Manan SS - *Kiss a Stranger*/ Chapter 3(B) updated / 24-5/^_^ - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angelanadar087



Hey thank you so much sweetie i really loved your comment and yeah i am sure you will love the upcoming chapters ( Can you plss tell me your name as i don't know it or can i call you Di )
Hugs and wishes
🤗


My name is manasvi 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fab update
You penned it brilliantly
Loved manan convo
I felt something strange about manik
What was manik talking about
He was going and he asked her no.
Loved how she said I forgot something and kissed him
Manik too responded
How will they meet again
So curious to know
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow!!
they kissed..!!😃
loved it...
hope they meet again soon...
pls post the nxt 1 sooon...pls...
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Posted: 9 years ago
kkk tht was smthing intrsting n rockinggg...
i reallly lvd it...
thy both hv so mch inside thm...
tht i knw...
n the kiss...
tht ws wow... nandu ws rocking...
i lvd it awsm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello two little darlings...
Here s the new fan for your sweet n sexy story babies...
Suna hai aap bahut chota ho but tomantuc stuff bahut ache liktha ho... Very good n dis shows spirit of writer tat v shud b able to write anything n u both nailing it
Meri ek dost hai Sneha usne suggest kiya to read ur story but meh usse pehle hi pad liya... M glad m reading it now jus can't wait for chapters to unfold
Prologue was very good too much of suspense babies jus wow n awesome
Chapter-1 hehe very lovely mukti n nandu very naughty girls n superb they n their dare hehe jus wow n awesome hehe n nandu wanna become naughty hehe so lovely
Chapter-2 omg the way she s describing Manik s soo awesome evry bit of him awesome n lovely
Chapter-3 omg she kissed him n he know so much about her like in n out tats awesome n great... Jus wow n awesome n lovely... Hehe mukti rmbrd her uska dare thank god warna would have missed the kiss...
Jus wow chapters n awesome n lovely
Great going n meh badi hoon so I bless ki u both hav long way to go... God bless babies n all the very best m support s wid u guys...

Lots of love
Pravallika( can call me di if u wish too)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ohh.u ended..He just knows her name..
He didn't took her digits..

Pls give us second part..This one was too short...
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks for pm.dear

Sneha let me know about your story dear...

And it's a wonderful story. .I must say. .

Every chapter getting more and more interesting. .

Thanks for sharing this amazing update.

Stay blessed dear.



Thanks.




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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angelanadar087

Hey guys rhank u so much for the lovely response i got from you all guys but the best comment was of Sneha Di so I am cheerfully dedicating this chapter to Sneha di aka meri BM 😉 agar me apki dramebaaz hu toh app bhi meri BM ho

Happy reading

Chapter 3( He knew me inside out! )

"What do you see?" I challenged, half-expecting someone to jump out and tell me I'd been pranked. Because this guy was working my emotions like it was as easy as flipping a switch, and he looked at me as though he could see into every corner of my being.

"You're broken, and you depend on those looks to give you something you've been without. It doesn't work that way, little lady. And instead of purposely dropping those Skittles into my lap -"

"M&Ms, actually."

"Next time a simple hello' would suffice."


I swallowed a lump in my throat as I replied, "That's not true."

"Which part?"


Waiting for me to respond, he cocked his head to the side and settled his eyes on my lips. A part of me wondered if he'd cut the short distance and just kiss me, because lord knows he looked like he wanted to ravage every inch of me.

And dare or no dare, I needed that bloody kiss like a pauper needed money.

"Who are you?" I breathed out in wonder. I'd never dare ask a question like that before, but, damn, I was in a trance and wasn't thinking straight.

He licked his lip slowly, and something dark passed through his eyes. "Someone that's no good for you, beauty."

The thing which he did now was only igniting the fire inside me. I guarantee you he is doing this on purpose because the glint in his eyes tells me that he is liking the effect he has over me.

I swallowed an even bigger lump. "What's that supposed to mean?"

"It means it would do you no good to know."

"Why?"

"Your world is too safe."


I inched a little closer to his face. "What's so unsafe about yours?" his hot breathe fanned over my face while my nostrils were filled with the rich aroma of his cologne. I saw that he was starring deep into my eyes borring his chocolate browns one inside mine as if he was trying to find out some answers in them.

"You don't want to know."

"Maybe I do."


He just stared back at me. I felt a tremor run down my spine. A tight feeling emerged in my chest, and my mind screamed to back away - that I was being drawn into a web I didn't want to get stuck to.

He was dangerous. I didn't know how I knew that, I just did. And my naivety made it all the more thrilling. I yearned for excitement in my life. Maybe I just landed on it.

Disrupting our bizarre moment, the train came screeching to another halt. Realization dawned in his eyes as he moved away from me and looked over at our stop.

Then he stood up!

It was like being torn from the bubble we'd allowed ourselves in. Suddenly I remembered we were in a crowded space, and now he was going.

Panic flooded me. NO! I didn't want him to leave me.

"This is my stop," he said, looking down at me as he buttoned up the top of his jacket. "It was very nice chatting with you, little lady."

So that was it? No "what's your number, little lady?" Seriously?

SERIOUSLY?

I didn't respond to him, even though he waited briefly for one. When it was apparent my stunned ass had nothing to say, he shot me a nod and ambled off to the doors. I watched in despair as he stood within steps from leaving.

"You didn't kiss him!" hissed Mukti into my ear.

My eyes widened. Skank was right.

Without thinking, I stood up and took off after him, carelessly shoving aside the people in my way. He couldn't walk out of my life. I wouldn't let him. He stepped off the train just as I grabbed the sleeve of his jacket. Startled, he looked back. His eyes widened when they met mine.

"I forgot something," I breathlessly said, standing on the threshold of the train.

"What was that -" I cut him off with a kiss. My hand gripped his collar as I pressed my lips harshly against his. It was a quick - yet long somehow - meeting of the lips that made my heart race and my body tingle. This... this felt different somehow.

To my surprise, he kissed back, moving his soft lips over mine with a lot more delicacy than me. He tasted of mint and all male, and I would have done anything to slip my tongue into his mouth. Dammit, why didn't I?

I pulled away and smiled.

Wow.

Un-f**king-believable.

"What's your name?" he suddenly asked. The emotion on his face conveyed an urgency to know. It made my heart constrict and then explode.

"Nandini," I answered just as I stepped back and let the doors close between us...


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How's it? I hope you all will like it and plss this is only part A, i have to still give part B but i will give it now directly on...
Nai! Aise kaise response accha aya toh hi update dungi warna Thenga! So now give me your precious comments and chamkao meri batisi! 😃

Love,

Frizz & Angela

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PPS:- Di chapter ka pura comment chahiye warna dekhna next chapter sabko pm karungi apko chodkechodke 😉


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
Plz update the next part soon
And plz pm me tooo
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sunset17

Gr888 update...loved ur story...

Update next part pretty soon



Thank you so much sweetie i will update soon enough...

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