MaNan FF: Cant Let you go Part 57 updated Page 70 - Page 35

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Posted: 9 years ago
So again aryaman saved nandu from harshad.
This aryaman mystery kiling us.
Unfold it soon ya

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Posted: 9 years ago
Last part was really very emotional.
Waiting for next.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey plz update next part waiting eagerly plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Hey Hey!! Guys, Actually My exams are starting and it's very difficult for me to manage both the story and studies together so probably I won't be updating for sometime. Really sorry :( But, Once I get over with this, I promise I'll update zada zadaaa. And han, this doesn't mean I'll not update at all, I will definetly do but not regular. But, this is temporary okay? 😳 Also I want to know something, Are you people on Wattpad? Cause I'll probably not write on IF Anymore and will directly update on wattpad instead. Please let me know and Don't forgettt meee!! 😛😊

Love, Saba! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey " All The Best " for ur exam.

I will wait for update.

Sorry but I m not on whattpad.

Please update here only.

Waiting.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved da story...
All da bst fr ur exms..
Pls try to update in IF only..
I m nt a user of it dts y...plzzzx..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mananstories

<font size="4">Hey Hey Hey!! Guys, Actually My exams are starting and it's very difficult for me to manage both the story and studies together so probably I won't be updating for sometime. Really sorry :( But, Once I get over with this, I promise I'll update zada zadaaa. And han, this doesn't mean I'll not update at all, I will definetly do but not regular. But, this is temporary okay? 😳Also I want to know something, Are you people on Wattpad? Cause I'll probably not write on IF Anymore and will directly update on wattpad instead. Please let me know and Don't forgettt meee!!😛😊

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<font size="4">Love, Saba! 😊</font>




Great that you posted the note
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey can u pls pm me the updates too!
I realllyy like your story ^_^
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 55.


Manik Mukti and Cabir reached the hospital. Dhruv, Alya and Navya were already there. Manik went running to Dhruv. "Nandini..Is she okay? You got the medicines?" He asked. Dhruv held Manik by his shoulders and said, "Buddy! Buddy Relax..Maine Medicines dedien hain nurse ko but Nandini is still unconscious" Replied Dhruv. Manik took a deep breath and sat on the bench."Is anything wrong? I mean.. why do you three look so worried?" Asked Alya. "Wo Guys.. Nandini's Chacha Chachi..They're coming back!" Said Mukti. Alya, Navya and Dhruv were shocked. "Kya? Hey Matarani! Ab kya hoga? Kya batayengay hum unhay?" Asked Navya looking at Manik. Manik kept his hands on his face in confusion. "I..I Dont Know.." He said. "Ab jo hoga dekha jayega. Guys, we cannot hide this from them. They are Nandini's Family. They have a right to know this. Aur wesay bhe, Nandini ne kaha tha na that she will tell them once they come back from mangalore? Then why are you guys stressing so much? So what if Nandini can't tell them, we will! Just Relax guys.." Said Cabir. Mukti nodded. "He's right!" Said Dhruv.

"Acha Guys, Tumsab Ghar jao. Aj mae or Dhruv Rukengay hospital me, Okay Dhruv? " Said Cabir. "Yeah..Okay.." Said Dhruv. "No..Mae Kahin nahi jaraha.." Said Manik. "Manik, tu apni halat dekh! Ghar ja, Thora rest kar.." Said Cabir. "Han buddy, hum haina yahan.. Koi bhe problem hui to we will inform you. You need some rest buddy!" Said Dhruv. Manik stood up and shouted angrily, "Mainay kaha na I'm not going anywhere! Here, Nandini is unconscious and you people are telling me to go take some rest? Like seriously Guys? Have you lost it?" Cabir understood that Manik will never leave Nandini alone in such condition and forcing him was just useless. Cabir and Dhruv shared a look and an unspoken conversation passed between them. "Okay! Cabir tu jaa. Me manik ke sath rukta hun." Said Dhruv.
Cabir nodded and left with Mukti, Alya and Navya.

"Um, Cabir..I need to return this guitar. Drop me to the college?" Said Mukti.

"Okay."

After dropping Alya and Navya, Cabir and Mukti headed to the college.

Locataion: Space Academy.

"Tu yahan rukh, Mae ye music library me dekar ati hun." Said Mukti. Cabir Nodded.

He was just standing there, waiting for mukti and he suddenly saw Harshad.

Cabir's POV:

Harshad..Why does he look so worried? There's something wrong. I need to find it out!

I followed Harshad. He was talking to someone on the phone. I was just standing a little far from him so that he doesn't see me.


"Where the hell is Doctor Singhania? How is this even possible? I payed him Damnit! How can he do this? Like, He was Nandini's doctor, right? Who is treating her now?" I was stunned to hear this. How can someone even think about this? He was bloody trying to kill her! Damnit, what the hell!

"What do you mean you can't tell me Damnit? I payed you guys! You people were giving me all the information so now what the hell is wrong?" Harshad was literally screaming.

I was just listening to all of this. I know we hated each other. Harshad hates Manik but that doesn't mean he goes and kills his girlfriend. I wish I could know this before. Things would have been so much different.

" What do you mean you are not allowed to tell me? I'll screw you guys! " Harshad screamed again.

I need to tell this to Manik. This is serious! I should've guessed this, Damn it! Who else could be doing all this? Harshad!

I Immediately took out my phone and dialed Manik's Number. He was not picking up my calls. Shit, what do I do now? Should I like, go to the hospital and tell him everything? Dhruv! Yes, Dhruv! He's with Manik! I should call him. I called Dhruv,

"Han Cabir, bol?" Said Dhruv.

"Dhruv! Manik..Manik kahan hai?" Asked Cabir.

"Manik..Wo..He's gone to the canteen. Bohat mushkil sey I convinced him to eat something. He's hungry since so long. Kuch important bat hai? Is everything fine?" Asked Dhruv.

I was confused. Manik was already so tensed and after convincing him so much, he was finally eating something so I decided to tell him in the morning.

"Um..Nahi, nothing.. Uska Khyal Rakhna.." I said and disconnected the phone.

End Of Cabir's POV.


After having something, Manik came back. Dhruv was sitting next to him.

MANIK'S POV: It was 3 am already, and I was still sitting there on the bench. Nandini was still unconscious. I just couldn't sleep. She'll be okay, right? Obviously She will be. She can't just walk away whenever she wants to. She has to stay. With me. For us. After all, She still didn't say that she loves me. I mean, I know she does. But, She has to say that too, right? I want her to say that. Enough of this 'let's be friends first' Thing. I mean, how much more does she wants me to know her? Once she'll be fine na, I'll say it clearly that Ms Nandini Murthy, we can't be just 'Friends' anymore and she has to listen me. Can't she just for once stop arguing and listen to me? But before all this, I need to know what exactly happened that day. I mean, how did she just disappear from the college? How did she landed here, in the hospital? What happened to her? Who the hell is behind all of this? Harshad? Nyonika? Or.. that Aryaman? Ugh! I so wanted to just leave and beat the hell out these sick people but I just couldn't. Not because, I didn't wanted to create a scene but because I didn't wanted to leave her alone.

END OF POV.

"I want to see her.." Said Manik. "What?" Asked Dhruv. "Yes, I need to see her. Touch her." Said Manik. "Lekin Buddy..She's unconscious." Said Dhruv. "I don't care.. I'm going inside." Said Manik and went inside the room. "Oh shit!" Said Dhruv and followed him. "Manik..Buddy kia karaha hai? Kisi ne dekhliya tou? We're not allowed to go inside!" Said Dhruv. But Manik, was Manik. He didn't give a damn about anyone.

"Uhh. enough now Nandini, Wake up! I know you're mad at me because I wasn't there with you in the college when all this shit happened but that doesn't mean you just keep sleeping like this. Wake up! Look at me! Look at my condition! " Said Manik looking towards Nandini with teary eyes. Dhruv was just standing there, seeing all this. "Acha Baba..I'm sorry okay? I will never leave you alone like this phir se, okay? Ab to just get up na?" Continued Manik. Dhruv was just staring at him, he knew how hurt he was. After a while, he finally said, "Manik, ab chal yahan se! Agar kisi ne dekhlya na tou we will be in trouble. Come now!" Saying this he dragged Manik out of the room.


Early Morning 9am:

Navya, Mukti and Alya reached the hospital. "Cabir Kahan hai?" Asked Manik. "I don't know, he must be coming.." Replied Mukti. They were all sitting outside the canteen of the hospital when suddenly Mukti saw Aryaman. She rubbed her eyes as she couldn't believe that it was him. "What the hell!" She said loudly. All of them looked at her with questioning eyes. "What?" Asked Dhruv raising his left eyebrow. "I can't believe this. Aryaman!" She said. Hearing 'Aryaman' Manik turned red with anger. "Just don't take his name infront of me." He said angrily. Mukti gave him that 'what nonsense?' look and said, "Look there, It's Aryaman! What is he doing here, Again?" She said loudly. All of them were shocked hearing this and looked at aryaman in unison. Manik pulled his sleeves upwards and said angrily, "That jerk..This time, I'm not leaving him." Saying this, he headed towards Aryaman in anger. Fab 3 and Navya followed him. Manik held his collar and pulled him towards him. "What the Hell are you doing here? You know I can kill you, right? Just tell me what are you upto. That's it Aryaman. Speak up Damnit!" Shouted Manik. His eyes were blood red. "Is this a co-incidence too, Aryaman?" Asked Mukti raising her eyebrow. Aryaman was in a state of shock. There was a deadly silence for a while. "God Damnit! Speak up you Jerk" Shouted Manik again. Just then, Cabir came running. "Manik! Guys..I need to tell you something." Said Cabir in a serious way addressing everyone but no one payed any attention towards him. "Guys!" Said Cabir but still, nobody responded just then he turned and saw Aryaman. Cabir was shocked seeing him. "Ye..What is he doing here? What's going on? Will someone tell me?" Said Cabir angrily. "That's what we're trying to know! What is he doing here.. For God's Sake speak Aryaman!!" Shouted Mukti. "Listen..Listen guys, it's not like that..Let me just.." Said Aryaman but his sentence was broken by the nurse who came running, "Doctor! The patient's condition..She's getting worse. Please come fast." Said the nurse looking towards Aryaman. Fab 5 and Navya were just seeing all of this in a state of shock. "What? Doctor? What the hell?" Said Alya.



Pheww! Finally done! Hope you Guys like it. Don't forget to give your feedbacks!! :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yup i am on wattpad just tell me ur id n i'll follow you there ^_^
I really wanna follow ur story :)

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