MaNan SS||*New Life with Shrink*||Chap 14:pg 85(22-04)

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Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Ok Baki k reply kal and i am ready with the update bus thoda sa modification is left..

i will update soon as i have all the plot in my mind..

i am excited with this story it would be worth watching when pain will collide with humor.. Weird na..??

but see when nandu would be in pain and would be in Mental health care so other patients will be there na so..

ok but in starting 4 5 updates there wont be Manan..

In starting i need to tell you guys what all nandu did to get a grand entry in Mental health care..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hello dear

Nice concept

I didn't read any of your FF

So I don't know how you write

But after reading this

I think you are a good writer

Do continue

I want to read more

Thanks

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mona

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Hey
Firstly Congratulations for this new steps...
For new and interesting journey
I would love to follow you...
I guess this story will defineatly gonna be hard to resist...
Cz when prologue is this damakedar I don't know what will come next...
But I m sure I will chew my nails in waiting for updates... Cz that's already get started...

Amazing amazing prologue...
In starting I was thinking that she might be here for rishu...
But dammm she was here for herself...
And that wrist marks that means she tried to harm herself...
Ohh god..!!!! What's the reasons egarly waiting to know ...
Oops doc manik... Hehehe hehehe... How he gonna treat a hard headed nandu...
Must be treat to read...

Please update soon...

Keep smiling
stay blessed

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Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: davebhavik93

Vatra no arambh khubaj saro karyo che ane je rite mental hospital nu varnan karel che khub saras che and barabar paristhiti ne varnavi che je rite pratham war dawakhana ma jata hoy.Varta raspard che vinanti ke agal chalu rakhajo. Duniyama chamtkar to badha ne game j mate hu khub utejit chu ke aa carta agal na padav ma jase to.

Mul wat ke warta ma manik na nam thi ae je hasy aape che anu rahsya juduj che aene must rite agal na padav ma varnan apjo vanchanar ne maja awase .

Lakhan khub j saras lakhyu che..

Agalni varta jaldi lakhjo.

Jay Shree Krishna.

You comment really made me proud to have a reader like you. .
Keep commenting. .
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Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: davebhavik93

Vatra no arambh khubaj saro karyo che ane je rite mental hospital nu varnan karel che khub saras che and barabar paristhiti ne varnavi che je rite pratham war dawakhana ma jata hoy.Varta raspard che vinanti ke agal chalu rakhajo. Duniyama chamtkar to badha ne game j mate hu khub utejit chu ke aa carta agal na padav ma jase to.

Mul wat ke warta ma manik na nam thi ae je hasy aape che anu rahsya juduj che aene must rite agal na padav ma varnan apjo vanchanar ne maja awase .

Lakhan khub j saras lakhyu che..

Agalni varta jaldi lakhjo.

Jay Shree Krishna.

Your comment really made me proud to have a reader like you. .
Keep commenting. .
Enjoy. .

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Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: prathyushaeluri
came with an ss now
agar manik jaise ladka mental hospital mey doctor hey toh
mey toh vaha join karlunga
for sure
continue soon
waiting

Hahahaha
true very true. .
Even i would also like to join such a mental hospital. .

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Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: priakachan
Really interesting concept and highly mysterious...how does she know Manik? Is Manik her childhood friend or something?😕What happened to her? Why is she at a psychiatrist?😕By the by...the name is interesting. Continue soon, dear😃😳

well thank u so much
i am honoured to have review from a writer like u. .
And to knw more wait for tonight i will update today part 1
and happy birthday dear. .

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Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: UggliBuggli
Damn interesting like your other writings and mysterious too!!⭐️
Thank God.. oops😛 correction..Thank YOU😃
its not the same old concept of manik ditching nandini etc etc.. (NOT TO HURT OTHERS #NO_OFFENSE)
Its new and quite interesting..👏
But how does Nandu know Manik??😕
Are they friends😊😊😊
or🤔
Rivals??🤢😕🤢..
I hope Nandu's character is little CRAZY...😛
hmm But you mentioned cuts??😕
Is nandu Psycho ?😕😕


Any ways


Amazing😃
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Confusing😕
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Mysterious😲
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Interesting👍🏼start..










TAKE CARE!
STAY BLESSED!!
KEEP SMILING!!!

well u are so sweet. .
Thank u so much. .
I really felt blessed. .
And nandu would be crazy for sure but we would look her actions in a different point of view. .
You will get to knw more as story proceeds. .

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Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ankita_t
Hi,

You know your message left me in surprise and trust me, it was worth when i started to read it... I know about the book but haven't read it yet and i know Preeti is a very famous writer...

You made a correct choice by bringing this subject into limelight , miracles do happen in life and trust me on that thought... i have seen my mother and father survive through medical issues in life at different points of time... I had to fight and so did they and see we are a family now...

Another good point i would like to add for all your readers is that - my Mausi is a leading Psychiatrist in USA and she does narrate a lot experiences from her cases... It's a very narrow notion that if you visit a Mental Health Care place then it implies that you are ill... That's absolutely wrong...

People for example in business world have Psychiatrist for their company which helps them in keeping the mental health of their employees in check...

You have done a very good job in picking this up and yet moulding it according to the need of the situation... Every illness if there is any can be fought with will power and moral support... The change in the story you'll bring with adding the bit of chemistry between Manik and Nandini will be a correct and yet amazing twist in the tale...😳...

I am actually looking forward to this story and i'll make sure you narrate it fully and not leave it ok😛..

Can't wait to see how you nourish this story which is different, sensitive and yet will make a place in the hearts of everyone...

I am so proud of you and trust me hats off...

Lots Of Love...

Ankita

thank u so much. .
M truely feeling blessed di. .
U are my motivation. .
I have learnt many things from u. .
And u are right. .
If we visit a mental health care that doesnt mean we are ill. .
All this are coming in the story ahead. .
Well the name of nandu's character in the book is ankita sharma. .hehehe

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Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Dhingli44
Hey..
Too good yaar.
Such a different concept it is.
I loved it.
Really different types 😉
Maybe she tried suicide owing to the cuts in her hand.
And she was gloomy due to something...n her parents gave her some time to cope but she couldn't!?
Just a clich guess.
😛
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon. 😊

hehehehe
thoda sa yes thoda sa no..
Wait for d update. .
Tonight