MaNan SS//Dirty Deals//LINK for Thread 2 on Pg 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Okay who remembers the dark story I was talking about...who would b interested??😉

Umm I donno if you can exactly call it a dark story but yeah it is not d goody goody ones...the characters are flawed, selfish and dangerous too.


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A chotu intro...


Nandini M Malhotra - The MD of Synox constructions. A 24 year shrewd and ambitious woman, mature for her age and knows how to twist things for her benefit.

Manik Malhotra - The 28 year old Site Manager of Synox's most prestigious project. He is handsome, charming and street smart. A guy who you can't afford to take on face value.


Sneak peek


I descended the stairs looking out for someone but it was pretty late and all the helps had gone back to the staff quarter in the backyard of the mansion.

I huffed annoyingly and went inside the kitchen without switching the lights on. I just needed a bottle of chilled water from the fridge. I would have made myself a drink otherwise but right now it was only chilled water that could calm my raging senses. I switched my phone on for the nth time to check if there was a call or a message from them but no these morons loved to test my patience.

"They won't call...in fact they are not in a condition to..", his sudden voice was enough to run shivers down my body.

I so knew who he was but still prayed to it be a day dream I mean the day dream of the nights at that hour. I couldn't see his face just his contour was visible vaguely. In a swift move he he came forward and took the phone away from my hand and put it on holding up adjacent to his face for me to admire his angelically devilish face.

"I thought you were a little smart...at least as smart as your height but you disappoint me Nandini...very...those goons...bad move...very bad move", his face swayed close to mine pretty dangerously.

"I don't know what you are talking about", the best excuse now was ignorance. I wasn't afraid of him though but it was kind of embarrassing to get caught.

I quickly turned back to open the fridge and pull out a bottle of water and sipped in twice.

"Never mind I am always there to explain", he dropped the phone on the floor and grabbed my hand and scooped me over his shoulders before I knew and could protest.

"Manik leave me I said", I squealed on his back hitting him with the bottle in my hand while he quickened his pace and took the same stairs up to my room. Yes that was the place where he explained me everything like literally.



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Okay so that was a chotu jhalak guys...more to come...this story would be explicit and at times objectionable may be at times so read at your own risk n don't blame me. Its a limited series for now rest I will decide later. Lastly I don't know if we can aptly call it a dark story ummm may be a grey one.

Chapter 6 - The Time Spent Together on Pg 136



Thread 2 - https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4630581#p133922475
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roops14 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one but it's a rqst don't kill manik or nandini...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ohkk.

that was looking super interesting.

u know like literally interesting. .

would love to read that. .

waiting for it...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Whatever u erite i m gonna read it dear m ur fan 😃
Continue asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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M always glad to read your stories... u r my favourt writr in the forum...i just knw if its ur story its going to be intrstng...cant wait to read this one...update soon will be waitng
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Will love to read it,
continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow dark stories and not so dark stories
I just love to read..
Good start...
Concept is very interesting
It's like Nandu sent goon's.. Wow I am excited to know more.. Somewhere I've a feeling like Nandu is here playing on screen Nyonika's role
Uff uff... Want to know what happens next
Continue soon
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!! New stry...damn awesum dear..
seems interesting.Lvd d concpt so much..
a rare concpt of dark stry...
sneak peak was suprb...It really rckd...
Nandu send goons behind manik...
Manan r couples...So much confusin yaar...
Do continue dear..Waitin 4 first prts...
If possible pls pm me also dear...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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I do not read dark stories.
But since u said it's not that...
Count me in.
It really seems interestingI 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting..
Very much interesting...

NANDINI M MALHOTRA
( they are married, she is owner and he is manager of the company)
Bahut alag hai...Acha hai..Nandini is boss😆

But where he is taking her upstairs..I am sure he is boss there...😉

Kabse start karogi. .
Simultaneously with ex's or you will end that and then start with this..

I am so happy..you writing new story...dances🤪🥳


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