**MaNan ff -'L@nd of $weetie$' updated chap 25 on pg 82* - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ky21

awesome update...
yaar yeh sab kitni masti karte h...
and manan are super cute...
everybody's room is damn beautiful. .
waiting for the next...
stay blessed! !!


thank u so much😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aditimanan

vry nice funny enchanting update
yr kaash hamari life bhi aise ho ek dum cool
so loved their bond nd parents


thank u so muchh and dear hum apni life ko aisa bana sakte haii..😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shaan...

Amazing update...

Manan's moments were cute...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...


thank uu😊😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: avneetmalhotra

Awsme update n too much funny luved there bonding n yes i dont like him as manik dad


thank u som much😉😃😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow dear superb update

I just love ur story its awsum

Nd story tau super duper sweet hai hi but i bet u must b more sweeter than ur story

Nd i m sorry ke maine ye pehle nhi padhi but its just too good

Nd i would love to read more

Thanks for the pm
Update soon dear

Take care nd God bless u
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Love_Queen

Wow dear superb update

I just love ur story its awsum

Nd story tau super duper sweet hai hi but i bet u must b more sweeter than ur story

Nd i m sorry ke maine ye pehle nhi padhi but its just too good

Nd i would love to read more

Thanks for the pm
Update soon dear

Take care nd God bless u


aww thank u soo muchh...and ohh my godd meri taariff aww m bhushing blushing ☺️☺️😉😆 haha thank u so much

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Posted: 9 years ago

thank uu 😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchi116

Amazing update loved it


thank uuu😆😃😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsom update soon 😆 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

chapter 12

(girls dress ..guyzz i m so blah abt boyzz dreses so i cant uplod boys dress😭)


Manikk cabir dhruv abhi navya and alya they all are in airport sitting in waiting lounge all set for the tripp .. boyz are wearing casual dreeses(shorts and t shirt) and girls are also wearing comfortable dresses ..alya and navya they both are playing with bubbly or we can say "bechari ka makeover" but bubbly is loving this make up an all..dhruv and abhi are trying to flirting but they are getting only slaps and kicks nothing else but still .. shameless boys are flirting smily ...cabir and manikk they both are doing nothing but just sweetly insulting eachother ...

Manikk accha cabir baba wanna ask u something ...sahi sahi batana he ask him

Cabir wore his goggle and stood in attitude as if he is baap of wekepidea pucho bacche

Maniikk holding his smile how to solve maths...

and the bom blast on cabir's head..Cabir remove his goggle at first he gave him nervous smile but soon change in smirk toh bte 1st u have to write down the problem and manik raise his eyebrow than 2nd start crying 😆😆

They both burst in laughter manikk punch his arm saale tu kitna bada wala kamina hai aaj pata chala😉

Cabirr u kno what dude am jealous of my parents ..i'll never have a kid as cool as theirs... manikk rolled his eyes and chuckle while cabir wink him..

Abhi and dhruv came running to them breathing heavily..

Cabirr oyy kya marathon se bhag ke aye h..

Abhi sadly said ek ladki ko maine line mardiya yaar par jaisse hi wo mudi😭

Dhruv laughing said wo aunty nikli and they aall burst in laughter...while abhi huff

Abhi yaar wo toh mere piche hi pad gyi h..pheww he sigh dude wo toh medical store chali gyii hai yaaar ..meri izzat bachaloo bhaiyo plzzz...they all are pressing their lips to control their laugh but they fail...😆😆

Alya and navya came there holding bubbly...

Alya said confusingly wats upp guyzzz!!

Cabir said still laughing skyyy!!

Navya shutup Bandar !!hua kya hai koi batao...

Than manik narrate them whole story navya and alya palm their moth but burst in laughter

Abhi shout oyy wo aagyi bachalo bhai plzz the lady came toward them

lady seducely said come baby to abhimanyu but cabir came in between

cabir xcuse me how dare u to touch my boyfriend the lady shock and cabir rock everyones eyes buldge out.including abhii...

cabir side hug abhimanyu and siad in little girly tone where abhi was standing like statute open mouth wide eyes will u plzz leave us alone..

the lady is still in shock . when she came back to earth she made bad face and hurridly left from their..

all (manikk dhruv alya navya)look toward the "new couple" hanging their mouth open and laugh their heart out rolling on floor..

abhi recover from his shock and pushed acbir who is crying because of laughing..

abhi said almost shout making bad face yuck chiii saale koi or bhana ni mila tujhe huhh kamine chii yaarr thats disgusting...making bad face.

Cabir kutte ekto maine teri izzat bachai or tu ja sale tujhse baat ni karta still sitting on floor controlling his laugh.. all are laughing

Manikk said abhi yaar tujhpe movie banni chahiye haste haste lag gye raaste abse na dekh vekh kar line mara kar ..varna koi tujhe bhagwan k liye bhi nhi chodega and they all start laughing this time abhi also laugh sheepish

Abhi said sheepish ya ya whatever

Than there is announcement that the plane is landed for UK

Navya said guyzz the plane is here ab wo maharaniyan kha hai

Cabir lightly slap alya's head stupid tujhe bola than a unko leke aajana ...kumbhkaran ki ma hai wo log uthe ni honge ab takk

all panik Maniikk yaar ye dono behene sudhrenge ni he said shooking his head ..after 10 min

The manager came to them sir when we can take off ..

Cabir are why u will take off don't tell me u have rocket In ur back manager look little shock

Manikk said are no no he didn't mean it
but cabir instantly said are no no I mean it tan or man se.. the manager quickly said sir just inform us when we can take off the plane ..thank u soo much and left from there..all chuckle

Manikk look at cabir and slap him kaminna

Cabir fake cried and alya hug him awww

They all went inside where there is plane..than they hear the voice rukooo

They turn and found their two silly friend coming running toward them holding their luggage

Nandini and mukti they both are running toward them holding their luggage and nandini's froggu is siiting on nandini's luggage clutching her bag becoz she is running...

They both stop near their frends breathing heavily..

Navya ask raising her eyebrow any explaination

Nandini and mukti point eachother iske karan

Their friends sigh and left from their but manik and nandini were last manikk look toward nandini who is still breathing heavily he smile..he peck her cheek and whisper looking beautiful tweety and left from their tounge in cheek..while nandini wide her eyes but blush..

They all enter inside smiling but everyones smile faded..they all move their gaze to manikk and glare him..while manikk gave them nervous smile..

Mannik guyyz let I call dad first ..he hurridly called his dad's no.

Manikk hello dad.. a private jet like seriously he ask angryly

Nandini snatch the phone rockstar why private jet????? Annoyed

Manik's dad are princess for u guyzzz safty... now no argument ..enjoy ..

Nandin but she was abt to say something but the phone disconnectd

Cabir ohh god mere airhostage ko dekhne ka spana adhura reh gya...he fake cried entering inside...all shook their head..

They had lots of mastii in their way to UK like irritating the pilot ..cabir's snoring like monkey and some gupshup..and the laughing session of "the great abhi and cabir's incident"

They reach uk at 6:00 am ..one by one they came outside plane rubbing their eyes and yawning..

Nandini cameout side and open her arms but suddenly zuzuzuzuzu the cool breeze passed by her she rub her arm god why this is damn cold manikk side hug her and said picture abhi baki hai mere dost,, and wink her she huff

Than they all shout waat laga dete hai uk ki and all run toward exit door happily...😆😉😛

(hey guyzz i kno its chotu sa update...but yahh isse bhi bada ek bad news hai ab mai directly 22 march ko nxt chap update karungi actually my xams are coming and have to study + dance also so yeah sorry...waise dont miss my story that much ohk 😆😆😉 just kidding ..but but dont forget my story😉😆 plz plz plz )


Edited by kyaramalhotra - 9 years ago

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