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neeharika__

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Posted: 9 years ago

#461

kyu dard hai itna ine isq main😆

luving it

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Rumanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#462

kuch toh hai in dono ke darmiyaan

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deepanksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#463

Nice update
But what took my heart away was the mention of dehradun as it is my home town
U just brought thousands of memories back
Update soon

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Pravallika69

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Posted: 9 years ago

#464

Omg dis s awesome hehe Mr Malhotra himself s sending them to spend time wow n awesome jus wow.. But y nandu wanna take pills matlab she does not want to give birth to a child... Shayad uske baad the deal will end pata nahi waiting eagerly to kw... Manik n nandu talks in car awww bichar they struggled alot... Manik s so hurt tat nandu married for money shayad he love her soo much... May b nandu too but usne yeh kyun kiya shud wait further I think... Jus wow n after hating her so much he still cares for her awesome n wow... Lovely update... N I jus can't wait to see aab kya hoga when they reach dehradun n spend sometime together jus superb...
Awww manik gonna b gentle on her jus wow waiting for next update pls update soon

Thanks for pm
Lots of love
Pravallika

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singh.man

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Posted: 9 years ago

#465

More fun... n of course more things to be cleared..it is turning to be so so damn interesting...
all the best to all the three malhotras.. have an eventful vacation

God bless

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shubha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#466

nandini comes across as very shrewd..they way she tricked manik to leave the car so that she could talk to the lawyer was too good..too bad the lawyer didn't reveal anything...i kinda feel sorry for her..she didn't seem to get much out of her marriage for convenience ..sometimes i feel its mr. malhotra who's the craftiest of the three..the way he is using both of them to fulfill his demands...nandini doesn't seem to have much say either in the business or in the relationship..nor in her own life..whatever made her agree to this marriage seriously?..for someone's who's so determined to get what she wants she doesn't seem to be pretty smart about it:)

the last bit was really cute...i like how u keep the caring and love between them in small gestures like him getting the ointment for her...inspite of the sordidness of their relationship...the fact that inspite of the purely business kinda deal between manan..these two can't help but get their emotions involved in it:)

i also found ironical that while when drunk, people normally behave in a harsh or inhuman manner here alcohol seems to reverse effect on manik..it has woken uphis softer side...lols..i guess that is his true feelings for nandini then:)

the trip sounds promising among other things...though nandu is cheating by taking the pills but i am glad she's doing it..whatever her intentions behind it, it will be a crime to bring an innocent child in this mess..though i am sure it wilh happen one day..how long can she fool mr. malhotra anyway(:

fab fab update..u are doing a wonderful job..trust me!!

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ky2manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#467

Awesome update
Really interesting
Nandini is like this because of her past
Update soon

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Tadibaaaz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#468

Awesome

I like your stories because they are different

Love it

Their past explains why they are lije this but i will wait for the story to unfold

Its nice to see bot have dark characters

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za90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#469

Amazing
You penned it so beautifully

Waiting for the trip
Hope for some awesome moments

Continue soon

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HappySoul-4va

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Posted: 9 years ago

#470

Ohh great LOrd...they both gone through terrible pasts...

So Nandu has decided to do anything to get Money, they she got the job and how come Mr.Malhotra married her..I mean when himself knw that he can't get his hire at this age..

Wait is Nandini his first wife...or...Don';t knw but will wait...

Also, Manik hates Nandu coz he finds her Gold digger..its just that or he actually have feelings for her which hen't aware of...

Nandini likes his warmth...hmmm and many more...she is on pills.., it means the marriage is on contract basis...once she will give him a baby, she will be out of this position, that's why she is on pills...oke she missed one, you gave us a hint on it...so...let's see how the equations are gonna change...

But why he chosen Manik to be the one, coz of the Malhotra TAGGG...lol.

as usual..an amazing concept...keep it up girl👏