"


Waiting for me to respond, he cocked his head to the side and settled his eyes on my lips. A part of me wondered if he'd cut the short distance and just kiss me, because lord knows he looked like he wanted to ravage every inch of me.

And dare or no dare, I needed that bloody kiss like a pauper needed money.


AGAIN BANG ON!!! UFF UFF AWESOME DIALOGUE... NEEDED THAT BLOODY KISS LIKE A PAUPER NEEDED MONEY... LOL.. BM YOU'RE SO CUTE MUUUAAAHHH... PAR LIL DARAAWNEE TOO... I THINK THESE LINES ARE WRITTEN BY ANGIE... JUST A GUESS... BUT WOW IT'S FREAKING SUPERRBBB


"Who are you?" I breathed out in wonder. I'd never dare ask a question like that before, but, damn, I was in a trance and wasn't thinking straight.

He licked his lip slowly, and something dark passed through his eyes. "Someone that's no good for you, beauty."

The thing which he did now was only igniting the fire inside me. I guarantee you he is doing this on purpose because the glint in his eyes tells me that he is liking the effect he has over me.

I swallowed an even bigger lump. "What's that supposed to mean?"

"It means it would do you no good to know."


GOSHHH!!! WHAT'S THIS GUY'S MOTTO... DAMN HE'S SO MIND BLOWING.
IS HE TRYING TO SHOW HER MIRROR... THEY SAY NAA EYE'S ARE REFLECTION OF HEART... HUUHHH... LIKE THAT... YAIIYEEE... IT'S AMAZING TO WITNESS EQUAL DEBATE... UFF KUDOS TO YOU BOTH MY LIL BARBIE'S



"Why?"

"Your world is too safe."


I inched a little closer to his face. "What's so unsafe about yours?" his hot breathe fanned over my face while my nostrils were filled with the rich aroma of his cologne. I saw that he was starring deep into my eyes borring his chocolate browns one inside mine as if he was trying to find out some answers in them.

"You don't want to know."

"Maybe I do."


He just stared back at me. I felt a tremor run down my spine. A tight feeling emerged in my chest, and my mind screamed to back away - that I was being drawn into a web I didn't want to get stuck to.

He was dangerous. I didn't know how I knew that, I just did. And my naivety made it all the more thrilling. I yearned for excitement in my life. Maybe I just landed on it.


JEEZZ... ISN'T HE WAY TOO MYSTERIOUS AND TRAPPING GUY... HE IS CONVEYING HER THROUGH HIS EYES ONLY TO STAY AWAY FROM HIM... WHAT HE IS COVERING OR WHO IS HE... SO MANY QUESTIONS.. IS HE SOME UNDER WORLD TYPES YA KOI CRIME BRANCH... UFF... SILLY ME DON'T KNOW WHY THESE Q'S ARE COMING??


Disrupting our bizarre moment, the train came screeching to another halt. Realization dawned in his eyes as he moved away from me and looked over at our stop.

Then he stood up!

It was like being torn from the bubble we'd allowed ourselves in. Suddenly I remembered we were in a crowded space, and now he was going.

Panic flooded me. NO! I didn't want him to leave me.

"This is my stop," he said, looking down at me as he buttoned up the top of his jacket. "It was very nice chatting with you, little lady."

So that was it? No "what's your number, little lady?" Seriously?

SERIOUSLY?

I didn't respond to him, even though he waited briefly for one. When it was apparent my stunned ass had nothing to say, he shot me a nod and ambled off to the doors. I watched in despair as he stood within steps from leaving.

"You didn't kiss him!" hissed Mukti into my ear.


YOU KNOW WHAT... HERE I FELT A PANG IN MY CHEST THINKING THAT THEIR LITTLE CONVOS CAME TO AN END ABRUPTLY WITH THE SCREECH OF TRAIN... Huuhh... IT'S REALLY TOUGH TO LET GO OUR INTEREST... BE IT THING'S YA HUMAN YA WHATEVER BUT IT'S REALLY MADE US SO MISER.. I FELT THE SAME FOR HER.. FORGET IT... AGAIN MUKKU IS SAVIOUR.. SHE REMEMBERED NANDU ABOUT DARE. UFF...


My eyes widened. Skank was right.

Without thinking, I stood up and took off after him, carelessly shoving aside the people in my way. He couldn't walk out of my life. I wouldn't let him. He stepped off the train just as I grabbed the sleeve of his jacket. Startled, he looked back. His eyes widened when they met mine.

"I forgot something," I breathlessly said, standing on the threshold of the train.

"What was that -" I cut him off with a kiss. My hand gripped his collar as I pressed my lips harshly against his. It was a quick - yet long somehow - meeting of the lips that made my heart race and my body tingle. This... this felt different somehow.

To my surprise, he kissed back, moving his soft lips over mine with a lot more delicacy than me. He tasted of mint and all male, and I would have done anything to slip my tongue into his mouth. Dammit, why didn't I?

I pulled away and smiled.

Wow.

Un-f**king-believable.

"What's your name?" he suddenly asked. The emotion on his face conveyed an urgency to know. It made my heart constrict and then explode.

"Nandini," I answered just as I stepped back and let the doors close between us...


YOU BITCHIEE YOU MAKE THEM KISS WOW... MUUUAAAHHH.. FIRST MEET CAN NOT BE MORE MEMORABLE THAN THIS LITTLE LIP LOCK... THANK GOD SHE GAINED HER SENSE'S AND SHOVED ALL PASSENGERS AND MADE HER WAY TO DOOR'S TO FINISH HER DARE OR RATHER SAY TO OPEN HER NEW WAY TO REACH HIM... GOSHHH.. HOW THE HELL SHE FORGET TO ASK HIS NAME??... NEVER MIND THE LITTLE MOMENTS THEY SHARED IS ENOUGH TO ATTRACT THEM AGAIN TOWARDS EACH OTHER... IT'S AWESOME BLOSSOM TROSSOM...

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How's it? I hope you all will like it and plss this is only part A, i have to still give part B but i will give it now directly on...
Nai! Aise kaise response accha aya toh hi update dungi warna Thenga! So now give me your precious comments and chamkao meri batisi! 😃

Love,

Frizz & Angela

PS:- plss buddy me for Pms

PPS:- Di chapter ka pura comment chahiye warna dekhna next chapter sabko pm karungi apko choddke 😉 </font></font>



BITCHY DAMN DOUBLE DAMN TO YOUUU!!!! HUHHH... IS THIS THE TIME TO STOP THE STORY... IT WAS SO INTERESTING... YOU HALTED THIS HERE... BM... MANAN K SAATH ACCHA NAHI KIYA NOT WITH READER'S TOO...URGHHH!!! CONTINUE SOON BM...
AND WHAT THIS DHAMKHEE...HUUHH...
ANGIE IS MY SIDE DARE NOT TO FORGET THAT
😡😡😡


THANKS FOR THE PM BITCHY
CONTINUE SOON
TAKE CARE
LOVE YOU

HUGGS AND KISSIIEESS
MUUUAAAHHH
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved the update...
manan are just awesome...
I'm wondering why manik is not good enough for nandu...
maybe next chapter would be manik's pov to see what his reaction was to the situation and meeting nandu...
cant wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work...
your words are just awesome...
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Posted: 9 years ago
this is quite interesting!..nandu is cute though she thinks she's bold but i find her quite innocent..,manik is mysterious..the last bit must be quite a vision with both kissing at the doors:)
nice update!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow!!!! wonderful kiss!!!! and the conversation part also solo good ..keep writing...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part b of this chapter??

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas_ArSha_MaNan

i love the stroyline
it is so gud
hahah
the
dare card idea..i just luvd it
it was fab...
now i have a good game to play withh my frnds...😆😉...thnks frizz and angela...
ohk back to story
i luv nandu...she is struly how do i say..umm...yaa ..fun bold badasss girl an i love that about her
and'mukti is mukti
and
manik...☺️..i know anybody v=can fall for his charm
i luved the way u showed nandu spilling her peanuts..wait deliberately spilling her peanuts on manik..naughty girl...i must say...😆
and
yaaa the convo btween in chappy 3 ...
i luved it...
hehehe it was so gud...it felt as if manik could read her thoughts...hhehehe...
and
ovieee
evn i was upset ...
i thought they wont kiss......<i have a gutter mind...😳
but
thanks too you they kisssed...hehhehe...haash

i just loved your story
you two are doing amazing...continue soon
and
plsss pm me

and
yaa do pm me your other works
cheers
jas



Thank u sweetie and yeah you do ha e a good game to play i and angela play it always and i don't think you can imagine our dares! 😉
My nandini will be the i-hate-u-i-will-tell-you-on-your-face types ba di so this is the way the chapters will continue ahead
Aree aise kaise kiss nahi karati , kiss nahi hota toh tumlog kaam ho kya maar maar ke halat kharab kar dete
Sure we have 2 stories
Are you mine forever
Baked with love
Do read them and tell us how they are
Hugs and wishes
🤗

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