#7//The Ex's At War//Ch21-Pg116 n NOTE-Pg144 n LINK FOR THREAD on PG-1

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Pravallika69

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1011

Awww jus wowawesoeasalways
U always nail it n same way
The words Manik said nvr push me away was soo needed jus wow
N best dialog I am always yours I was always n will be
Superb update
N jus wow can't wait to see their beautiful morning again
Jus too good

Lots of love
Pravallika

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firefly09angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1012

Awesome...
U have edited it in more beautiful manner...
I liked the previous one also...
Loved it...
Continue soon...
😊 😊 😊

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kash321

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1013

Wuhhh whuhh girl
Ur fab I don't knew u can do dis as welll
I mean after an update U took so much efforts for re edited ur work wjich is mindbl
Fantastic is d word
Keep rocking

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mishti5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1014

Superb...

This tym u gave it in more details...

Last time...I also felt tht it was quite rushed...

They had more conversation in ths part...which was needed...

Loved it...

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shaan...

@shaan...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1015

Amazing update...

Manan's convo was emotional...

Luved it...

Plz continue soon...

Waiting eagerly...

Take care...

Stay blessed...

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shravya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1016

It has been a while I came to India forums...!! Yesterday I remembered ur story and I read all the parts in a go!! Firstly I am really sorry that I could not be updated with the story and comment for every part ...all I can say is u are a fabulous writer...I love the essence of the characters and the depth u potray them with!! Emotions are very well put forth that we can connected to them easily! Be it the love , jelousy , possessive , babyness , cuteness , that zing of sexyness , the masala , anger...everything is put beautifully...u are amazing I can say!! Loved it loved it keep writing!! Thank u

Ps. That was such a sweet jesture of u to re update the healing part...though I have no complaints...u are a rockstar! ! This shows how much u care about ur readers

Edited by shravya.kr - 9 years ago