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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing prom...

Looking forward to read the update...

Update soon...

Happy holi 🥳🥳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice promo
Happy holi🥳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Happy holi...🥳

Awesome promo 😊


tysmmm,,,:D😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing prom...

Looking forward to read the update...

Update soon...

Happy holi 🥳🥳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rockstarlover

Nice promo
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THz for commentingg...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhillon90

Nycc promo
Update soon


TYSM...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I know i know... m late... but m really really sorry guyss..i was out of town...
NOW NJOY THE CHPPY !

CHAPTER :5 : NEW FEELINGS

Dhruv and nandini was looking at each other, but Harshad came in between and said." hey Maddy, just watch out. She is my cousin, not even try" He said giving him tough looks

Dhruv smiles n say," u know wht, pta ni kyu ...pr mjhe hr ldki teri cousin lgti haii "

H :" yea very funny ...look m warning you,, isse dur reh "

D:" arreeyy..me uske pass hu kyaa " dhruv chuckled and look towards Nandini, who was already looking at him.

H:" hey dontt " he said angrily.

D:" terii problem kyaa haii?? " Dhruv said coming close to him, giving angry looks

Just then Aryamann came , said : " problem haii tbhii bol rhe haiii "

Dhruv just moves his face to other side,n say " chuckk it", and turns to leave but Aryamann came in, n say" dnt mess with us maddy "

Dhruv chuckled listening him and goes from there

All this while nandini was just admiring him.

H:" aryamann,, she is my cousin, only today she has joined the college, and nandini yeh aryamann ,, my bFF " nandini came out of her trance.

A:"nyc to meet you nandini "

Nandini smiles.

A:" And nandini , she is my cousin, Ragini.

N:" ohh... hii raginii "

R:" okk bhaii... will leave for our class ,, come nandini i will introduce you to my friends."

Ragini and nandini went in.

A:" harshad yrr... teri yeh cousin to bht beautiful hai "

H:" cousin kiski haii " and he smiles

Ragini and nandini was going towards there class talking about, non other than dhruv.

R: how cute he is na ? " ragini said excitingly.

Nandini just smile.

Just then Ragini saw her frnd Na vya passing through , she cll her out.

R: Heyy Navyaa.

Na:" ohh heyy raginiii " navya hugged herr... and raginii introduced her to nandini.

R:" hey you know aaj,, madddy ne ground me ganna aaya,, lg rha tha yr.."

Na:" huhh,, plss raginii,, kitni br kaha don't talk abt that jerk in front of me."

Listening to this, nandini asked :" y are you saying lyk this" innocently.

Na:"you are new over here nandini, but this maddy is very famous for relationships and all.

Nandini looked towards her curiously and Navya continued.

Na" uska bss yhi kaaam haii... pehle ldkiyo ko apni smiles se fasata hai and fr bss kaam khtm to chhod deta haiii... bloody womanizer "

N :" but mjhe to bht achaa lgaa " Nandini said sadly and innocently.

R:"haii na nandini ... uskii eyes..ufff so deep " she said dramatically.

Na:" plss raginiii... yhii to uskii USP haii ..huhh..."

And then they all go towards there classes

NXT DAY IN CHURCH

NANDINI's POV

Heyyy jesusss,, ( she said excitingly) ,,, thxx you thxx youuu thxx youuu... aapne ek hi din me merii baat sunlii, ...aur aaiyaapaa ko me kab se keh rhi thii...( she saidsadly)

I saw him yesterday, His voice is pure , so melodious... aah.. and the way he was looking at me, aesa lg rha tha bss dhekti hii rhi... and i saw him in my dream also last night. I just cnt get him out of my mind...Is it Love...??? (she looks towards jesus, with frowns) .. oh jesus plz help me na... kuchh bh aesa jisse mjhe pta chle .. kii he also lyks me... umm lykk??? Do i lykk him...?? ...ufff ... i don't knw !!

Aur aap bh kuch mat bolna ...okk?? you all feel pleasure na ...mjhe aese dkh kr.. (she said making a pout)

Now byee.. m gng..!

IN COLLEGE

Nandini was going towards her class , she heard sound of laughing and looks in a direction.. and her heart starts beating fast...

Nandini"s POV

I reached college, all angry on jesus and aiiyaappa... but then i heard some sound of laughing ,, i turn to see , the breathtaking scene in front of me... He was there,, laughing wholeheartedly... omg aaiiyapaa... he is so cute... his hair... and specially eyes... it felt like my world has stopped.

After a moment i saw he was looking at me, oh no!.. i just turned... uff aaiyaappaa... y me ?? Its so embarrassing.

I move towards my class.

END OF POV.

Navya also entered college after nandini and saw her looking at dhruv. She made a disgusting face ..and left.

Nandini was passing through the corridor in break after her class, when ragini called her out!

R: Hey Nandini!

N: ohh hi raginii...whts up?

R: Nothing bss do you heard abt the sports day celebration, this weekend.

N: umm not yet!

R: yeeaa its happening this weekend.. and you knw what... iss clg me ek bht popular race hoti hai jisko 2 saal se mera bhairyamann jeet rha haii...

Nandinii smiles .

R: but you know ... wht interesting abt this year ?

Nandini nod her head in no.and ask by her eyes "what"

R: maddy is participating... it going to be super interesting.

N: really ?? ( she said happily)

R: yuppp...acha lets go to canteen...navya wahii haii...

N: yea okk ...!

IN THE CANTEEN..

R: Hey naVuu...

Na: hey ragini n hii nandinii...

They settled down...

Ragini went to take their meals from the counter.

Navya and nandini was talking on random thing.. when maddy with his friends enters the canteen... and nandini looks towards him and smiles...

He also passes a side smile to her and went ahead with his friends..

Navya got irritated by this and said.

NA: Nandinii... (she look towards her and said hann and navya continued) look nandinii.. i don't knw wht you think about maddy... but i have called you my friend .. so it's my duty to warn you... pls stay away from him... he will only hurt you... you are so innocent n naive ryt now...to bear a heart break... pls control your self! ... He is not the one for you... pls its my request !..."" and goes from their.

Ragini came there and asked

R: where is navya?

Nandini was still in trance of wht navya said...raginii tap her shoulder...

N: yea haan..?? nandini said blankly.

R: navya??? Where is she.??

N: she left.. umm ragini m not hungry... i will meet see you in a bit.

R: arreyy but...whts going on?? "" she makes irritated face and starts eating..

Nandini was walking in the corridor thinking about the navya's words..

She was just walking blankly... she doesn't even realised when she reached stairs and was about fall

NAndini' POV

Is Navya ryt??? But aaiiyaappa ... i dnt feel anything wrong in him... the way he was laughing in the morning... he was looking so handsome... y navya say lyk that.. he even smiled looking at me..

I was think about all this... and don't even realised when i reached stairs and was about to fall... ohh aaiyapaaa... i just shut my eyes in fear... but when i opened my eyes... i saw him... my felt numb...by this touch...on the back...we were just looking at each other..just inched apart ...he raised his hand and removed the strains of my hair falling on my face. .. and i just shut my eyes bcoz of his touch... ohh lord... it feels so gud...then i heard his voice from so close... he made me stand on my feet and said in my ears... "CAREFUL" i open my eyes... he was smirking at me..he winked n left!!

Ohh aiyyappaa... m i dreaming!


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DOne... ⭐️

Do tell me how it was..

waiting for ur comments..😃

Edited by apy1608 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Liked ur story...manik as a big bro and dhruv a big flirt...hope she dsnt fall for dhruv after navya words...waiting for manan meet...hope tis person is manik as manik has only licence to remove the strands of hair from nandu face...hehe..waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello dear...

Lovely update...

Nandu like dhruv or it's just attraction...

After all the story name is infatuation...

Waiting for manan meet asap n make them fall in love...

I don't like dhruv😡...

Please do something...

Update soon eagerly waiting...

Thank you so much for the pm...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update... Loving the story...
But yaar dhruni ... Dhruv na I don't like him. But to kya hua... I am loving the story...

Thank u for this fabulous update n the pm

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
😃

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