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Inaya

@Cute_Inaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Update was fabulous... awesome... superb...

Manan met after two years ...

Both r in the illusion that they are already married to some one..
Their sarcastic talks...
Dance wala part was superb... romantic...
Flashback part was fabulous...
they both were behaving like kids...
That line kaam wali baai...🤣

They kissed...😳

But what happen in between them...
Their marriage git broken...

I guess...mrs. and mr.gupta is alya and dhruv?...

U guys killed it...
Commendable work...
Update soon...
Keep smiling..
Stay bless..
Lots of love...

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farhana12

@farhana12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

u two r awesome writer

and whn u two together penned a story

that will be great

awesome story

loved the update

cont soon

take care

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Khushbu

@gudda_k

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

beautiful story...

loved it...

would love to read further...

continue soon...

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#94

congo for the new story

loved it

it was superb

superbly written

what happened between manan

continue soon

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LUCKYRICKLY

@LUCKYRICKLY

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

KYA ? MAWARA JI!! AAP BINA BATAKE NAYI STORY POST KARTEHO!! AAP KI KOI BHI STORY MAI BHI AAP MENTION NAI KI TO MUJHE KESA PATAA CHALEGAA IS STORY ?? AAP BHI NA. 😡 LUCKLY MUJHE PATA CHALA! DOOSERI STORY DOONDE NE WAKTH .AUR HA E ACHA HAI

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Mawara_Ejaz

@Mawara_Ejaz

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: LUCKYRICKLY
KYA ? MAWARA JI!! AAP BINA BATAKE NAYI STORY POST KARTEHO!! AAP KI KOI BHI STORY MAI BHI AAP MENTION NAI KI TO MUJHE KESA PATAA CHALEGAA IS STORY ?? AAP BHI NA. 😡 LUCKLY MUJHE PATA CHALA! DOOSERI STORY DOONDE NE WAKTH .AUR HA E ACHA HAI

Haan! Dekho myny chup chup k story post ki so that tmhy pata na chaly!🤣

Dekha mera plan! ahaha!

Dear me chupa k kya karron ge haan? Pm krti tou ap ko pta chal jata! Chill and enjoy :)

Love,Mawara

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Vidhiarora1

@Vidhiarora1

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Wowww
Such an amazing story

Sooo different concept yr really enjoyed n damn excited for next part

Cozzz i really wanna know abt their past

Jab manan were abt to get married i guess

Phir y wre they getting married to someone else or woh bhi nahi hui

N abh bhi they think ki other is married

Mystry Mystry mystry

Hats off to u mawara n rits

Fab mindblowing concept

Most beautiful n shocking scene was they kissed ha ha 😳
Do pm me next part pretty pretty please

Vidhi

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wonderstar13

@wonderstar13

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#98

love it!

update soon please😊

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navla

@navla

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#99

wow ...new story...
update is awsum...
valentine night ..manan is parnter for the night ...too gud...
they knw each other...lied abt theit past...
flashback was too gud...
manan 1st encounter was nice...
manan parents selected them for each other...
manan dance was too gud...
manan 1st kiss...wow...
they hv feelings for each other...
i think mr n mrs gupta is dhruv n alya...
loved d update...
take care...