MaNan SS||*New Life with Shrink*||Chap 14:pg 85(22-04)

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Bhavik Dave

@davebhavik93

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Hi, The idea is really cool for the study and practice for achievement in life. I also aware about this story but I am not going to tell you just keep updating in lovely manner. kind Attention to Reader : This story is going to be very beautiful so Must read it.

Just give some tadaka by you so the story will be more interested.

The original author preety also described very nice.

Update soon ..!!

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Redcrystal

@Redcrystal

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Nice chapter

A little confusing

But good one

Continue writing

Thanks

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Hi,

Really the character's name is Ankita?? that's cool 😆... ok coming to the chapter, you really have raised my curiosity now about this story...

I knew you had a funny bone and but now i came to know you can be sarcastic too lol... gosh the opening lines about Mumbai were amazingly penned...it really got a big fat smile on my face...

You described the unique traits of Nandini's characters with such precision, seriously hats off... i never knew you had such finesse for writing a character sketch and penning down every single detail which would form a part of your premise ahead... Superb work.

I liked the way you mentioned about her being particular about her marks, her undefined obsession for colours and having a photographic memory... also, the way you mentioned her jogging and how she timed herself...

The description of her family and the rules laid on her were things we all can relate too and good you are being so real... also, description about her friends specially Vaibhav...

You have no idea how enthusiastic i am regarding this story and your writing... You have an amazing flair for writing and i am so proud of you.

I really feel i will learn so much from your work and will try to incorporate it my writing too... Though i will not write anymore for now... But, i'll be here to read your story and will support you always...

Lots of Love...

Ankita

Edited by ankita_t - 9 years ago

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1044737

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

This is insanely incredible..

Beautifully penned😊

The way you descroibed MUMBAI is superb😃😃..Even though I dint visit MUMBAI yet😭.. But your description is enough to know how MUMBAI is..👏

Hehehe!! 😆

Nandini's parents are may be siblings of my parents..

hahaha!!😆😆

U know what I mean..😛😛😉

But I am opposite to nandini..😉

Okkie coming to the story its MIND-BLOWING!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Amazing babe..😎

I just wish I can read all parts in a go..👍🏼

I wanted to comment Lambaaa...😔

But the part is so beautifully penned that

I don't have enough words

to praise you..

Awesome Job Gal.. 👏🤗

TAKE CARE!
STAY BLESSED!!
KEEP SMILING!!!

Edited by UggliBuggli - 9 years ago

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bangfarju

@bangfarju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

superb
nice and
very interesting update.

l really really enjoyed ur update.
plz pm from next.

eagerly looking forward.

update ASAP.

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pinky

@kimnana

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

superb n interesting update ..nice concept really loved it

ty for pm

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Pooja2899

@Pooja2899

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

nice story.
getting more and more interesting.
waiting for next part.
continue soon.

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etu

@etuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

uniqueness overloaded... seriously starting was superb...after reading my curiosity is now on high... OK OK please update soon... yeah if possible then whenever you update please pm me ...

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Sreeja

@Magicshop

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

loved it<3<3
nandu doesnt seem like a pyscho but surely a unique and exceptional case..
it was long update
thanks for updating dear
i love ur writing...
waiting for the story to unfold

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Adeeba

@Aadee04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

This looks weirdly different and so intriguing .
HIM and HER has to be Manik and Nandini.
Hope so .

Well , the zeal to get everything perfect is exhilarating but if overdone will have the opposite consequences .

I am so looking forward to this piece of work .
God bless you girl .