**MaNan ff -'L@nd of $weetie$' updated chap 25 on pg 82* - Page 15

Originally posted by: Aakifa_Hussain

Well I think Javed shaikh will b perfect 4 dis charactr..
he is a pakistani actor n he has done few bolly films too..

he has a billionare's persona.. he is handsome too..

Wat u think..

ohh ya he is perfect !!but he look litlle elder i mean nyonika is soo young..how about ronit roy??? aditya pancholii???

Nope dea..

N Javed shaikh doesn't luks elder..bt nyonika luks younger.. :D
trust me they fits perfectly as d couple u described..
God.. No aditya pancholi.. A big no..
I jst get vilanious vibes 4rm him.. :D

Originally posted by: Aakifa_Hussain

Thank u.. :) :* :*

most welcome 😊😊 i''ll update his pic tomorrow😉

Originally posted by: kyaramalhotra

most welcome 😊😊 i''ll update his pic tomorrow😉

Okkiees..!!
bt yeah dnt edit d cs..
Make a note n dan update it..
It'l b better..
jst a sugstn..

Originally posted by: Aakifa_Hussain

Okkiees..!!
bt yeah dnt edit d cs..
Make a note n dan update it..
It'l b better..
jst a sugstn..

ohh ya sure thank uu😊

Interesting cs

Loved it

Waiting for the update
Update soon dear

Awww soo cute sry thoda late comment kiya bt jo tum pm bejte ho na vo open ni hota

Originally posted by: avneetmalhotra

Awww soo cute sry thoda late comment kiya bt jo tum pm bejte ho na vo open ni hota

thank uu so much ...and dont worry is baar definatelt open hoga may be😛

Luved d cs...

Chapter 11

They all are sitting on rocks near lake talking stupid

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.suddenly manikk tune his guitar and everyones attention goes toward him.

Ho hai zara si meethi-meethi halki si khaari (he sang this lines sitting on rock)
Yari yari, yaari yaari, yaari yaari.. (than he turn toward his friend and sang smilyy)
Ho.. yaar woh jo samjhe baat bin bole saari
Yaari yaari, yaari yaari, yaari yaari.. (than his all friend gather around him and they all start enjoying )

(all boyes gather in line ans they start dancing +singing ..manik his tuning his guitar)

Wo o ho..
Zinda yaaron se hui zindagi
Wo o ho.
Teri-meri, meri-teri yaari-yaari (manik and cabir sang and they put their hand aroung eachother's shoulder and they start dancing)
Hoo.. (while the girls are in their own world dancing crazily)

Ho kachchi pakki gullakon to tod-taad kar (manikk g oes toward mukti and he tickle her she laugh while the other's were dancing )
Chillaron ko apney saare jod-jaad kar (than he comes near dhruv and they both highfi)
Tere hisse ki main smile ko khareed lun (than he goes toward nandini and hold her hand and poke her nose to which she smile he also smile)
Meri smile ka kahin na kahin se tu jugad kar (but suddenly abhi jump between them and drag manikk and sang and manikk laugh)
Chai wale adde ki bhi chai se hai pyari (dhruv sang along with alya jumping and dancing)
You know.. (abhi sang near mukti's ear and she jump on her place lttle scare )
Yaari yaari, yaari yaari, yari yari.. (than mukti run behing abhi to beat him and other laugh)
Wo.. Jiski chal rahi hai abhi tak udhaari.. (than cabir sang smirking along with nandini )
Yaari yaari, yaari yaari, yari yari

(they all start dancing with eachother happily )

Wo o ho..
Zinda yaaron se hui zindagi
Wo o ho.
Teri-meri, meri-teri yaari-yaari
Hoo.. (they all entwine their hand and shout)
Beer ke nashe mein talli hoke jhoom lein (cabir act llike he is drunk and intentionally fa;ll on navya amd navya slap him)
Mastiyon ke raaste mein jhande gaad dein (dhruv dig a wood on somewhere but it hit his leg and hee cried in pain)
Hosh humse apna ghar ke le agar pata (abhi sang wrapping his hand around manik's shoulder)
Arey hosh se kahein ki hum hai aish mein pal (manikk came in front of him and sang winking and all gang jump on him)

Class bunk maar ke pahaadon pe jaari (What?)(cabir and navya sang happily without any fight woww)
Yaari yaari, yaari yaari, yari yari.. (mukti abhi and dhruv sang holding eachother )

Wo ho.. Ghar pe goli deke bhaagne ki bimari (Wassup?)(dhruv and alya sang pushing eachother)
Yaari yaari, yaari yaari, yaari yaari.. (manikk and nandini sang together hugging eachother..than all gang jump on them and they fall in water)

Go..
Wo o ho..
Zinda yaaron se hui zindagi (than they start splashing water on eahother and pushing eachother in water)
Wo o ho..
Teri-meri..(manikk sang picking nandini in his back)
Meri-teri yaari yaari(all sang hugging each group hug )
Hoo..(atlast they fall back on water)

Friends foreverr (manik shout and they all laugh and hug him)

They all came out from water shivering rubbing there hands

Cabir said in shivering tone g.u.ys ye sum.m.er m.a.i ii.tni thand k.k.yo lag rhi hai aachu he sneeze

Navya also said in same tone 1^st time u r right cabir with shake voice

cabir smile and said thank you as if bohot badi tareef kar di ho all shook their head

alya said oyy nandu tere bag mai scarf hai kya dena

nandini wait aloo dekhti hu ..than she open her bag and found two scarf she took 1 give her but dhruv snatch that and said thank u so much and me walk away and cabir also follow him..

alya huff and shout idiot and manikk punch dhruv's arm and he laugh..

dhruv reply thank u baby and smirk every one laugh

nandini said aww don't spoil ur mood alya ye lo I have one more she again give that to her but again abhi snatch that and said thank u bacchi and also left and alya fake cried ..and nandini hug her...

mukti shout oyy u chomu wapis de use standing up

abhi wipe his hair ni dunga and smirk

mukti start pulling abhi's hair and same with abhi ...isse pehle ki raita fail jaye manikk and nandini came between them to save their inoccnt hairs manikk pull mukti and nandini pulls abhi at last they stop fighting

abhi fine ohhk enough for today setting his hair

mukti ya fine also setting her hair and she walk toward alya after giving glare and abhi smile manikk and nandini look at eachother sigh and shook their head..

navya said guyzz apne adde pe chalte hai yha bohot thand lag rhi hai rubbing her arms

cabir came and hug navya mujhe bhi thand lag rhi hai navya push him and he falls back he augh shamelessly...

manikk ha chaloo guyz its really getting cold here..they all agreed and walk toward ther "adda "

its hilly type area were there is awsm view and floor have only grass and flower.

They all are lying on grass on eachother like cabir is lying and mukti keeps her head on his stomach as pillow and cabir;s leg in on dhruv's stomach navya abhi and alya and manikk are lying on grass simply talking nthing just lying closing there eyes suddenly manic open his eyes and looks here and there as he is finding someone than he murmur tweety kha gyi

Than he stood up and look here and there and found her sitting on cutted old tree rubbing her arms he smile and walk toward her.

.."

Manikk pov

I saw her sitting on old cutted tree she rub her arm and smiling ohh how beautifull she looks ..i walk toward her and wrabbed my arm around her to give her warm she shiver and I think she recogise me she looked at me and give her million dollar smile and I also smile back,,,,,

I softly ask so my girl kya soch rhi hai

She replied kuch ni manikk bas bohot accha feel h rha hai I felt like m the most happiest person on earth...she smile and rested her head on my shoulder and hugged me from my waist .. her hairs are falling on my face ohh I can live like this for ever ...

I peck her hair and she hug my waist tightly

Nandini I called her sofly she look toward me cool breeze in falling on our face her hairs are flowing I look at her big doe eyes which have something special today that blush yeah she is blushing I sofly caresse her face and she close her I softly smile ...but suddenly cabir sneeze aachu rubbing his eye huhh sleepy head ..we move away from eachother we are not doing any eye contact god !! what I have done...

Nandini pov

Today am soo happy come on nandini u always feel this happy I chuckle to myself ...the cool breeze passed my me I rub my arms suddenly I felt warm lots of current pass through my spin I shiver .. I quickly recognize who it is my manikk !! hey wait my manikk !! stupid nandini iske bare mai baadme sochenge..i look at his face and saw him smiling I wish his smile never fade I also amile him back..

He ask me so my girl kya soch rhi hai omg my girl heyy just he call me my gir ..nandini kuch zyada hi soch rhi hai zippp

I replied kuch ni manikk bas bohot accha feel ho rha hai I felt like m the most happiest person on earth... and I smile than I rested my head in his arm and hug his waist ohh this is peace I have smile on my face which reason is only manikkk ohh god kkash ye pal yhi ruk jae...

He pecked my hair and I close my eyes ohh I love this feeling.. suddenly the cool breeze started making me more snuggule to him ..

He called me nandini its very rare he call me otherwise he always call me tweety I looked at his eyes those deep brown eyes.and I found myself lost in it.whwnever our eyes met I felt like am gonna melt anytime ... He caressed my face the heat run through my cheek and omg am blushing..i felt jitters in my body he softly smile ..uff I cant control I close my syes and syddenly aachu cabir sneeze aachu I shot open my eyes and we move back there is awkwardness between us !!i hate awkwardness...

No one pov..

Cabir again sneeze aachuuu than said ufff thande thade pani se nhi nahana chahiye or apne kamine dosto k sath toh bilkul ni...he again sneeze

Abhi jump on him from back oyyy kamine galti teri hume kyo gali de rha hai...

Navya are wo sab chodo guyzz castle kab jana hai...she ask and everyone look toward manikk and manikk look toward nandini

To remove the awkwardness she loudly ask maniik oyy kal nikalte hai na plzz

All close their ear including manikk than mukti said toh chilla kyo rhi haiii hum tere pas hi khade hai..

She gave them sheepish smile..manik wrapped his hand around her shoulder and said ur wish my command and she laugh..

Dhruv guys 5 baj gye hai nikalna chahiye packing bhi karni haii..

They all agreed and left walking to cabir's house

In cabir's house

They all enter inside.. nandini ask maa kha hai looking here and there..

Cabir apne dusre ghar m hogi orphanage all chuckle in mumma's boy statement

Navya said chslo nikalte hai ab they all stand up and left one by one..

Abhi dhruv and manikk in manik's jifi ,,navya nad alya in alya's car and nandini mukti in their own car..

In navya's home

(navya room)"

She is packing her dress... talking on phone

Navya ha daddu u don't worry mai wha pohoch k aapko phone kardungi..

Than she laugh accha toh aap unse bhi flirt karre the ..thats not done than she again laugh

Ohhk by daddu take care and yes enjoyyy and she quickly hung the call ..than she run to dhruv's room

And without knocking open the door and a t-shirt hit her face she open her eyes and her anger rose pick she shout dhruvv k bacche..his whole is messed up with his clothes

Dhruv said irritaely navya abhi ni baad mai..am damn confuse meri packing kar de na..

She sigh and murmur iska kuch ni ho sakta idiot monkey and she start packing

Alya's home

(alya's room)

she is talking to avantika and her mom.. she is in her room

mom's mai kya karu kuch samajh ni aarha kon konsii dress lu

avantika beta take some short dreeses... its summer

vrushika ya u r right avantika ..beta take some short dress and nandini or muktii se baat hui use bhi bol comfortable dresses lene or navya ko bhi bol de

alya happily said thank u so much mom's love u

avantika and vrushika said we love u too and they hung up.

abhi's home

(Abhi's room)

The father son duo are hell irritating aarti atlast she shout shutup..

The father sonn stop and look toward angrybird abhi said little sacre mom..deko na dad ko

Maan said kya mujhe kya dekhegi..aarti apne bte ko bolo cool dress leke jane than they again start aarti finnaly kick them out from room and start her lovely sons packing and smile..

She shout from room door par kaan rakhke khade hone ki zarrooratt ni hai ..dono jaake nandu or muku ko leke aao dinner ke liye ..the father son widened there ayes and happily left to murthy mansion...

In manik's house

He is showing dreeses to bubbly who is selecting his dreeses

Ye red wali lu ki yeallow wali she bark three time that means dono lena hai..she lick her own legg

Manikk hmm nice choice than he wink her and she smirk.

Manikk call his dad hello pops lisren tickets book ho gye

His dad ha sab ho gya abhi mujhe late ho rha hai office mai imp meeting hai mai fir call karta hu

Manikkk smile at his workaholic dad

Manikk ohhk king... queen kha hai..

his dad said murthy mansion gyi hai mujhe bhi jana tha kitne din ho gye harish se ni mila lekin teri ma mujhe meeting m phasa k chali gyi I chuckle

Dad aap harish pa se kal hi mile the he said

His dad sheepishly said toh meri marzi jabibi milu tu phone rak idiot by

Manikk laughing said byyy than he look toward bubbly and again start his packing...

Nandini's home

Mukti and nandini they both are in mukti's room talking on skype with their three mother nyonika avantika and vrushika..

Mukti and nandini standing in front of lappy holding bundle of dresses in their hand

Mukti and nandini mom's ye wala ki ye wala showing dress and the trio are selecting..

Vrushika mukti tujhpe dark colours suit karenge and nandini take some funky dresses u will look good mukti and nandini smile

Avantika or tum dono udhar koi prank kkiya na to samajh lena mujhse koi bura ni hoga

They sheepishly smile than nyonika lightly slap avantika's arm arre mere baccho ko kyo dat rhi hai ...

Vrushika mukti and nandini laugh and avantika huff..but suddenly abhi and his father came inside ..abhi saw his fav ladies on lappy he shout kya baat hai the three beautiful ladies are here ..the tri laugh

than avantika said chup kar badmaash or bhaisaab aap log London se kya gye hume bhooll hi gye huhh

maan are ni bhabiji kaam se majboor or biwi se bhi they all start laughing he continues waise aapki pariyon ko lene aaya hu dinner k liye

nyonika said aarti or anamika bhabhi k hote hue hume baccho kki koi chinta ni hai or abhi enjoy karna wha pe ha baccha or meri pariyon ka dhyan rakhana

vrushika waise abhi abhi bhi sab alya ko fool bana dete hai kya all chuckle

maan are baabhi alya to humari Barbie h,,ap chodiye na wo sab baate accha baccho jaldi aao mai wait karr rha hu ..chalo by bhabi's they all said by and they hung up..

cabirs house

(cabir's room)

he is sleeping peacefully snoring and his mom is packing his bag and than she caress his hair and smily said pagal and left the room and cabir smile and again went to sleep

abhi's home

(abhi's home)

they all enter inside laughing than mukti and nandini run toward aarti and hug her and she stumble on her place uff tum bacche bhi na than she smile

accha chalo jaldi dinner karlo pulaav banaya hai they all jump on dining table and start eating with abhi and mukti fighting ,,,maan's jokes aarti's talk and nandini's silly talk ..

at last abhi drop them home they hug him and first ever time abhi peck mukti's cheek smiling and quickly run from there muktii blush 😳and left inside...both sister hug eachother went to their respective room,,

it 12pm nandini is not sleepy at all she huff and hold her head aaghh mujhe neend kyo ni aaa rhi

than she look toward her froggu she shake him and he open his eyes listen froggu kal tum bhi chal rhe ho ohhk he blink his eyes and she peck him..

nandini took her fav pillow and left to muktii room ..she was about to knock but the door open and she saw mukti is holding a pillow in her hand

they both aks together can I sleep with u they chuckle and they both went inside in mukti's room ..

they both are sleeping ...suddenly nandini ask mukti u like abhi don't u?? raising her eyebrow

mukti sigh she kno that she is going to ask this she anwer yeahhh but he is so annoying

nandini laugh at her silly sister and pat her head so ja wase bhi kal se nind udne wali haii

mukti chuckle and they slept hugging eachother..

(from nxt update the vacation fun will start and yah some manan scene also😉)