Manan Horror TS-Marriage with scary ATMA(Last Chapter-page 9)updated - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
It's totally new & different concept...
But how could an atma enter in nandini's body while taking marriage vows in front of the sacred fire!?
So that is the loop hole...
I want u to fill that & after that it will be rocking story..
I love to read horror stories...
So I m very curious to read further...
Thnxxx for the pm..
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read further parts..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello my dear friends...

i'm so happy with your response towards my new horror story...

so i'm here with the story...

actually i have decided to write an OS but when i started writing i couldn't stop myself... so i think it will become two shot or three shot...

and ya... who wants PM please buddy me...

ok now happy reading...



Marriage with Scary ATMA

CHAPTER 1


Malhotra Mansion, evening time.

It is the evening time. And the surrounding of the garden of Malhotra mansion is something different. There is sound of chanting mantras of the marriage rituals of MANAN are going in the mandap on the center of the garden. But there is unbelievable silence is around. There is something which is piercing that holly mantras' peace effect. Something unusual is there in between this surrounding. Something horrible or should I say something SCARY...

Manik and nandini both are an orphans. Their friends are their only family. Manik is a born rich boy. After his parents' death when he was just 5 years old, he is only hire of the Malhotra Industries and a lot of properties of Malhotra's. And then one day he fell in love with a simple girl in a hospital when she was playing with children.

Then he met her and found that she is also an orphan like him. She also fell in love with that Rockstar who has a golden heart. They both heal each other's lonely heart. She is doing her internship at that time so after it finished they both are getting married.

There are many guests where there to attend this grand wedding. As it is the wedding of The famous Rockstar of the nation as well as a known business tycoon, Manik Malhotra and the well-known very young child-specialist doctor of the town, Nandini Moorthy. And there beloved friends, band members of FAB 5 manik's band and navya are there smiling and feeling content as finally their two best friends are getting married.

But somewhere in the dark corner of the garden, a shadow is watching them with anger filled scary eyes. She was so angry that her already scary face become more scarier with that anger and than in friction of second that anger turned into horribly evil smirk and a thin scary voice came from the shadow "You are only mine, manik. Aur tumhari shadi sirf mujse hogi...hahaha" stating this with the scary laugh the shadow disappears.

(The Shadow)



As soon as that shadow disappear from that corner, here in the mandap, a sudden slow flow of the wind turn into a scary speedy flow. Everyone look at the surrounding with puzzled eyes when suddenly bride's veil fell down and so she said looking at manik "Manik, I need to set my duptta. I'll be back in five minutes."

But before manik say something the priest said "abhi sat phere baki hei beti. Aur aise rituals bichme chhodke jana asubh hota hei." But manik said denying him "Aisa kuchh nahi hota pandit ji." He then turn toward nandini and said "You go and come fast. And han... don't make me wait for long." He said last words in his romantic tone in which she blushingly left.

She came in nearer room and close the door. She than wear her dupatta properly facing the mirror and was about to turn when something hold her hand sharply forcing her to stop. She became horrified and turn and saw that her holly thread (Subh Dhaga of bride)' stuck with the drawer knob. She tried to separate it but unfortunately it broken and fell down on the floor.

(Holly Thread)



And as soon as the thread fell down, that shadow came from the window and thrust herself in nandini's body. Her body jerked with that and she got scared with her own body movement. And forgetting the thread she hurriedly gone outside in the garden. But little did she know that now she can't run away from that as it is already inside her body.

Then again they started to fulfill all the rituals of wedding including seven vows, vermilion and nuptial chain. And all this while that Scary ATMA is there in nandini's body, fulfilling all the rituals of marriage with manik. Manik is not only married with nanidni but also with that Scary ATMA which is inside her body.

At Night, Malhotra Mansion.

Tonight is their first night and after their friends leave, they both are alone in the big Mansion as manik has already given leave to all the butlers of mansion because he wants to be alone with his bride.

Manik and nandini were seating there in manik's bedroom as tonight is their first night. But little did they know that this night will turn out to be a first night of their upcoming horrible nights.

Manik said while closing the door "Ahan... finally we get married today. From now we are inseparable forever." But instead of nandini he heard some other captivated steady voice from bedside "Yes... we are together manik."

Manik become confuse with her changed voice so he immediately set near her and hold her hand but he found it weird as she didn't shiver this time like other times. They are in relationship with each other from 3 years and he very well knew that whenever he touch her she shiver with his mere touch but this time her body stays numb and cold.

He confusingly dropped her veil and next he saw made him shocked. Nandini's face was white, pure white and her eyes are blood shot red. And she was looking at him with different scary smile. She was looking like a dead person with open eyes. He horrifyingly uttered "Nandini..."

(Bride in the veil)

But she just sit straight and Laugh sarcastically then suddenly her voice changed and she said in a horrifying tone "Hahahaha... ab meri bhi shadi ho gayi." She held his caller and continue looking at his eyes as if staring him sternly "Tum mere pati ho..." saying this she moved her fingers seductively from his face to down to his chest and said intently "Aur aaj hamari suhagrat hei...manik...hahaha"

All this while manik was still in a trance but then composing himself, he abruptly jerked her hand away and stood up from the bed and Shouted "Tum meri patni nahi ho... kon ho tum?"

She look at him furiously with more blood shot red eyes and shouted in a horrifying tone "Me tumhari patni hu. Sat fere liye hei tumne mere sath. Me ATMA hu. Tumhari patni, manik Malhotra. Aur tumhe mujse koi alag nahi kar sakta..."

There is a fact in mythology. Agar koi ATMA kisi insan ke sath sat fere le le to wo ATMA us insan se puri zindgi kliye jud jati hei... To kya hoga jab manik ki shadi nandini k sath sath us ATMA se bhi huyi hei jo nandini k sharir me maujud hei... Shadi do logo ki hoti hei lekin yaha Koi Aur bhi tha us shadi ka hissa... fere sirf do log lete hei lekin yaha koi aur bhi hei un do logo k sath sat fere lene wala...

To Be Continue...

Lots of Love

NISHU

Edited by nirvisha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Interesting n scarier
will be waiting for nxt update
pls pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Interesting update dear...
Thnxx for the pm...
Continue soon..
Looking forward to read further parts...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Hell scary...amazing update waiting for next..really excited to know whose aatma is inside nandini...update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Wow awesome update...
So this is hpw manik married with a aatma also..
But yeh aatma kiski hai...
Y she wants manik...
What happened to nandu...
Luved it...
Thnx for pm...
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
That was really scary.. I think it's sohas atma...waiting for next update.. N thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Wow. . Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
scary update
whose atma is this?
curious 2 know
cont soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
update soon na baby
I want to know how manik deal with it
gosh scary aatma
is it soha's aatma or what... LOL...
ok... enough of my ranting
But plz update soon

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