MaNan OS - My Unknown Love! Up Part 1 (A),(B),(C)-pg6/27-2 (Completed) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyc concept
Waiting for next part
Update soon
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#22
really nicee concept..
Very awesome glimpse

Will continue it.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Awesome glimpse
Manik is not ready to accept that he likes Nandini
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Aww, he do like her yaar.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Nice & interesting concept...
update soon...
thnx for d pm..😊😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for pm
awesome update
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yes yes i am very much interested :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Okay so here is the os complete...sorry I couldnt update it yesterday cz there was some technical problem...I tried bt somethng went wrong!! But nw its all sorted so here enjoy reading it...



Chapter 1(A)

A normal day at college! Well too boring lectures...I was standing down in the quadrangle with my friends as the lectures got over.

Mukti : Nandu! Chal canteen chalte hain.

My best friend said to me. She is my closest & best friend of mine with whom I share everything & anything.

Nandini : Umm! Muku woh...dekh na woh phirse mujhe dekh raha hai.

Mukti : Kon? Acha woh Manik Malhotra! Are yr kitna hot hai yr aur tujhe line bhi de raha hai...jaana propose kar le.

Nandini : Shut up yr Muku...kya kuch bhi bol rahi hai...main usse thikse janti tak nhi...bas Abhi ki wajah se mile the...aur woh bhi 'Hello' , 'Hii' ke liye...aur woh sirf mjhe dekhta hai toh iska matlab yeh nhi ki woh mjhe pasand karta hai...Aur karta bhi ho toh bhi you know ki I am 'A one man woman' Samjhi? Ab chal.

Mukti : Ok meri maa chal!

And they walked towards the canteen.


On the other side a lil far from canteen
Cabir : Manik kya roz roz usse tadta rehta hai? Agar itni hi acchi lagti hai toh jaake propose karle na. Bechari roz uncomfortable hoti hai teri wajah we.

Abhi : Tujhe Nandu pasand hai kya Manik??

Manik : Wth!! Kisne bola mujhe woh pasand hai?? N agar mujhe pasand hoti toh directly bol deta samjha Cabir.

Abhi : Acha thik hai...waise bhi Nandu tjhe reject hi karegi agar tu propose bhi karega toh.

Manik : What?? Kyu??

Abhi : Becz she is 'A one man woman' aur tu...teri toh kitni gf's reh chuki hai jiske baare me tu kabhi serious nhi tha...so you know No Match At All!!

Cabir : Yaa dude! No match.

Manik sighed sadly : Hmm...No Match!

Next day Nandini was wearing a baby pink kurti with white capri, she left her hairs open & was looking like an angel. She walked in the colg with Mukti smiling & laughing. She was looking very cute & everyone present there were ogling her.

Manik, Abhi & Cabir were standing there & talking when Manik saw Nandini & was completely lost in her. While Abhi was also staring at Mukti. Only Cabir was bored & was rolling his eyes seeing the two romeos!

Cabir : Hey bhagwan! Main kab tak akela rahu aur inn do pagalo ko dekhta rahu?? Meri life main bhi toh koi bhej do!

Just then a girl entered the colg wearing a purple frock looking very beautiful. Cabir was staring at her without blinking his eyes & only word came from his mouth was 'Beautiful'
His trance was broken when he heard Nandini shouting "NAVYAAA"

Nandini ran & hugged her tightly.
Nandini : Omgg! Navya tum yaha?? Tum toh london main thi..toh phir yaha?? Tumne yaha admission liya hai?? Bolo naa Navu!

Navya : Nandu nandu! Shaant hojaw saans toh lene do. Haa hum london mein the...par phir Papa ka yaha transfer hogaya toh hum yaha aagaye. Aur ab hum bhi tumhare saath hi iss colg mein padhenge.

Nandini : Navyaaa..i'm soo happy!!

They both were hugging each other when Mukti came towards them, "Oh hello! Ab hume intro milega??"

Nandini : Aree haa! Navya this is Mukti my soul sister, my best friend & Mukti this is Navya my childhood friend.

Mukti : Ohho! Toh yeh hai Navu..tumhe pata hai Nandu kitni baatein karti hai tumhare baare main...Navu yeh Navu woh..uff!!

Then Abhi, Manik & Cabir also walked towards them. Nandini looked towards them & then introduced them also.

Nandini : And Navya this is Manik & this is Cabir my bro!

Cabir forwarded his hand fr a handshake.
"Hii" looking straight in her eyes. Navya felt a strong connection when she looked in his deep eyes. She shivered when she touched his skin.

Their trance was broken by Abhi who gave a fake cough.
Abhi : Ahem...Toh MADHUBALA kaisi hai tu??

Navya huffed in anger & said "Abhi ke bacche ruk tujhe abhi batati hu" & she ran behind him. She was chasing him & others were laughing. Manik was again lost in her melodious laugh & ogling her continuously.

Finally they stopped & Abhi said,"Ok ok baba sorry bas! Meri jaan baksh de meri maa"

Nandini : Ji mataji iss nasamaj baalak ko maaf kar dijiye..yeh aisi galati dobara nhi karega.

Navya : Thik hai baalak..jaa maaf kia!

And with this the trio burst out laughing & the other 3 were giving them weird look as they didnt understand a bit of their conversation.


After alot of masti all of them left for their lectures. All 6 of them were in same class. It was their commerce lecture (they were in commerce stream S.Y.Bcom) Cabir , Manik, Mukti,Nandini were sleeping in the class as lec was hell boring. But Alas! Our 2 genius Abhi & Navya were carefully listening & making notes.

After lecs got over all headed towards the canteen with a lot of teasing & masti.

In the canteen they were siting like Mukti-Nandini-Navya-Abhi-Manik-Cabir. Manik was again admiring her.

Manik POV
Yaar Manik kya humesha usse taadta rehta hai?? Do I like her?? No no! This is just an attraction..thats it! Nothing else. And waise bhi she is nt my type. Kitni choti hai bt she is cute😳 What?? Shutup Manik!

Nandini POV
Aiyaapaa phirse he is staring! Kya chahta hai yeh ladka?? Humesha taadta rehta hai! Agar pasand karta hai toh bol kyu nhi deta? Is he afraid?? No no he can nvr be afraid. He is The Manik Malhotra! Waise bhi usse toh koi bhi mil jayegi why will he be interested in me! Whatever!

Screen freezes on Maniks staring at Nandini & Nandini lookin up talking to her Aiyaapaa!


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Me firsttt
Okay loving this pair's of friends.
Pls post next part too.
So that we can get the whole story fully.
Edited by uma88 - 9 years ago
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Chapter 1(B)

Two three days passed like this & their friendship grew stronger! In these days Manik & Nandini also interacted with each other sometimes. Like if Manik wanted any help in studies he used to ask Nandini & then call her a 'Genius' He gave her this title & always used to call her that. And Nandini used to get irritated with that name.

Cabir & Navya's story was progressing vry fast as Cabir had confessed her already that he has feelings fr her from the vry first day he saw her. He also cleared that he wanted to spend more time with her to know her more. And Navya was also vry much happy as her feelings were mutual.

While Abhi & Mukti were already ij a secret relationship😉 No one knew about it except Nandu! Well how can she nt know it when 1 was her best frnd & the other her brother.

During this span of time when Manik & Nandini had become friends she also had asked him as to why he used to stare her. Firstly he was shocked with this sudden question bt somehow declined it by saying that it was just a mere infatuation. Nandini was somewhere hurt by his answer bt plastered it with a smile.

In the canteen
Abhi : Toh meri pyaari behna! Kal ka kya plan hai?? Kuch khaas??

Navya : Haa nandu kal kya karnewali ho??

Mukti : Obvio kal to we are gonna party hard! Haina nandu?

Cabir : Ek min yaar! Tum log kya bol rahe ho?? Kal kya hai aisa??

Manik : Haa kya hai kal Ms. Genius??

Nandini glared him when he said that.

Abhi : Arree haa inn do namuno ko toh pata hi nhi. Kal meri baby doll ka birthday hai!

Cabir : Ohh! Birthday! Kya yr Nandu tune mujhe bhi nhi bola! Huh!! Par koi baat nhi nw that I know tomorrow will be vry special.

Manik was just staring at her smiling face & the glow on her face when he came to know that its her birthday tomorrow. He came to know by her look that she is vry excited fr it. And this time no one noticed him staring as all were busy in planning fr tomorrow.

Nandini : Manik? Manik! Maanikkk!!

She shouted fr the third time & he came back to his senses.

Manik : huh??

Nandini : Tum aarahe ho naa??

Manik : Huh? Kaha??

Cabir : Lo! Kaha khoya hai tu?? Kal Nandu ke farmhouse par party hai! Toh tu aaraha hai naa??

Manik : Yaa! Ofcourse!

Nandini smiled & her heart was beating vry fast as this will be her first birthday with Manik! She didnt knew what were these feelings. Why she was happy when Manik was around??


In the classroom
Manik-Cabir , Mukti-Nandini & Abhi-Navya were sitting together. It was their Eco lec. As usual Manik & Cabir were sleeping. Mukti was irritating Nandini while Nandini was trying to concentrate as it was her fav subject. Navya was also sleepin & Abhi was writing notes.

Suddenly the teacher saw that Nandini was laughing & giggling bt didnt see that Mukti was purposely irritating her from below the bench by tickling her.

Mam : Nandini Murthy! Will you plss tell us why are you giggling??

Nandini was scared & stood up. Listening her name also the others who were sleeping got up to see what happened.

Nandini : Mam...umm...I..I'm sorry..

Mam : Sorry? Why the hell are you saying sorry? I should say sorry na for disturbing uh.

Nandini immediately looked down & tears made their way out of her eyes. Nevr in her life any teacher had scolded her. Mukti was guilty now & was going to stand to tell the Mam the truth bt Nandini held her hand & stopped her. This was noticed by Manik & he understood that it wasnt her fault. He was vry much impressed by her that she cud do anything fr her frnds.

Mam : First of all you are nt paying attention in the class & then giggling & disturbing the whole class...if you dont have any interst then plss dont sit in my class! You get that?

Nandini just nodded still crying. Just then the bell rang & she ran out of the class. Mukti was going behind her bt Manik stopped her & said that he will go. Then Mukti narrated the whole thing to Cabir Abhi & Navya. And all were upset with her.

Here Manik was searching for Nandini. He found her near the staircase. She was sobbing vry badly. His heart broke into a million pieces seeing her crying. He went near her & sat beside her.

Manik : Ms. Genius plss stop crying. You know I cant see you in tears. Please!

Nandini : Ma..manik wo..woh Mam...

And she again started crying. Manik side hugged her & said "Nandini!"

Nandini at once stopped crying & lookes at him as he never calls her by her name.

Manik : Woww! Itni jaldi sirf Nandini bolne par tumne rona band kardia...So smart I am!

Nandini chuckled on this & Manik finally felt a relief seeing her smiling.

They went back & Mukti apologized her bt she said it wasnt her fault. Then all of them left early as tomorrow is a special day & a lot of preparartions are to be done.

At night
Manik POV
Aaj kya hogaya tha mujhe?? Why I felt like someone stabbed my heart when she was crying?? And when she smiled I felt that I got evrything back! What is this feeling?? Do I like her?? Omg! Yes! I like her!! I like Nandini.

And it struck 12:00
Manik was the first one to call her as he called her 5 mins early.

Manik : Hey! Ms. Genius

Nandini : Hii Manik

Manik : Soo...what are uh doing??

Nandini :Yeh kaisa sawal hai?? Raat ko log kya karte hai?? Cricket toh nhi khelte na!

Manik : Hahaha! You're soo funny Ms. Genius. Ok so Happy Birthday Ms. Genius! May you have a great yr ahead. God bless you!

Nandini : Thankyou Manik!

Manik : Sirf thankyou??

Nandini : Aur kya chahiye tumhe??

Manik : Something special!

Nandini : Oho! Toh woh something special main kal dungi tumhe. Abhi ke liye good ni8 Manik!

Manik : Are Nan...kaat diya!

Then he also slept smiling keeping his phone aside.

Screen freezes on Nandinis blushing & Maniks smiling face!


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