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simkapoor

@simkapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#691

oh god di...
was waiting waiting n waiting ...
thnk god u updated...
lvvvdd the update...
omg
tht ws wild...
completely...
ws waiting fr exs ...
pls update tht too...
n srry fr delay..
nt well so thts y late...
see u soonn...
tc..
lv u loads...
u rocked ...

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harshadamhadgut

@harshadamhadgut

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Posted: 9 years ago

#692

Woahhh!!!!! That was freakinggg hottt! Full of manan! Gosh u nailed it yaar!

Manik!y he behaves like a jerk always! Ohh god pls make them realise their love for each other!!!

Nandini's bold move gt me goosebumps!manik had to give up :P haha it was really fun to see that part!

But then he left her and went :/ he's one difficult fellow manh! Now what will happen! Waiting for further parts!!!

Pls post ex's!! Desperately waiting for it! This was super hot! amazinggg!!!! :)

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Arunima

@jesse93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#693

Wondering ke what'll happened when she will be pregnant and whatever deal they have will get over, kaise survive karenge dono without eachother.

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 9 years ago

#694

Omg he is really a monster.

Waiting to know the reason behind nandini choice of marrying Mr.malhotra

Continue soon.

Excited for next part

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Anushi

@anushi3012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#695

Thank you for this passionate update!!
This was a chapter where we did not miss so much intensity from both Manik and Nandini's side!!
Their actions, their feelings, their conversation!!!
Each of them depicted how they really hate how much they love each other.
Even if we did not get any confession, we can see how both cannot bear each others company and being separate at the same time!!

Well, I guess Manik will feel guilty, or not..
Maybe he will be by her side after she wake up..
How will Nandini feel about it?
Many questions awaits for the next chapter.

Will be waiting for your next update eagerly!!!

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Vandyandy

@Vandyandy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#696

Hi Sumana

UFFF !!!! FREAKING HAWWTT .

AAG LAGA DI TUMNE SUMI.

YA YA ONLY N ONLY U CAN DO THIS WITH MANAN .

SRSLY I'M STILL TRYING TO GULP MY SALIVA DOWN MY THROAT..

MANAN FIGHTING WITH WORDS, LETTING THE OTHER ONE KNOW HOW WRONG HE/SHE IS.

FOR ONCE I DID THOUGHT MANIK WAS GETTING AFFECTED BY NANDU...

SH!!T ... HE WAS ACTING ...AMD THEN MIMICKING HER ...

Waaooo!!!! NANDU BHI KHUCH KAM NAHI DEKHAYA HAI TUMNE SUMI.

HER THAT MOVE WAS NOT EXPECTED, BUT CAN WE PREDICT HER.. NAAH!!!!!!

SEDUCING MANIK DOES NOTHING TO HIM IT ONLY GIVES TROUBLE TO NANDU, SHE CALLED FOR IT..

BUT MANIK WAS TOO HARSH ON HER YAAR... COMEON SHE IS A GIRL AFTERALL..

EVERY TIME WHEN HE FORCES HIMSELF ON HER SHE MUST BE IN PAIN N BODY FOR OBVIOUS WILL BE SORE..

HE CAN AT LEAST TRY TO BE A LITTLE SMOOTH.

TOO WILD TO HANDLE IT..

WHY PUNISHMENT ???? HOW RUDE... GOSH KITNA TADPE HOGI NANDU ... BECHARI ...

SHE DID ONLY TO SEE IF HE ACTUALLY MEANT WHAT HE SAID EARLIER..

BY NOT LOOKING TWICE IF SHE STANDS N***D IN FRONT OF HIM... THATS WHAT SHE WAS TRYING TO SEE...

EK AADMI KO AGAR USKI MARDANGINI PAR UNGLI UTHAYE TOH WOH SEH NAHI SAKTE...

HMMM !!!! NANDU WAS CRYING ... I THOUGHT HE MIGHT FREE HER HANDS... BUT NO AGAIN U PROVED ME WRONG.

SOMETHING HAS HAPPENED IN THEIR PAST WHILE WORKING TOGETHER AND THATS WHY ALL THIS IS HAPPENING...

MAY BE THEY WERE IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER BUT COULDN'T SAY IT...

VERY EXCITED TO KNOW HOW U MAKE THEM FALL FOR EACH OTHER SUMANA ..

YES CHOTU UPDATE OF EX'S WOULD DO ...

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shravya

@shravya.kr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#697

Okay !! This was just wow wow!! How can some1 love each other so much and at the same time hurt and hate each other...we keep an expectation about the chapter...and u always give something we would not ever have taught...hats off...absolutely hats off to ur writing!!

Loving every bit of the story...though it is dark!! Kudos to you the way u present the characters...so realistic and the emotions can be felt as we read through the update!! Keep it up girl...u are blessed!! Have a great week ahead!! And please keep the updates coming...:))

Edited by shravya.kr - 9 years ago

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Pravallika69

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Posted: 9 years ago

#698

Omg manik s really a monster like seriously too much of ego ad harshness... I really request u one thing pls give Manik pov wanna kw wat he actually thinks only nandu pov jus giving her idea wat she think about manik thought but pls try n give manik pov... Jus awesome update they try being soft for a minute n wat evr they atlast they land up on bed shit but I really feel bad for nandu bichari she have to bear dis monster... But wats the reason she married tat old man... Jus so many questions pls answer them soon waiting badle...
Sizzling hot update specially Manik too much hard n monster n nandu best at seducing him jus wow completely different now waiting next morning kya hoga... I seriously hope nandu behaves rude wid him n stay strong instead of jus falling weak when he comes close instead punch him hard tab usse samaj ayega waiting pls give manik pov

Lots of love
Pravallika

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Nainasadhwani

@Nainasadhwani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#699

Thanku for update. ...

Omg...it was hot and bold update

Kaise likha...bht mushkil hue hogi...

It was superb update...it was actully a night 2 remember. ...muje kyu daubt ho raha hai ess night kai karan hi nandni pregnant ho jaye...hopes r high...gusse mai hai handcuff hai medicine nahi lai payr bul jaye...and u knw...or may bi sometimes medicine dnt work its nt give u 100% guarantee...

Bt muje yea bi laga ki may bi ab nandni ka past revel hoga manik ko but abi bi nahi...may bi ek barr wo pregnant hoti hai ya usse baby hota hai tb hi shyad dono ek dusre kai close aayenge nt only physically bt emotionally...and then dheerr dherre they will understand each other...bt ri8 knw they relly knw how to instigated each other. ...how to hate each other...how to say nasty things to each other. ..ooo this is getting interesting day by day...just a thought of them with a baby and caring for him/her...awkward movement...while caring baby...ufff...I am getting excited. ...oo hiw will I manage...till next update. ..plz bich mai chotu sa promo dai diya karo...😳