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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#321

Awesome update

And it's totally a different story

Superb update

Fab update

Loved it

Loved the update

Waiting for the next part

Update the next part soon

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thamannamanan

@thamannamanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#322

completely difffernet track

anyways nice update

difficult to c manik n nndini like this but its ok

hope story will some interesting twists nturns n make it beautiful

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momy290691

@momy290691

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Posted: 9 years ago

#323

So much clear now nd nice awesome update tnxxx plzzz post soon

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neetamandaliya

@neetamandaliya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#324

Wow...

Different story. ..

But she is not married to manik.. . 😭

N they are not in love.. . 😲

This is just a contract..

Yes of course the update was awesome... 😆

Please update soon Ya 😭

Please please please... 😛

N yes I like ur concept.. . 😉

Take care.. .

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aarvi-manan

@aarvi-manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#325

ohhh god...2nd chapter me to dhamake hi dhamake ho gye dear...bahot mza aaya...keep it up...n plz i want next update soon...

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shubha

@GetbusyLiving

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Posted: 9 years ago

#326

so by 'your husband won't be happy" manik was actually threatening her in the first chapter..man this is so sordid..

from the past story it seems..there was always attraction between manan till she gets married to the boss malhotra..nandini seems to be a milder version of nyonika here..lols..its clear why she agreed to marry the boss but i wonder what made mr. malhotra marry nandu...atleast from the chapter he doesn't seem to be attracted to her or anything..actually he seems more interested in manik than anything else:)..esp the way he touched him and manik got uncomfortable much to nandini's delight:)...and him choosing manik to impregnate nandu for a heir is so complicated to say the least:)

i liked the part where u wrote manik and nandini are two ends of the deals..and there is actually no pact between the two..what they actually have between them cannot be expressed in simpler words:)

i feel manik is more angry on losing her to mr. malhotra than just jealous of her power the way nandini thinks..nandini seems to have love-hate relationship with him but why did she go to such an extent to harm him is still confusing..i guess u will reveal it in the further updates

this is one complicated story...all the best with this..its looks a very difficult concept to write on but u did an amazing work so far..can't wait to read further..i am already feeling sorry for the baby which will come right in the middle of this mess of a deal(:

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faii44

@faii44

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Posted: 9 years ago

#327

he will definitely marry her in future
well, again an awesome update.. story is getting interesting .. such a different concept.. '
how you always manage to come out with such different ideas... God bless you .. may you write more n more n more... Love to read ur storiess..

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anika mehjaben nahin

@mehjaben_nahin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#328

Oh my God diii...like ssly ..tumhe itni awesome ideas aate kaha se hai...so nandini's husband is...shit koi samjha bhi ya nehi...but its going awesome one hell passionate story of manan..ohooo..period main sex...yr manik toh kafi rough nikla..aur ye nandini ki kya hai..full of mystery...1.why she married to tht...
2. Isko manik ki bina neend nehi aati...wah bhai wah...ye accha hai...sab kuch manik ke sath hi hai
I knw ghatiya comments..but exam ki tnsn hai...plzz bear kar lena..love u ..byesss

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Suma1973

@Suma1973

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Posted: 9 years ago

#329

I have already hit the like button so you know I liked the update. It's Lil different but curiosity generating. Some where I expected t Manik to be Nandini s husband, but with Sumana always things go beyond my imagination so I stopped anticipating ur stories u always surprise me. We could identify our ManaN with ISM n even ManaN of LDL but ManaN off DD seem to be it different specialy Nandu, though Manik is somewhat similar Nandu seems to be completely different but kudos to u for again making an interest story( I couldn't think another word but just interesting is under statement, )Generally I always luv ISM on top then EAW. But past week I wanted DD s update first same goes this week also. Thanks for not giving synopsis, though I get impatient to know what would happen nxt., I would love the story to unfold at its pace. Please keep continuing both the stories. God bless you take care.