MaNan FF: Cant Let you go Part 57 updated Page 70 - Page 37

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update.

Its going confuconfusing day by day.

Reveals this suspense asap.

Keep it up.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey best of luck I completely understand studies are very important in fact most important thing ...best of luck god bless you
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome story...read all in one go...
who is this aryaman...n how dose he knows so much about nandini...about her fireflies n chachi chachi...n even chachi was talking about some surprise...i am sure that aryaman is nandu's some old childhood friend...which chachi was talking about as a surprise...and he was behind all failure of harshad's all plans...of changing her medicines n giving her wrong injection...coz of which she is getting better...n then he was the one who opened the door when harshad had asked the nurse to lock her up in the room...n he also paid doctor singhaniya more than harshad to leave the hospital n to act in front of fab5 as if he is here only...while he was treating her...n also that he had got her to the hospital n admitted n asked the receptionist to call manik n tell about nandu's whereabouts...but why is he not telling them anything...?? i think he is always following nandu to keep her safe...but he could atleast told who he was...ok i know that there would have been risk that harshad would have know about him...n would have been careful about aryaman also apart from fab5 n navya...
but what is it with mukti seeing abhi...?? what is he doing here..?? coz after the soha thing had happened...abhi was in thospital getting treated...n nobody knew about him...except mukti...so why was mukti shocked on seeing him here...??
n what happened with that pandit...?? coz after all that pandit was no where in your story...coz even after the case nandu still had some classes left with him but u dint showed him...
just can u plz tell that in your story what happened to abhi n pandit...??
like did pandit just went away...?? n till where did abhi was there...?? did he come back n mukti cmae to know that he has cancer...?? if yes then what happened...?? or he hadnt returned after saying bye to mukti in college...n mukti is still unaware of him having cancer...??
so many questions plz answer them...n update soon...n plz pm me...
n r u going to continue here or on wattpad...?? coz over there u have just updated half of the chapters till now...i just checked after reading ur note...so asking...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Divanshi Gupta. First of all, Thankyou SO Much and secondly, I'm so sorry. I literally forgot that at that time no one knew about Abhi except Mukti. So guys, This is for everyone. In my story, Abhi had cancer and he suddenly disappeared without informing anyone. Everyone though that he didn't want Mukti to see him dying and that is why he left. They all believe that he is dead. And Coming to Pandit, He is not a part of my story. I never really liked his part in the show too. So,He is not included in this story till now and probably won't be coming later too.
And About Wattpad, Actually I didnt know about wattpad at first place. I came to know about it when I had completed 50 Chapters here on IF. So Just started writing there few days Back. And On wattpad I have already updated 47 Parts. I have merged 3 to 4 parts and made it one chapter on wattpad. So probably after 2 to 3 updates on wattpad, The story will be on level and I will update on both , Indiaforums and Wattpad Together once I publish all the 55 parts on wattpad too. It will take probably two or three updates more only!


I hope you got all the answers now and if you have any more confusion regarding the story, Feel free to Ask. :)

Love, Saba! 😊
Edited by Mananstories - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thankyou Everyone. 😊
Edited by Mananstories - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome plottt...do contimue with it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bst of luck for the xm...!
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Whnevr you get tym...plz update...!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. I just read ur story in one go
Really loved it
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of All, Extremely sorry for the delay. I was extremely busy but now I'm Back! Yayyyiee. :)


PART 56.

Listening to this, Aryaman rushed towards the O.T. Manik followed him.

Fab 4 and Navya were still standing there, near the canteen in a state of shock

"What the hell was this? Aryaman is a doctor? When did this happen? I mean, how did this happen? What's going on!!" Shouted Cabir.

"I can't believe this! Aryaman..he's a doctor? And even if he is, why didn't he tell us? I mean, What are these hide and seek games he's playing? What is he upto?" Said Mukti angrily.

"Guys, Calm down! Yeh waqt yeh sab baten karnay ka nahi hai. We should go see Nandini..I mean, we still don't know.." Said Alya.

"Know what?" Asked Cabir.

"Cabir..You told Manik na that Aryaman has something to do with this whole thing and Mukti saw him at Manik's farmhouse too, right Mukti?"

"Wrong. I didn't saw him. I met him! So what? I mean, what are you trying to say Alya?" asked Mukti.

Alya Sighed and Said, "What I'm trying to say is kay Agar itna sab kuch hua, to definitely kuch to garbar hai. Okay Forget that. Tell me, Why didn't Aryaman tell us about his occupation? That he's a doctor? Why was he hiding this from us?"

"Guys! Actually..She's right. This is not normal." Said Cabir.

"Manik wahan akela hai, hamein chalna chahye.." Navya Said.

"Yeah, let's go..I hope wahan koi tamasha shuru na hogaya ho. After All, it's Manik and it's about Nandini." Said Cabir and they left to see Manik.

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"What are you upto, Aryaman?" Asked Manik, as he held Aryaman's collar. His face was blood red.

"What are you talking about?" Asked Aryaman, in a low voice. He was tensed, Afraid and Blank. All at the same time.

"What the!" Manik shouted "You're still asking me this? Even after all of this? Who are you? What are you upto?"

"Let me go, Manik! Can we speak about this later? Nandini..She needs a doctor right now! It's Urgent!!"

"I Can't trust you."

"WHAT!?! I don't Care! Just Let me go, Damn it!"

There was a long pause and then Aryaman said, "Okay Fine! I'll tell you everything. But first, let me go?"

Manik held him by his neck, looked right in his eye and said, "If something happens to her, I'll kick your face! You better take care of that. I don't know what you're upto, I don't even know if you have something to do with Harshad. All I know is that Nandini needs a doctor and YOU are her doctor. I Can't believe this! I'm so helpless right now that I'm letting you go..Trust me Aryaman, I Will not leave you if something happens to her. I will Not. Am I making Myself clear?"

Aryaman was out of words. He was scared as well as tensed and Why won't he be? Manik Malhotra had just threatened him!

"Am I Making Myself Clear?" Said Manik, Again.

Aryaman just nodded his head in a yes as he just couldn't speak a word.

"Leave!" Ordered Manik.

"What?" Asked Aryaman.

"Nandini needs a doctor."

Aryaman, FInally came back to his senses. "Oh..Yes..I must go.." He said and left.

Manik sat on the bench outside the O.T and burried his face inside his hands.

"Manik Manik!" He heard. It was Fab 4 and Navya.
"Is everything okay? - Cabir

Nandini..is she fine? - Mukti

Where's Aryaman? What did he say?" - Alya.

"Nandini ko hua kia tha achanak?" - Navya

"Buddy, sab theek haina? Tu kuch bol kyu nahi raha?" - Dhruv

"Guys!! Calm down! I don't know. I don't know if everything is okay or not. I don't know whether Nandini is fine or not. I don't know what's Aryaman upto and I have no idea what happened to her!!" He shouted angrily.

Cabir went closer to him and hugged him tightly. He knew Manik was broken. As soon as he hugged him, Manik started to cry. "Manikkk!! Shshhh!" whispered Cabir.
"That's it!" Said Mukti and turned to leave. Dhruv held his hand, "Kahan jarai ho?" He asked.
"College."

"Magar, kyun?" Asked Navya.

"Guys, It's high time! This harshad, he's getting on my nerves now. I'm sick of this drama. What does he think? Wo jo chahay karsakta hai? Not this time. He cannot do this! I'm dead sure kay yeh sab usi ne kiya hai..He needs a Mukti Wardhan's punch on his face with a chair!"

"Mukti, rukkjaa! Let Nandini be fine first uskay bad we'll handle this. We still don't know kay akhir hua kya tha. I mean all of a sudden, where did she disappear and how did she landed here, in the hospital. So, let's just wait for sometime, okay?" Said Cabir.

"I still can't believe this! You people are still not sure? Who else it can be? Obviously it's Harshad!" She shouted.

"Mukti, please. Wait." Said Alya.

"FINE!" She said, angrily.

Just when they were having this conversation, Harshad walked in.

"What the! What are you doing here?" Shouted Mukti.

"Think of the devil, and devil comes here!" Said Cabir.

Harshad looked at him and gave him an angry look.

"HA HA! Very funny cabir." He said.

"For your kind of information Mr Harshad Saxena, I was not cracking a joke! Oh wait..I have an idea!"

Harshad raised his eyebrow and looked at him with questioning eyes.

"Ab agar tum yahan hospital aa he gaye ho toh why don't you get yourself checked?"

Alya and Mukti giggled.

"What do you mean?" asked Harshad.

"I mean, you need a doctor! But wait..Mukti (He said looking at Mukti) Yahan koi psychiatrist bethta hai?" Said Cabir, as he giggled.

"What losers you guys are!" Said Harshad.

"Says the looser himself!" Said Mukti.

"Bhai, ap yahan kar kia rahay hain? Can you, for once, stop stalking us?" Asked Alya.

"Alya, I just came here to see nandini. Is she fine?" He asked.
Listening to this, Manik immediately stood up and looked at harshad angrily, "That is none of your business. Stay away from Her. I'm warning you!" He said.

"And one more thing, agar mujhe pata chala kay nandini ki is halat mein, tumhara koi bhi..koi bhi connection hai so Mr Harshad Saxena, You are So DEAD!" Continued Manik.

Just then, Manik's phone started to ring "Chachi" Flashed on his phone screen. He immediately picked it up.

Manik: Hello, chachi?
Chachi: Manik, Nandu kahan hai?
Manik (Hesitatingly) : Nandini..uska kyun puchrai hain ap?
Chachi: Aray hum yahan ghar aye hain par nandu yahan nahi. Tere sath hai?
Manik was stunned to hear this.
Manik (shocked) : Aplog wapis agaye?
Chachi: Han, abhi 1 ghanta he hua hai..Batao na, Nandu tumaray sath hai?
Manik (composing himself) : Jee, Chachii. Aur shayad ab apko yahan ana he pareyga..
Chachi: Kia matlab? Kahan ho tumlog?
Manik: City Hospital.
Chachi: Kia? Manik, sab theek haina? Tu theek haina? Nandu..wo theek haina?
Manik: Chachi, aap bas yahaan ajao..mae sab batata hun..

Saying this, he disconnected the call.

"Kia hua Manik? Sab theek haina?" Asked Navya.
Manik looked at her, took a deep breath and said, "Chachi is back! She's coming to the hospital."

All of them were shocked hearing this.

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Pheww! After a long timeee. I'm so sorry for the delay guys, I really Am! Anyways, The next update will unfold many secrets so stay tuned. It's gonna be a long and interesting one, trust me. You'll Finally get your answers. Ps, I will update very soon. Itna time nahi lagaoongi is baar. Promise. 😳 So, what are you waitinf for? Give your feedbacks jaldi jaldi so that I give you the next update jaldi jaldi. :D

Ps, I know this was short and not much interesting but I wanted kay suspense break karney ke liay aik poora chapter hona chaye. So, Now Harshad is there, Aryaman is there and Chachi is also back..So obviously it's time for some action. :D Stay Tuned!
Edited by Mananstories - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome..
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

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