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Posted: 9 years ago
I love NanMuk!
For the OS series, I have two suggestions.
1. You can show the relationship between Nandini and each member of Fab 5 and Navya of course.
2. If ^^ that seems boring, then you can MaNan in different ways. Like a hot boss and a clumsy klutz, an emotional wreck and strong hearted boy, or even Manik as a possessive bodyguard (personally, I've never come across this concept, so I'd love to read that!). And in this way, it won't be necessary for you to bring Fab 5 in every OS, you can even bring one character as per the requirements of the story!
Just hoping for a perfect balance romcom, I guess! ^_^
Hope this helped!
Love, Pari:)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DWJensenackles

I love NanMuk!

For the OS series, I have two suggestions.
1. You can show the relationship between Nandini and each member of Fab 5 and Navya of course.
2. If ^^ that seems boring, then you can MaNan in different ways. Like a hot boss and a clumsy klutz, an emotional wreck and strong hearted boy, or even Manik as a possessive bodyguard (personally, I've never come across this concept, so I'd love to read that!). And in this way, it won't be necessary for you to bring Fab 5 in every OS, you can even bring one character as per the requirements of the story!
Just hoping for a perfect balance romcom, I guess! ^_^
Hope this helped!
Love, Pari:)


Thnk pari!
Will defo think over it if I could pull these out perfectly!

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mishshergill


Actually nice!
Lemme see if i could do it!
Thnx for suggestion D


I am glad you liked..
Cat I am in love with this series..
I and my bff are also so much like this..
It it actually very close to my heart...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey u can atleast complete in 5 more parts
Showing
Manik jealous by bringing harshad or abhimanyu

Sooo that abhi can later pair up with mukti

Wats say
Or nandu jealous by bringing soha

N tgen manan romance thoda more

N tgen they become together forever hamesha Hayeee 😳

Then epilogue m baby girl of manan born

Wats say

Do pm me next part pretty pretty please

Vidhi
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Posted: 9 years ago
No suggestion sorry dea..
m a complete lazy ass..
mind only concentrate on food.. :p..

laughed n felt little bad when u wrote expect some suggestion.. :( :(

hmm saw many readers gave suggestion use any which u like
m Wese b u r complete fun writer
jo b likthi ho ekdam masttt ...
fun to read...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Show us Manan's bond after marriage how they fall in love,their moments but with ur writing skills with more crazy and funny stuff. And also add team up of evil twins to tease manan especially manik.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hmm ... Idk what to suggest u abt the further updates ... Maybe u can jst show their flashback moments ... Matlb lyk this each moment will be a shot nd u can continue this OS ... Lyk after marriage toh there r many awesome moments na where the couple get to know each other more ... Spend tym with each other n have fun ... U can show them all ... Bt plz sirf romance hi mat likhna ... Make it hilarious too lyk the last parts ... U know love n laughter, hand in hand ... Too much romance it difficult to digest ...
I know my whatever bakwaas suggestion is nt helpful ... N u can't call it suggestion also ... He he he ... Sry ... Poor in suggesting part ... Bt whatever u write will b waiting fr it ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yaar kash me likh pati...
But hands up m not at all a writer...
N I don't have any thought as such so that I could suggest uh...
Sorry...
And about ending it...
Naah...
I like it yaar...
But d ultimate decision is yours...
I'll b waiting fr d next update...
Luv uh...
Bii.
AVNEET... (AVI...)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Hiee peepz!

First of all, THANKYOU GUYS! For making these os series mega for not only me but tanya too! Srsly your comments were soo killer that i used them a weapon to tease her till death!!! Thanx for that actually!! They gave mere so brownies point moments I made a point then itself to thank you people for that...

Secondly, guys! I really don't have any specific ideas for series further they are mostly 'NanMuk'
If you guys have something or some situations or whatever you want me to write it's an open request os update!

If there is non by your side, then I will be updating and epilogue and ending the series by tommorow!

Stay happy stay blessed
Mishshergill


Hey girl, Thanx for giving us this os series
Plzzz dont end up it soon and my suggestion is like the ppl have already given u some more and more teasing part
It could be manik making nandini jealous by bonding up with mukti or soha and Nandini showing tigress avatar
Seriously that will be worth seeing
Or nandini making manik jealous
But dont forget to show their practical exposure of which she was reading theory
As manik himself promised her that they will have IT as soon as Nandini wants which she wants desperately
In this also you can show up manik teasing nandini by not doing anything and Nandini first sulking then end up seducing manik
Wow nandini seducing manik will be extravagant
U know on a song like "ye mera diwanapan hai" 😉
Plz plz show something like this
Edited by divyagarg - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
SHOT 4

TAUBHA MEIN VYAAH KARKE PACHTAYA!

"Hello!" Said nandini as soon as her call was answered.

"Hmmm!!!" Mukti replied with a huge singing 'hmm' as she answered the call without looking at the caller id while being completely engrossed in her work.

"What 'hmm'! Are u too dumb to speak!" Nandini almost screamed being irriataed which instantly made mukti roll her eyes sensing either she is in her THAT phase of the month or someone just screwed up with her moods.

"What happened woken on the wrong side of the bed or what!" Mukti said casually getting back to her sketches just then something hit her mind and she spoke in horror " are you pregnant!"

"WHAT! No silly, kuch bhi!" Said Nandini sighing out and throwing herself on the bed.

"Arrey! It has been quiet a time that you got married. Kuch toh karle!" Mukti taunted Nandini while biting her inner check to stop the chuckle to escape.

"Dost hai... Dost banke reh, risteydaar banne ki zarurat nhi hai!" Said a pissed off Nandini making Mukti laugh out loud.

"I can completely understand how these risteydaarz can be a pain in ass! Thanx to Indian television of saas bahu sagas!" Mukti said sympathetically and both broke in fits of laughter.

"Bae! I told you... I so told you, not to get into this marriage shit. You remember the day when ur roka happened and i wasn't informed after things were done...!"

"Hey! We just went to see the guy and Donno how and when things just happened and i seriously wanted to speak to you and i did that too-"

"Wowowow!!! Breath woman!" Mukti said " i know i know... But seriously i was angry but more than that i was faking about it. But i sooo loved when cabir came in the scene. We both made made such drama out of it!" Mukti laughed out at cabirs reactions. Cabir is muktis and nandini's common friend. most of the bromances ignite by shared sutta (cigarette) over a chai and chacha Choudhary was truly applicable for three of them.

"Yeah seriously! I myself doubted no actually regretting the alliance." Said nandini shaking her head.


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Flashback!

"What yaar guys! What was so urgent that you called me so early! I missed my gym today!" Said grumpy cabir as soon as he reached our table.

"You dint tell him yet!" Mukti accusingly said narrowing her eyes to which Nandini smiled nervously.

"Dude! When did you joined the gym?" Nandini asked to which cabir said proudly " i joined day day before yesterday and it is second day today that i missed it!" Ended cabir grumpily to which nandini chuckled but mukti was still staring at nandini.

" huh! Subha subha bula liya hashtag i hate my best friend at nandini08!" Spoke cabir while tying it.

"What is he doing!" Nandini asked with confused shocked eyes.

"Saale ne 2 din naya twitter account khola hai!" Mukti told nandini and both shared a laugh.

"O hello! I got 7 followers... Show some respect man!" Said cabir to which both laughed and nodded their head in agreement.

"Acha! Are you gonna tell him or should i!" Mukti said sternly.

"Ohky! " nandini took a deep breath ad said " The news is i am getting married!"

Cabirs fingers stilled on his phone screen and he stared at Nandini as if he just swallowed a lizard.

"Are you insane!" Almost screamed cabir.

"Oh! There is more to it bro! We just missed out her roka ceremony last night!" Mukti said sarcastically which was more like someone hit him where it pains a lot.

"What the f**k!" Said cabir and soon bursted out in tears " you traitor..."
before he goes uncontrollable mukti tried to came him down.

"#ijustlostabff" typed cabir and posted it and cried again cursing his fate and nandini.

"Oye! Kuch nhi Hota... Calm down we will handle it!" Said Mukti comforting crying Cabir or probably faking tears to which Nandini rolled her eyes and she raged out qt Nandini.

"Tujhe pata hai na jabse behaati pregnent hui hai, kitna upset rehta hai bichara... Dosti todhne ke liye yahi time mila tha teko?" Said angry mukti accusingly to which nandini dint know how to react.

The biggest catch thing is the first and the most strongest reason of how cabir and mukti became friends and ao strongly bonded because of adam levine and behaati.

You must be thinking how can celebs bond them. Let me tell you if mukti is crazy about adam levine then cabir is no less that that for behaati. And the brownie point is apparently, behaati is married to adam so they both have been making plans how to get meet them and many more crazy stuff.


"Areey! How the hell my marriage is related to our friendship... We will be friends even after marriage."

"Really! We don't have problem with your wedding but by the change in you!" Cabir said.

"Stop over reacting guys!" Said nandini out of frustration.

"Wait!" Mukti interrupted " nandini, when did you take bath last time?"

"This morning! Why!" Told Nandini being confused at this sudden out of the topic question.

"See!" Said mukti "bitch! If i would have asked this question earlier then you would have to smack your brain off to think that how many days passed to sunday!" Said mukti accusingly.

"You know what cabir!" Said mukti to cabir directing towards nandini " ek baar hostel mein bet lagi thi and isne ego par baat le li thi! And she dint bath for bloody 2 weeks!... And the wardon thought thats a rat has died in her room!"

Nandini smiled cheekily at her achievement remembering that time.

"See! Kaise dannt phadh rahi hai bewakoof!" Said pissed off cabir to which nandini hurriedly straightened her expressions.

"And what u were saying about friendship even after u get married. What if he turned out to be a MCP!"

"What the! Com'n dont be unreasonable! He is not like that!"

"See! I told you!" Mukti said " she is changing... See abhi jumma jumma ek din hua nhi mile ko and she is already defending that guy!" Said mukti to which nandini again tried to defend herself but she thought against it.

"See, there are always two types of women... Pehle, jo club mein ja kar ladhke tadhte hai aur bar khali karte hai which are homosapiens. Dusra, jinke husbands ko baki ladhkiyan tadhti hai aur bar khali karna toh dur ki baat, whiskey ka glass bhi tujhe usse puch ke uthana padhega which are chomusapien." Cabir explained wirh a poker face but listening go which worry lines started highlighting on her forehead.

"No no no!!! You guys know me right! The first thing i did was having a complete honest and transparent talk to him about what i am, what my lifestyle is what are and will always remain my priority and my life facts! Which he did too and there is still long time for wedding so we could get along till then!"

" actually chomusapein suits you now!" Said mukti with a straight face making nandini glare at her.

"Stop glaring at me! Thats true " Said mukti with a smirk and winked at cabir to which cabir winked back and nandini knew something disasterous is being cooked.

"What kind of life you imagine after 2 years from now!" Asked Cabir which left Nandini in deep thought while Mukti started tagging friends on cabirs post.

"I m clueless!" Said Nandini nervously with hint of fear and her cute lip curl.

"What the f**k dude! U can't be serious!" Mukti almost screamed and banged her fist along with cabirs cellphone.

"Watch it bae! My dad isn't a Richie rich who will bring me cellphone every month!" Cabir said strictly with widened eyes and caressed the cellphone gently. Typical girl!.

"Shut up! Dumbass... And Nandini, wasn't it u who said when ever I wanna find u for years to come I will find u only in some casino of Las Vegas then what's all this!" Said shocked Mukti but before Nandini could say anything Mukti continued " no you listen to me, I will tell u your future... U will probably be having a kid in your arm and other holding ur finger and you will weight around a ton and your husband will not be anymore interested in u and will be checking out new menu cards.

"Your beer pongs and late night parties will be replaced with ladies kitty parties." Said Cabir as if stating most usual fact.

"You crush and guy rating talks will be replaced with kids cereal and best dipper discussion. You 3 am will and always be you husband!" Said Mukti "Your sexy crop tops gowns and shoulder less summer dresses will be replaced by 10 meter long cloth bundle to cover up your not to exposable figure!" Ended Mukti and took a sip of her coffee to get her cool back while there was pin drop silence till then. Cabir was busy searching and posting betrayal quotes by friend on Instagram and Twitter while Nandini was imagining herself in the predictions done by her friends and she went white.

"Guys! I am calling off this wedding! I am running to Las Vegas tomorrow!" Nandini said with fearful tears in her eyes.

"Awweee!" Both Cabir and Mukti awed and instantly hugged Nandini sideways.

"We are so sorry! We were just pulling your leg!" Said Cabir still hugging tears eyed Nandini while Mukti said "I know u so deserved it but we are still sorry!"

"Guys! But what you said is true too! What if things like that happen? No no no no no... I am calling this wedding off this instant!"

"Cabir, stop her otherwise her family will chop me in bits and won't hesitate to feed me to street dogs for free!"Mukti said clutching his arm and almost whispered to Cabir fearfully.

"What the! Dude her family is sweet they don't react like ur Punjabi family!" Said Cabir sarcastically.
"Bro! Don't forget hers is Haryanvi and they have even worse temper than punjabis!"retorted Mukti to which Cabir exclaimed "point!" And ran to stop Nandini.

Flashback ends...

"Seriously! Your face expressions were worth watching!" Said mukti laughed out loud along with Nandini.

"So what's up with you? Why are you in so grumpy mood today?" Asked Mukti.

"Yaar! It's so irritating that few unknown wrinkled faces visit our place and the only question they have is "when I will be giving them the good news!" Like are u f**king serious! What I am? A baby production machine! Assholes!" Nearly raged out, frustrated Nandini.

"Oh no!" Mukti mourned out to which Nandini questioned.
"I could have saved you life if I would have remembered to quote u with that fact too that day!"Said sad Mukti.

"What quote!"

"That one thing is going to remain constant in your life that is relatives but with slight change in dialogue."

"Which is?"

"Before marriage " beta Shaadi ka kya plan hai?" And after marriage " beta bacho ka kya plan hai!"" Said Mukti and both broke in fits of laughter.

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Hie guys! Long time I know😉
So yeah here I am with yet another shot of this series.
Let me tell you the flash back thing actually happened I just mixed up few dialogues here and there but it actually happened when Tanya broke this wedding bomb on me and my friend.
So there will be one more short and then epilogue of this series.

And yes! guys those who are waiting for the collab story " happened between hearts" me and Tanya will be updating it with in a week.

Uhmmm... I guess m done!
Oh yeah don't forget to comment and hit the like button!
See you soon!
Stay happy stay blessed
Mishshergill

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