Manan SS - *Kiss a Stranger*/ Chapter 3(B) updated / 24-5/^_^ - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gauriangel

I like this story..

It's different..

Did he hear the convo between Nandini and Mukti??



Thank u so much sweetie no babes i mentioned that after thier convo was over then Manik sat beside Nandini..
Hugs and wishes🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanichauhan1

Amazing work...lukin forward to read more and its just not appropriate but fanastic...keep up the work..loved it 😊 😛 😉



Hey shivani thanks you so much for the comment i like it! ..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: fireflies333

superb!!! The conversation part is awesome!!! giving compliments to each other in the form of flirt😊



Oh thank you so much cutie pie for the comment... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys rhank u so much for the lovely response i got from you all guys but the best comment was of Sneha Di so I am cheerfully dedicating this chapter to Sneha di aka meri BM 😉 agar me apki dramebaaz hu toh app bhi meri BM ho

Happy reading

Chapter 3( He knew me inside out! )

"What do you see?" I challenged, half-expecting someone to jump out and tell me I'd been pranked. Because this guy was working my emotions like it was as easy as flipping a switch, and he looked at me as though he could see into every corner of my being.

"You're broken, and you depend on those looks to give you something you've been without. It doesn't work that way, little lady. And instead of purposely dropping those Skittles into my lap -"

"M&Ms, actually."

"Next time a simple hello' would suffice."


I swallowed a lump in my throat as I replied, "That's not true."

"Which part?"


Waiting for me to respond, he cocked his head to the side and settled his eyes on my lips. A part of me wondered if he'd cut the short distance and just kiss me, because lord knows he looked like he wanted to ravage every inch of me.

And dare or no dare, I needed that bloody kiss like a pauper needed money.

"Who are you?" I breathed out in wonder. I'd never dare ask a question like that before, but, damn, I was in a trance and wasn't thinking straight.

He licked his lip slowly, and something dark passed through his eyes. "Someone that's no good for you, beauty."

The thing which he did now was only igniting the fire inside me. I guarantee you he is doing this on purpose because the glint in his eyes tells me that he is liking the effect he has over me.

I swallowed an even bigger lump. "What's that supposed to mean?"

"It means it would do you no good to know."

"Why?"

"Your world is too safe."


I inched a little closer to his face. "What's so unsafe about yours?" his hot breathe fanned over my face while my nostrils were filled with the rich aroma of his cologne. I saw that he was starring deep into my eyes borring his chocolate browns one inside mine as if he was trying to find out some answers in them.

"You don't want to know."

"Maybe I do."


He just stared back at me. I felt a tremor run down my spine. A tight feeling emerged in my chest, and my mind screamed to back away - that I was being drawn into a web I didn't want to get stuck to.

He was dangerous. I didn't know how I knew that, I just did. And my naivety made it all the more thrilling. I yearned for excitement in my life. Maybe I just landed on it.

Disrupting our bizarre moment, the train came screeching to another halt. Realization dawned in his eyes as he moved away from me and looked over at our stop.

Then he stood up!

It was like being torn from the bubble we'd allowed ourselves in. Suddenly I remembered we were in a crowded space, and now he was going.

Panic flooded me. NO! I didn't want him to leave me.

"This is my stop," he said, looking down at me as he buttoned up the top of his jacket. "It was very nice chatting with you, little lady."

So that was it? No "what's your number, little lady?" Seriously?

SERIOUSLY?

I didn't respond to him, even though he waited briefly for one. When it was apparent my stunned ass had nothing to say, he shot me a nod and ambled off to the doors. I watched in despair as he stood within steps from leaving.

"You didn't kiss him!" hissed Mukti into my ear.

My eyes widened. Skank was right.

Without thinking, I stood up and took off after him, carelessly shoving aside the people in my way. He couldn't walk out of my life. I wouldn't let him. He stepped off the train just as I grabbed the sleeve of his jacket. Startled, he looked back. His eyes widened when they met mine.

"I forgot something," I breathlessly said, standing on the threshold of the train.

"What was that -" I cut him off with a kiss. My hand gripped his collar as I pressed my lips harshly against his. It was a quick - yet long somehow - meeting of the lips that made my heart race and my body tingle. This... this felt different somehow.

To my surprise, he kissed back, moving his soft lips over mine with a lot more delicacy than me. He tasted of mint and all male, and I would have done anything to slip my tongue into his mouth. Dammit, why didn't I?

I pulled away and smiled.

Wow.

Un-f**king-believable.

"What's your name?" he suddenly asked. The emotion on his face conveyed an urgency to know. It made my heart constrict and then explode.

"Nandini," I answered just as I stepped back and let the doors close between us...


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How's it? I hope you all will like it and plss this is only part A, i have to still give part B but i will give it now directly on...
Nai! Aise kaise response accha aya toh hi update dungi warna Thenga! So now give me your precious comments and chamkao meri batisi! 😃

Love,

Frizz & Angela

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PPS:- Di chapter ka pura comment chahiye warna dekhna next chapter sabko pm karungi apko chodkechodke 😉


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Posted: 9 years ago
Gr888 update...loved ur story...
Update next part pretty soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyccc update
Toh finally nandu ne kiss kr hi diya...dare complet kr diya...pr manik ne apna name q nhi btayea...nandu ka jaan liya...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello there... Love the update... Aisa lag rha tha ki manik nandu ke thought padh rha tha he is very smart... Phele toh mujhe laga ki she didn't kiss him n then suddenly she kissed him superb..
Manik asked her name...n the convo between manan manik was full mysterious...suspense...

Waiting for the next part update soon eagerly waiting...

Looking forward to read more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
i love the stroyline
it is so gud
hahah
the
dare card idea..i just luvd it
it was fab...
now i have a good game to play withh my frnds...😆😉...thnks frizz and angela...
ohk back to story
i luv nandu...she is struly how do i say..umm...yaa ..fun bold badasss girl an i love that about her
and'mukti is mukti
and
manik...☺️..i know anybody v=can fall for his charm
i luved the way u showed nandu spilling her peanuts..wait deliberately spilling her peanuts on manik..naughty girl...i must say...😆
and
yaaa the convo btween in chappy 3 ...
i luved it...
hehehe it was so gud...it felt as if manik could read her thoughts...hhehehe...
and
ovieee
evn i was upset ...
i thought they wont kiss......<i have a gutter mind...😳
but
thanks too you they kisssed...hehhehe...haash

i just loved your story
you two are doing amazing...continue soon
and
plsss pm me

and
yaa do pm me your other works
cheers
jas
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Finally they kissed...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow amazg update...finally nandune kiss kiya...update the next chaptr soon dr & pm me pls

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