MaNan SS||*New Life with Shrink*||Chap 14:pg 85(22-04) - Page 16

Originally posted by: UggliBuggli

Don't worry I will comment on every part of your story..😃

It's a promise..

You write so beautifully that I cant keep my fingers of keyboard..👏👏

And haan I will call you before I come to your place👍🏼

Make sure You cook loads of food..🤗(its not hug it means amount of loads of food🤣)

I am a big time foodie.. I love food ❤️

And haan I really dont compromise when it comes to food..

So better you keep extra stock for me..😉

TAKE CARE!
STAY BLESSED!!
KEEP SMILING!!!

Originally posted by: UggliBuggli

I have come across your promo just now..😊

Honestly its really confusing..😕

Matlab..is that flashback?🤔

It cant be hallucination because there's manik's POV too..🤓

Its an out of box confession..all of sudden in the story..😲

Matlab they dint meet yet.. aur ..

Okay let me put it in straight words..

Even though they think of each other

But dint come face to face yet..

Agar ayenge bhi..

Confeesion and kiss just in span of hours..

Really.?!😕
Aisa bhi hotha hai..😲😲

Tum na.. confuse karke rakhi hai mujhe.. 😕😕

Arghhh..😡

Abh update jaldi do na..😡😡

And yea I gotta convey wishes to you from my grandpops side..

"HEY DEAR.. YOU HAVE AMAZING WRITING SKILLS..YOUR STORY LINE IS BEAUTIFUL..GREAT WORK DEAR GOD BLESS YOU..👏👏"

TAKE CARE!
STAY BLESSED!!
KEEP SMILING!!!

Originally posted by: Annieeeiee

Hi,

Thanks for mentioning mem and I totally do undestand. It is your ff and you can name it what so ever you like. And there is this title which striked me 'Towards a New Dawn'. Anyways yours is good too.

And I think you wouldn't mind if I point out some mistakes? Please don't take it to your heart.

In one sentence in this update you wrote Ankita instead of Nandini.

And thr words HIS grandfather spoke were, 'Never belittle love' and not 'Never belittling love'.

Umm yes I have read the novel by Preeti Shenoy. And until now your ff is more or less the same. And I really do appreciate and like the fact that you took up such a delicate topic to write upon. I would really like to see that how you incorporate Manik and eventually Manan in it. I have an idea but lets not talk about it.

Thanks for the pm :)

Take care,

Annanya

Originally posted by: Dhingli44

Umm..di..okayhe!!
Main kya bolu..I have nothing to say!
Kya hogaya hai Nandini ko. 😕
I have never ever read such a story or even closer to this sought.
👏

Okay she was hallucinating about him.But she said Joseph.
And then she was up and about thinking about it and repenting.
Ab ye mystery handle nai hoti di..
Boli dyo have aagad nu pls 😆
Thanks for the PM.
Continue soon...waiting eagerly 😃

Originally posted by: Charmi98

Ohkk...wt do I sae...su kau...?

Thodu confusing hatu...

Lyk nandu kissed Joseph😲 ik she was hallucinating bt wt is it gng on...?

N dis his him wala mystery pls jaldi clr karo...I mstly feel its manik bt still...

It was gud...bt im confused may b ...!

Ik ol is mstly cz of her mental conditions bt ...

Hehe I hv many bts pls solve dem soon n only u can do dat dear...by updating nxt part soon. ..

Continue soon n tk care...

N thanks fr pm😊

Originally posted by: bangfarju

thanks thanks a lot for updating.
l am eagerly waiting for ur update.
superb
nice update.

u amazing penned nandini's emotional state.
she always miss him ,feel him but could not accept it.
void of his presence is always hurt her but she always ignore it.
she always search or hold an options to ignore or avoid the loneliness of her heart for him.
day by day by doing this she is going to be more
crazy more mechanic.
l feel very sad for her.

kya kaha night Manik's POV
wow l can't wait.
plz plz update ASAP.
eagerly waiting for ur update.

thanks for pm .

Originally posted by: syami

awesome update
wnt to Noe mor abt nandini suspens is killin me
thx for pm
do update soon

Originally posted by: samanf

...

Dis is wat I am feeling right now... Total blank...washed out completely...

Seriously... From where did uh got dis idea from..

I am spellbound and bowled down again...

Nandini POV ...her thoughts...her inner turmoils are given me jitters...

Poor girl...she don't even hav da slightest of idea wats going on wid her...

I really really want to read further... N wanna kno how farthest she went wid all dese turmoils... N wat will be da reacn of da poor souls wen dey will receive a letter of 40 n 16 paged...OMG..

Wat really happened wid dis girl...dat she ended up being in depression...

N yes...I am ecstatic to read da reaction of MANIK dat da girl wid whom he waz in head over heels in love wid waz suffering frm depression... Irony being in itself dat despite of him being an psychiatrist cudnt figure it out...

Uh are doing an amazing job girl...kudos to uh for coming up wid such a different topic... N at da same tym a topic dat need awareness...

Uff...I am loving n liking it way too much..

Will be waiting for next..

Thanks for da PM...take care.

Originally posted by: Paro_rudra

was waiting for the update and here it it

loved the update

u expressed state of her mind clearly

so nandu see's him in joseph..

it's Manik right??of course it's him only

Manik was missing in this update?😉