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Posted: 9 years ago
U r crazyyy girl i love u.
btw tlc session is still on hahaha
and ys am excited
chachi just called me
u guyzz are coming paris yeyyy
finally i'll be able to meet u
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Chapter 24

Again it was a hectic day for them as tomorrow is THE D-DAY aka ANNUAL FUNCTION .. all were seriously working like a donkey (wonder how??) .. and guess what aryaman soha and lara the trio were no more bugging our kasauli cow boys and fairies aka u kno them guyzz..

Aryaman was nomore walking around nandini .. even soha is not behind manikk frm aryaman's not so good incident , and lara she is in her own world..

Miss .sen - ohh come on miss murthy tum ab aarhi ho didn't I inform u guyz ki after preparation u have to land urself immediately in drama room and why are u alone baaki sab kha haii..

Just as nandini step inside drama room all exhaust miss. Sen bombered over her..

Nandini - miss sen wo we all were just crosschecking the arrangements so.. and baaki sab aate hone ..

Miss . sen sigh - sorry darling actually the drama is the golden thing of our annual day so I got hyper .. nanidni nodded with smile..

Miss sen - ohhk so here take ur script and start practicing I'll be back ..

Miss. Sen left.. nandini sigh deeply than she starts reading the script..

She was reading the sript but suddenly someone came from back and tightly hug her .. she gasp loudly..


"shhh its me " voice came..

Nanidni again sigh - damn .. manikk !! u scared me ..

He hug her more cozily and she snuggle in him .. he just "hmm"..

Nandini - tired ??

Manikk - u have no idea ??..nanidni turn toward him

Nanidni - am really excited abt tomorrow.. she said jumping a little

Manikk smile - so as me but for something else .. he said leaning toward her .. she blush and push him a little.. they hear door knob open so they parted away..

Cabir dhruv abhi alya and sam came together inside while aryaman and lara came after sometime..

Than atlast miss. Sen enter.. - so my little gang .. start !! she announced and the drama started..

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Finnaly it was the d-day... ANNUAL FUNTION

Volunteers were running here and there last time crosschecking everything thing ..

All were connected with walky talky..

(convo in walky talky)

Nan- dhruv guest aana start hogye hai princi or teachers ko bhej hall mai welcome karne and cabir baccho ko bhej welcome song remember..

Dhr - ohhk princi abhi apne makeup mai busy hai uska kya karu

Ca - are yaar ye bacche abhi fruit pee rhe hai .. nandu mujhe inse bacha yaar ye choti mujhe apna gf banalo bol rhi hai..

Aly- like seriously guyzz..

Nan- dhruv and cabir jaldi karo fast now disperse.. and mukti abhi hello mukti abhi ?? kha ho tum dono..

Ma - tweety indono ka pata nhi hai kar kya rhe hai mai bhi kabse contact karne ki koshish karrha hu..

Nav- same with me .. abhi mujhe or mukti ko flowers arrange karne hai

Alya - or abhi or mujhe practice karna hai ...

Nan - wait I'll see .. over..

(convo end)

She was searching for m and a and cursing them .. and in hustle she bump with not - the -correct - person f- for - this - time.. soha..

Aauch' she yell and got up rubbing her arm.. she glare soha ..

Soha - ohhho ! see who got her right position .. she said with apoison in her voice

She gave her a fake smile - u kno what I don't have my precicous time to waste on u ..

Manikk - nandini ?? nanidni ?? .. in walky talky

Nan - yes manikk..

Manikk - come fast drama is gonna start in 1 hrs

Nan - ohhk am coming ... (convo end)

Nanidnii last time look toward soha who have evill grin on her face and she left..

Soha laughed evilly - drama !! prince and princess !! dekhti hu mere manikk ki princess kaise banti ho ... she smirk

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Nandini reached at the corner of backstage..

Nan - what the hell guyz .. she shout and our mukbhi jump on their place..

Nan - kya karrhe ho yaar .. abhi 1 ghante mai drama start hone waala hai and mukti navya kabse tujhe bula rhi hai yaar..

Abhi and mukti stood there like bheegi billi..

Nan clam herself - uff guyz after annual function na jo karna hai karna ohhk abhi plzz kaam pe dhyan do na .. sbhi go get ready

Abhi nodded he quickle hug mukti and left frm there.. and mukti and nanidni left together..

Manikk pov..

in dressing room.

I hit cabir with whatever coming in my hand.. how dare he linking me with that soha.. I took a perfume bottle and threw it on him..

cab - abe kya karrha hai mar jaunga mai .. he bend down..

and abhi enters and it hit abhi "oouch" .. ohh shitt

abhi rub his head he look annoyed .. why so??- kya yaar kar kya rhe ho tum dono ..

cab - football khelrhe the tujhe goal keeper banne kon bola .. abhi threw a cushion on him haha abhi is in my team

something wrong with abhi he never look this pale - abhi sab thk hai na u look pale ??

he smile correction fake smile - ofcorse mujhe kya hoga bas thoda stomach ache hai .. cabir chal yaar aadhe ghante mai drama start hoga ready nhi hona..manikk jaldi ready ho ohhk cabir chal.. sgain changed the topic after drama I'll talk with him..

i nodded and they left..

I saw my reflection in the mirror and my lip curve into a smile.. gosh she is gonna confess me today .. my heart is thumping today is gonna be special day for me .. for us .. I smile ..

Nandini pov

Alya zipp the back of my dress and miss. Sen applied fairy makeup on my face.. I can hear their excited squel ..

I slowly open my eyes and I saw my reflection in mirror..

GOSH AM BEAUTIFUL...

The blue Cinderella dress with shimmer was shining on me .. my curly hairs were hanging on my waist with classy british hairstyle.. the makeup was more like Disney princess Cinderella..

Miss. Sen - god nandini am gonna die on your beauty u look absolutely princess.. beautiful princess ... I blush..

Alya hug me frm back - damn nanidni stage pe toh sirf tum hi dikhogi ..

The door flung open and mukti and navya enter inside - nanidni look kon aaya your froguuu...

Ohh my froggu I missed him .. I tottaly ignored him during these days..

I look up and saw mukti's and navya's mouth and eyes wide open.. I raise my eyebrow and they jump on me OHH MY MATAJI.

Miss.sen flew them away - girls control u'll messs her makeup.

They apologise aww my sister's

Mukti peck my forehead - my bacchi u are not less than an angel . I hug her ... and all the very best for today am not talking abt drama ..

She whisper in my ear and my eyes buldge out what the !!

We aparted away .. she wink me and I again jump in the pool of embarrasment

Nav - nandini kash mai ladka hotii kash ..we all chuckle..

Miss sen - ohhk crazy girls alya go get ready.. and nandini u wait here and practice and baby don't be nervous.. and mukti navya chalo mere sath ..

we all nodded and they left.. gosh I love them they are my life..

my life??

Manikk!!..

I look at myself in mirror .. I cant meet my eyes .. god am nervous no no not abt drama but abt ... damn it soo hard to confess *sigh*

Manikk .. my best friend my boyfriend my life my everything *smile*

I look into my eyes - I LOVE U MANIKK .. I palm my face blushing..

No one pov..

Cabir manikk dhruv abhi sam and their other co- actors where standing behind stage reharsing aand preparing themselves for their character..

They all were in their costume.. the ancient wear with boots ..

Mukti and navya walk toward them they are in their schul uniform with still walky talky in their hands all exhausted.. dhruv was struggling with his shirts thread..

Nav - dhruv ruk mai kardeti hu.. she ties the thread and smile..

Nav - all the best mere bhai .. dhruv smile so as all..

Aryaman and soha were discussing over something..

Mukti - so all the very best guyz just rock it ohhk.. she thumps up all smile..

Suddenly alya came wearing a beautifull off shoulder white gown with white tiara on her head just little feathery make uplooking asusual beautiful..


Their mouth flung open.. manikk look behind her but there was no one he sigh sadly ..

Mukti - aloo u look stunning my Barbie...they all nodded.. alya jump in excitement

Aly- aww thank u soo soo much ..

After getting hell curious manikk ask - tweety kha hai yaar..

They all look toward eachother and "hmmm" in rhythm

Manikk gave them a flat look and they all nodded in no and burst in laughter..

Ayesha (their classmate and volunteer)- guyz drama ka 1st part start ho gya hai .. alya go ur scene .. and next scene is of prince &brothers and princess ohhk.. she quickly said and alya and navya left with her..

Manikk ask restlessly - yaarr mukti go call tweety jalid drama start ho gya haii.. mukti nodded and was abt to left was monika mam call her so she went to meet her..

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In hall of the annual function..

It was full with special guest with some students and their parents .. all teachers..

Miss.sen started narrating the narration of the story..the spotlight was on her

*once upon a time far far ago there was kingdom which overlooked the woods and mountains.. the kingdom of happiness where a king was happily living with his beautiful wife and his little adorable princess and with trust and loyality of his kingdom's people...

(king - Sam , queen - alya , princess - nanidni)

The spotlight fall on the stage ..

King queen and their little daughter were playing near lake giggling laughing .. the king was blessed with them ..little princess hug her moher tightly and king hug both of his life... guard were all around them for their protection..

Suddenly everything got collapsed as from no where the south neighbour kingdom suddenly stacked them .. they were fighting fighting fighting and they WON.. but they hear a loud scream ..

The king turn and saw his life his queen was lying on floor with blood all over her white gown and his little princess is crying badly..

The king kneel beside queen and held her in his arm.. "king don't think that our jouney just ends here we have l..long way to go" she was choking.. "king takecare of urself and my little p..princess" this were her last word.

.that day everything collasp for them..

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Manikk - damn tweety kha hai mai jaake dekhta hu.. he was abt to go but cabir stops him

Cab - are u mad or watt abhi humari baari hai ..

Abhi - ya right manikk lets just wait for her she'll be here.. manik sigh .. situation got tensed .. but two persons were smirking evily (u kno who are they ..)

Mukti came running to them - guyzz nandini ?? ..they all nodded in no ..

Nav - guyz lets go ur turn ..

**********

Here nandini is trying her best to open the door of her green room but damn it wasn't even opening.. she is shouting for help but there is no one as her green rrom is quite away frm hall..

She was banging the door but in nxt min the door flung open revealing the unexpected person who open the door "lara" nandini squel..

Lara - nandini u don't have much time just run drama alredy started just run ..

Nandini nodded frantically and started running .. she stop and turn toward lara who is panting heavily because of running ..


she smile looking toward her and lara gesture her to ruun with GENUINE SMILE..

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IN ANNUAL FUNCTION HALL(drama continuous)

It been 20 years since that incident .. the king became alone .. his one and only princess became cranky stubborn angry head but with a beautiful pure soul and heart which is only known to her father..

King - my daughter alesa she is now 25 and it's the 6th kingdom who rejected her as their would be queen... cant they see my princess pure heart ..my queen's last word were to take care of our princess and I will ... I will find a prince for my princess who can see her pure soul.. I will..

Scene change

In neighbor kingdom ..

The five group of brothers who were riding on their hoarse running toward woods for hunting .. they are the prince of their neighbor kingdom..

(cabir- rick, dhruv - harry , abhi - samiual, aryaman - rameual , manikk - jack)

Rick jump frm his hoarse - brother's am thirsty.. he was the most junier one..

Harry - brother even am tired I cant hunt more..

Samiual- jack u r elder than us na so go get us some water go go.. they all literally pushed him into the woods ..

they were taking training frm there elder brother JACK and now they want break..

jack was utterly handsome man , there parents died actually they were murdered by their enemies who got DEATH as their punishment..since than jack is managing everything his brothers are his son ..

he went into the woods for some source water..

(behind stage - mukti is praying crossing her finger - nandu where are u man.. all were tenced..but suddenly..)

Jack walked more inside jungle.. he pushed the bushes which were coming Infront of him and he saw...

His eyes got stuck ..

(manikk pov: damn I cant breath , she is .. she is beautifull .. angel..)

He saw her sleeping peacefully with a dreamy smile on her face ..the flowers were all around her ... like a fairy frm dreamn land..


Jack quietly kneel beside her adoring her .. he caressed her cheek like a feather and ohh no !!

Her eyes shot open and she got up with jurk startlet him..

Alesa - heyy !! who are u ??.. she shout angrily

Jack - I .. I .. he was stammering

Alesa - ohhh hang on hang on so u r the one .. father told me abt u .. how dare u ?? u wanna marry me .. u donkey !! .. she shout like maniac while he stood there shock ..

(audience laugh on this scene .. mukti navya lara miss.sen even they too laugh they didn't kno their friends are this much talented..manikk was chuckling inside so as nandini)..

Soon his scared face turn into smirk ..

Jack - ohh yes beautifull am surely gona take u to my home soon may be sooner.. he wink her..

She scratch her head annoy by him .. arghh" she strom her feet ans starts walking and he too started following her

Alesa - don't follow me.. she said walking

Jack - am not .. he said playfully following her..

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Backstage..

Mukti - damn nanidni where were u ?? *sigh* thank god tu time pe aagyi.. mukti hug her..

Nav - mukti call sam nxt is his scene..mukti nodded and they left ..

Nandini saw lara and she was abt to go toward her but lara gesture her not to come and smile at her..

She didn't realize when manikk took her at the corner and pin her with the wall..her eyes widen in shoock..But the moment she look into his eyes the words which his eyes were speaking were incredible.. there were so much of love inside them and that is only .. only for her..

Manikk - do u no the definition of beautiful in word ??.. he askhuskily all the time caressing her cheek .. she was least in her sences..

He continued - MY NANDINI my tweetie is the definition ... her lips curve into a big smile ..he was leaning toward her.. she smile and peck his lip and quickly ran frm there..

Nan - patience jack .. she tease him and ran frm there..

He shook his head resting his forehead on wall chuckling at their craziness..

**********

Drama continuous..

Alesa's father king - what u wanna marry her ?? he look astonished..

Jack - yes ! I fell in love with her at first sight . your highness! I will always protect ur daughter I will always love her I will always take care of her more than u just give me a chance.. jack pleaded..

King's lip curved into smile but tear escape frm his eyes..

King patted his head - just keep my princess happy.. jack nodded ..

Scene change (it was jack's kindom and its his room)

Finnaly after lots of manofy session with a grand ceremony jack and alesa are together may be .. jack's brothers are on cloud 12th haha.. jack was their father now they got their mother too..

Th four brother peep inside jacks room and a comb came flying and directly hit rick's face .. he wince..and suddenly vase pillow's were flying toward them..

Harry - ohh my god watt happened to alesa..

Rick - may be she is missing her father..

Rameual - as in rick !! if it that so .. what we do when we miss mother and father sameual ??

Samual - umm cry..

Harry - exactly may be its her style to show her sadness..

Rameual - how!! By throwing innocent things like seriously..

(the audience were laughing listening there convo..)

The four brothers VERY IMP DISCUSSION came to an helt when jack enter's there..

Rick - brother I think alesa is missing her father that's why she is throwing things..

Jack laughed at his little brother innocence.. he very well knew its her trick to escape frm them she is stubborn but not more than him he smirk..

Jack - wait I'll see your mother.. he left inside with some food in his hand..

In room ..

He enters inside .. she saw him and threw a pillow at him but he escape..

Jack - good morning my queen I hoope u r comfortable here .. yesterday u slept without having dinner now be my good queen and have this.. he was arranging the messy room and she was giving him sharp glare huffing..

Alesa - didn't I told u I don't wanna marry ?? she said in poisonous tone..

He was just humming song tottaly ignoring her and choosing dress for her..this irritates her more

Jack - hooney this will suit u ... She threw the dress and was abt tto leavebut he stops her

Jack - your father told me everything abt you alesa.. u kno we five frm childhood we crave for love our parents died in front of usstill we survive just for them ..alesa we all were alone until u came in our life if u too will leave us than we aill be alone again .. he said sadly..

His confession shook her ..tears brimmed in her eyes.. she started walking outside..jack gesture his brothers..

Rameual walk toward alesa and forcefully make her sit on dining , rick served some food ,haary arrange the plate ,sameual gave spoons to jack..

Jack sat beside her and took the spoon near her mouth she didn't object ad ate that..finnaly all smile and hug them..

Its been a whole month..

They all are living happily .. alesa always pamper her for son aka rick harry sameual ramual .. and jack and she they are living like good friends..

She love to show her tantrums on them and they happily bear her tantrums specially jack..

Finnaly it was the day when jack decides to confess... his brothers took alesa out so that jack can prepare he arrange every thing..

Alesa came inside wearing beautiful white gown just like her mother wore last time..she waked inside and gasp.."jack"

He was kneeling in front of her with red roses - queen of my heart , when I saw u first time in jungle lying on flowers just like an angel I fell in love with u .. you are magic my queen I kno its quite crzy but wil u start new journey of our life frm now happily ever after one?..

Tears brimmed in her eyes she took the roses - yes my king I will, we will forever..

He stood up and held her by her waist - I love u he confessed ..


Alesa look into his eyes - I LOVE U TOO MANIKK..

(nandini confessed him .. manikk eyes popped out .. ahha not only manikk but mukti ,alya .dhruv ,abhicabir navya they were in verge of heart attck .. they were peeping inside stage frm backstage )

And their happy hourny started they live happily ever after..

(the red curtains fell down,,audience were going crazy with happiness and are clapping loudly..end of the drama )

**********

Here inside manikk and nandini both were in same position

Manikk - can u repeat please.. he almost pleaded

Nandini chuckle - I LOVE U MY MANIKK ..

In happiness he hug her tightly twirling her round and shouting "I love u too I love u too"..

And their friends jumped on themmm..and in result the all fell down..

(ohh woww i wrote the drama thing yeyy.. ohhk i kno the drama was not upto the marks well sorry for that.. and sorry for the late update i was stuck with our scul annual function so . sooryy:))

Edited by kyaramalhotra - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was awesome...the drama was just a fairytale...I loved it...the way u portrayed everything was superb...finally nandini confessed...n Lara helped nandini? Abhi was also not good? What had happened? But manan are happy...I loved it n all others also got to know about them
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
hehehehee
Loving thees fairy dresses
Sooo cuteee
Manan are absolute adorable
Thanks for pm
😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow such an amazing update n jb nandu ne mukabhi ko dahta to onke shakal dekhne layak thi. Who lock nandu In green room n Lara saved her that was a miracle n there drama omg i enjoyed it a lot sooo funny. Manan convo wow tooo awsm . At last finally nandu confessed her luv to manik
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Posted: 8 years ago
I though you forgot about ur story...
But finally u updated..
Thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks for their confession...
Drama was sooo beautiful... I loved it...
W8ing for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: princess08

It was awesome...the drama was just a fairytale...I loved it...the way u portrayed everything was superb...finally nandini confessed...n Lara helped nandini? Abhi was also not good? What had happened? But manan are happy...I loved it n all others also got to know about them

Continue soon


aww thank u soo much dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

chapter 25**

At the middle of the coold midst night.. stars are shining to their bright..the big full moon is showering silver light... the winds were flowing toward east making the long soft grass also flow with a rythemic voice..


He halt his car and look beside him, his official girlfriend is sitting crossing her arms with grumpy face.her eyes are blindfolded. he smile..

He held her palm and lead her toward where he want to .. finnaly he reach the destination ..he move two step back frm her..

Kisi shaam ki tarah
Tera rang hai khila Main raat ik tanha
Tu chand sa mila

She is beauty she is mesmerizing she is love his love..

She shiver when the cool breeze hit her bare legs and arm .. insects are buzzing..Not felling his presence around her she call him "manikk"

He just smile but didn't respond all he was doing is just adorning her..

Haan tujhe dekhta raha
Kisi khaab ki tarah
Jo ab saamne hai tu
Ho kaise yaqeen bhala

she quickly open her blindfold and the scene infron of her took her breath away..

Its the same place which they discovered when they were cycling..it was shock for her the world greatest shock for her ..

Her eyes are twinkeling with the light of fireflies.. fireflies flireflies everywhere fireflies..

She look toward him smiling to the fullest he smile back .. she ran toward him and hug him ever so tightly tht he stumble back but he picked her a little up frm floor.. both were laughing to their heart out..

Toota jo kabhi taara, sajna ve!
Tujhe Rabb se maanga
Rabb se jo maanga mileya ve...
Tu mileya to jaane na dunga main

She broke the hug slowy - u remember ha !!

He remove the strand from her face which were even showering on his because of wind - "that was the most beautiful night of my life how can I forget that.. she smile

"Come" he grab her palm and ran toward a place

Wait where?? She exclaim but he drag her without responding..

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*gasp* She was speechless .. the scene was just mesmerizing that big pong with wooden halt bridge witht mountains around it and a small old boat in pond..


She turn back to look at him who is rubbing the back of his neck with sheepish smile.

Man - wo yesterday night a I came here to give u a surprise for today and I discover this place .. he said sheepishly..

Nan - u came here at night all alone just for me .. she ask hell shocked

Yeah" he replied more sheelpily ..

Awww he pull his cheek and tightly kiss his cheek to which he blush more harder and she tightly hug him sideway..

**********

They were sitting in the boat ..nandini being hyper excited she was jumping clapping tring to catch fireflies who were all around her..

He was only looking toward her..


He moved a little more close toward her ..she ws looking upward ..

"Manikk u kno firefl.. she stop her breath hitched his face was inches apart from her.. there was soo much love in his eyes which was just for her .. she feels that she is the most luckiest girl but little did she kno that its viceversa for him...

He dipped his fingers insdie her hair while she kept looking at him..they were only looking toward eachother.. there was only silence with glowing fireflies..


He was looking deep inside her eyes still moving his finger in her hairs -

"you kno whenever I look at you ! I can see the rest of my life in front of my eyes"

"somewhere between all our laughs ,our long talks , our lame jokes , our finght I fell in love with u" he said soo lovingly.. she smile

He continues still soo much love in his words "I am so glad that u r here it helps me realize hw beautiful my world is!! You are the best best friend I could ever have and yeah afcorce the bestest girlfriend " he said with loving smile...

Itni bhi haseen main nahi, o yaara ve!
Mujhse bhi haseen toh tera ye pyar hai
Haan itni bhi haseen main nahi
O yaara ve!
Mujhse bhi haseen tera pyar...

She was feeling herself the most luckiest girl on earth.. how can someone love her soo much ?? is she that much lucky?? Or her stars suddenly topsed turvy..

"I love you so so much manikk" she said which he was dieing to listen again..

Ke tera mera pyar ye
Jaise khwab aur duaa
Haan sach kar raha inhe
Dekho mera Khuda...

He sigh leaning his forehead toward her and closing his eyes

"I love you too" he said resting on her forehead ..

He open his eyes - " waisee can I borrow a kiss from you ?? I promise I'll give it back to you" he said with a playfull smile on his lip..

Toota jo kabhi taara sajna ve
Tujhe Rabb se maanga
Rabb se jo maanga, mileya ve...
Tu mileya to jaane na dungi main

"Manikk" she whine ..He laughed a little..

They moved more ahead,he tilted his head a little, than their lips met, he kissed her ever soo softly..there was no urge no restless, they did it beautifully,

His hands gripped her waist and her's kneaded in his naped hair deepening the kiss..

They broke the slowly.. and gaped at eachother eyes ith never ending smile.. her cheeks were cherry red ..she look down..

He again lean toward her .. and kiss her forehead so affectionately that she shiver and hugged him tightly .. they were n peace..

Finnaly manikk's dream came true ..

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From way to home nandini is all the time blabbering about the history of that place where thay just had an magical date and he was leniently listening to her.. they fights .still laugh at the lamest joke ,pull eachother legs ..

They reach nandini's home and the view make them chuckle but that chuckle turn into laugh..

They saw their all friends were sleeping outside the gate in awkward position..

Listening their laugh cabir's woke up .. he blink his eyes two three times than shot open his eyes ..

Cab -Aagye aagye aagyye .. he shout soo loudle that all got up with jurk...

Dhr exclaim getting scare - Mummy mummy ..

Manikk and nandini were shocked..but that shocked turned into scrae one..

Mukti alya abhi navya cabir dhruv look at eachother than ..

*splash splash splash splash*

They were throwing water balloons to manikk and nandini..

Mukti threw the water ballon - ye lo .. ye bhi lo .

Manikk and nanidni were jumping here and there.. the watchman was laughing..

Cab- kamino kitte dino se chalrha hai ha ?? .. he threw the ballon

Man - cabir mere...bhai .aa aree .. sorry...na plzz oouch..

Abhi - sorry ke bacche .. he threw 2 waterballons together ..

All were throwing ballons toward eachother at last they all laugh anf had a group hug ..

Mukti - saalo mujhe pata tha ..kuch toh paak rha hai inke beech..

Navya second her - even I had the clue..

Cabir - afcorce inko dekhke hi pata chal jata haiii..

After three second abhi dhruv and alya popped watterballon on their head..

Nav, cab , muk - what the f!! manikk and nanidni chuckle

dhruv - toh u should have told us na ..

Abhi - humne kya koi paap kiya tha..

Alya hug nandini - yeyy we got another couple the cutesttt...

Cabir wrapped his arm around nanidni - waise tumlog 4 hanto se kar kya rhe the huhh.. he ask in a teasing manner..

Nandini also wrap her arm around him - wo kya hai na cabir baccho ki planning karrhe the .. she said leaving cabir speechless

All laugh and they all 9 enter inside laughing teasing .. watchman also got back to his work..

(yaahooo!! The much awaited date do you like it... I just hope I kno am late ... pardom me ab ate nhi hongi pakka promise ,. I want to kno ur reviews very eagerrr yayyy)

Edited by kyaramalhotra - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful Story
u r back my munchkin
i misssed u soo much

Koi ni
Buzyty with exams kya
Ki health issues


Thanks for the pm
D OK pm me next part

Vidhu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow itne dino bd update bt nt problem its was such a wort waiting update mana become offical gf n bf wooo tooo awsme

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