#7//The Ex's At War//Ch21-Pg116 n NOTE-Pg144 n LINK FOR THREAD on PG-1

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Aamikrish

@Aamikrish

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1031

That's so sweet of you. You took the readers comments seriously and edited the update.

Healing was awesome . I loved it when Manik said to Nandini "please nandu.. don't push me away from you ".Awe they really love each other a lot. The way Nandini thought about Manik after that, she felt his pain. If it's not love then wat z love.

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akiraroy

@akiraroy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1032

You are awesome...

After giving perfect update also you gave edited update...

Loved it...

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mamalovesbalto

@mamalovesbalto

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1033

hi no word's to describe your writing the way you narrate your story love it and love it again sweetheart you should never stop writing update was very sweet i really don't think that you need to be told what to put in your story you your self do such a great job i really appreciate your efforts that you put in your story i can't say more than that always look forward to read next part take care keep smiling and god bless you ⭐️

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mickeym

@mickeym

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1034

Thank u dear for this amazing update ...love u ..

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Boomchelesa

@Boomchelesa

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#1035

Well to be honest the edited one was much better..! IT WAS HOT..!!! Beautifully penned..!! Keep writing more..!
God Bless you

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1036

God yaar... That is the cutest thing u could do... Seriously u wrote it all over again.. So cute...

N yaa loved the changes as well... I to anyways love whatever u write... Soo... Esi bahane dobara read ker liya Sara update hehehe...

But seriously really very thoughtful of u

Thanxx for the update

😃

N yaa... Thread 8 on it's way

😊

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love_is_manan

@love_is_manan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#1037

First of all am So So So sorry for commenting Sooo late...

Sorry... I really want to read it yesterday itself but I was stuck...

And now coming to the update...

Ut was mindblowing...fantastic... Superb...awesome.. Magical... Beautiful n what not...just loved it Sooo much...

You really are superb... And whatever you write its create some special wala magic...

So finally much awaited talk n confession is here...

So finally this Impulsive babies decided to talk... Ofcourse some Punches.. Slaps n kisses are necessary na...😆

Loved their action... Reaction game😳😳😳

Finally they confront each other...

And finally they told each other how much they both sufferd...

Nandini's temper is so high...

She was literally non stop...

She was not ready to listen even a word..

She was unstoppable... So Manik need to do something...

And he threw her in pool...🤣🤣🤣

MaNan n their unique style of calm each other 😃😃😃

And after that slaps... Punches n kisses... That was to indeed needed 😉😉😉

Gosh so that REWA was talking about Manik's father..

But that REWA used that moment too😡😡😡

So Manik was asking his father's help to win Nandu back..

Awwwhhh that was really sweet...

And am glad that finally Manik cleared it to Nandini that REWA is nothing to him...

Finally he confessed to her...

Nandu was so hurt after seeing her wild creature on Manik's back...

So finally they both gave up to their arguments n cherished their moments of togetherness after so long 😳😳😳

And MaNan moments was beautiful...

Their need for each other... And desires.. Love.. Passion... Insecurities.. Possessive and finally they again become One Soul...

Healing was needed n you Penned it so much beautifully...

And last part when Nandu was saying him..." please make me sleep.. " that was really blissful moment...

Eagerly waiting for next part...

And yes am Shooo happy for my Cutto pie... Finally my baby will have her parents together... Waise I really missed my baby...in next update I want my baby too...

Waiting for Promo 😊😊😊

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sneha_glamarous

@sneha_glamarous

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#1038

hey read d edited part too...

it was also very beautiful...

loved it...

Kangaroo branded giraffe... 😃 🤣

loved that tummy part...
He loved my tummy for the fact it brought to him the
most priceless gifts of his life.

this line depicts in how much pain was he... "Please Nandu...never push me away from you",

loved it...

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OhMeriJaan

@OhMeriJaan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1039

And and and! Finally! Like finally these impulsive kids spoke and did it too! ❤️ 😆 Oh gosh! I totally LOVED it to the core! I had even loved it yesterday without these additions but tbh thank you sooo much for editing these parts back in! They made the chapter all the more AMAZING! I had honestly been reading the update for a second time today and that was when I saw it had been edited and Yayyy! Haha! Thanks a ton!😃

Ahhh these two! Their fights! Its honestly adorably funny! It was so damn adorable how he threw her in the pool n was in with her to calm her! ❤️ 😆

FINALLY! Manik knows what nightmares Nandu has of him and Rewa! Like phew😆 And I can now be rest assured Nandu won't be insecure of Rewa! I honestly want a scene of Nandu jataoing her haq on Manik openly esp in front of Rewa and I sooo want Rewa to burn and burn bad! Like I even want Manik to contribute to this haq jataoing and uff that evil satisfaction we would get to see Rewa burn!😆 Gosh I sound evil dont I 😆

And my personal fav pick from the update would be Nandu realising how lonely Manik would have been with no one by his side and her embracing him in herself! That was SO much LOVE! ❤️ And thank youuu so much for editing that in! That was such a fab moment that I am glad we dint miss out on! ❤️

Ok I really really am excited for the next update! Srsly!😆 I so wanna how the story is gonna proceed from here! Promooo please!😆😃

And a big wala thank you for this amazinggg sa update!!😃 Aa gayi big wala battisi on ur face?😆

Edited by OhMeriJaan - 9 years ago

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devilkhushi

@devilkhushi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1040

I hope Abe manan can come back together they are meant to be together n please no more fights Abe they are meant be together forever with their daughter a big happy family

Update soon

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