MaNan SS||*New Life with Shrink*||Chap 14:pg 85(22-04) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Dhingli44

This was a long good update 😊.I think that HIM n HER are Manik n Nandini only.
Idk how..coz nowhere in her past u have mentioned about it..but mujhe aisa lagta hai.
This is not one conventional one..I'm so enjoying it.
And sad that her parents do not appreciate her skills.
Umm...not psycho but she seems a bit awkwardly different now!
Wohoo..way to go di.
Ab mastt fat a fat updates dena..Aam aj!
😉
Thanks for the PM

Oye hoon first chu.. 😛

Originally posted by: cmamona

Hey
Beautiful update...
Omg that was insane...
Please tell me u gonna update regular...
Cz if u not I m really gonna poke u in mssgs daily surely without any fail...

She is damm good in studies...
I guess she is so desperate to got herself busy in studies so that she can remove some of his memories...
And this thing is disturbing her...
Ohh god itni padai...
But when she started to laugh I got a shock that what's happening with her...

Even manik remembers her...
Kaha mile hai yeah pehle ..
I don't want to guess...
Ab kya hone Wala hai...

Continue soon
Thanks for pm

Keep smiling
stay blessed

Originally posted by: Tina0987

Nice 😊
cont soon

Originally posted by: davebhavik93

Hi, The idea is really cool for the study and practice for achievement in life. I also aware about this story but I am not going to tell you just keep updating in lovely manner. kind Attention to Reader : This story is going to be very beautiful so Must read it.

Just give some tadaka by you so the story will be more interested.

The original author preety also described very nice.

Update soon ..!!

Originally posted by: ankita_t

Hi,

Really the character's name is Ankita?? that's cool 😆... ok coming to the chapter, you really have raised my curiosity now about this story...

I knew you had a funny bone and but now i came to know you can be sarcastic too lol... gosh the opening lines about Mumbai were amazingly penned...it really got a big fat smile on my face...

You described the unique traits of Nandini's characters with such precision, seriously hats off... i never knew you had such finesse for writing a character sketch and penning down every single detail which would form a part of your premise ahead... Superb work.

I liked the way you mentioned about her being particular about her marks, her undefined obsession for colours and having a photographic memory... also, the way you mentioned her jogging and how she timed herself...

The description of her family and the rules laid on her were things we all can relate too and good you are being so real... also, description about her friends specially Vaibhav...

You have no idea how enthusiastic i am regarding this story and your writing... You have an amazing flair for writing and i am so proud of you.

I really feel i will learn so much from your work and will try to incorporate it my writing too... Though i will not write anymore for now... But, i'll be here to read your story and will support you always...

Lots of Love...

Ankita

Originally posted by: Redcrystal

Nice chapter

A little confusing

But good one

Continue writing

Thanks

Originally posted by: UggliBuggli

This is insanely incredible..

Beautifully penned😊

The way you descroibed MUMBAI is superb😃😃..Even though I dint visit MUMBAI yet😭.. But your description is enough to know how MUMBAI is..👏

Hehehe!! 😆

Nandini's parents are may be siblings of my parents..

hahaha!!😆😆

U know what I mean..😛😛😉

But I am opposite to nandini..😉

Okkie coming to the story its MIND-BLOWING!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Amazing babe..😎

I just wish I can read all parts in a go..👍🏼

I wanted to comment Lambaaa...😔

But the part is so beautifully penned that

I don't have enough words

to praise you..

Awesome Job Gal.. 👏🤗

TAKE CARE!
STAY BLESSED!!
KEEP SMILING!!!

Originally posted by: bangfarju

superb
nice and
very interesting update.


l really really enjoyed ur update.
plz pm from next.

eagerly looking forward.

update ASAP.

Originally posted by: kimnana

superb n interesting update ..nice concept really loved it

ty for pm