PART 2 - THE DISTURBANCE....

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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 2

Thank you so... much guys for your support and I will do the necessary changes and continue with my updates...

[NANDINI turns behind ]
MANIK: Nandini , this song is only for u ... to my SHINING STAR' ...
[ he then again lifts her up and makes her sit on an armchair, Takes his guitar out of the cupboard and starts to sing]
NANDINI :[She is about to say something ]... But He puts his finger on her lips and says...
MANIK: shhh...
[ she then nodes in yes' and leans on the backrest of the armchair]
MANIK:

Maine khud ko ...
De diya hai tujh ko...Mein tera ... Hu tera...

[ When she listens to these lines , she smiles and blushes a bit]
Kaate na kate.. leta hai yeh karwate
Dil mera... Dil mera.

[ then manik keeps the guitar aside and bends down, by sitting in front of the armchair on his
toes... And singing the song]

Aaa... tujh mein bitau ratiya...
dil dil ko sunaye batiya... x2

[ Moving his fingers over her ear and then putting her hair behind her ear... ]

[ he then pulls her up , making her stand and switches off the room's lights]

Oh..Tu mujh mein kahi pe bas jaa...
ho...ho..hoho...ho...ho...hohoo...

[ when he turns off the lights ... He shows her the roof of his room and she sees the whole wall covered by stars , which are highlighting ...and in the middle is a sign of INFINITE LOVE']
[ She is happy and ends up hugging Manik tightly.. ]
[But unfortunately this romance of them didn't last longer as FAB4 bumped into Manik's house] { Aww... poor babies ... itna accha chance mila tha Full Romance karne ka par interfere kiya bhi toh kisne FRIENDS NE YAAR...}

[ All of a sudden everyone started banging on the door... #zorse!!!]

MUKTI: manik ... Door toh open kar Yaar...
CABIR: abe saale ab khol bhi de darwaja... kitna time lega khol ne mein...???

[ NANIDNI started to panic... and MANIK switched on the lights...As they didn't have any option..MANIK had to open the door in hurry...]

CABIR: oh... Seems like kuch vhal raha tha andar... Oh ... ho manik... " HUM TUM EK CAMARE MEIN BANDHO AUR..."

MANIK: Aur ??? aur kya..??
CABIR : AUR... Bol du kya???

MANIK: [ whispering in cabir's ears ] agar tune kuch aisa waisa bola toh teri khair nahi!!! U get that STRAIGHT!!

CABIR: mein toh bas bol raha tha ki... aur hum log "tere friends aa jaye"... THAT"S IT...
KYU????? Tujhe kya laga???? Huh?? woh..???

[Every one start laughing ... NANDINI started blushing and then smiles and says to cabir..]
NANDINI: tumhara mind kuch jhayda he chalta hai... Nahi?? Aur specially tumhara mooh...??
CABIR: Woh...kya hai na.. Nandini... Hum RJ's ka toh kaam he hota hai nonsense baate karna... isiliya DON'T mind...

NANDINI: ab mein kya bolu tumhe ...???[ she looked at MANIK and and smiled ]
{ Then mukti said let's party guys... MANIK asked why??... nandini smiled , took her bag and was about to leave ... but then she was stopped by ALIYA and MUKTI...}
NANDINI: kya hua mukti?? I don't want to disturb FAB5's party mood ...so... u all continue I'll leave...
MUKTI: actually nandini... U have helped me a lot to get over my past...and now u also matter to me as much as all the others... SO... I want u to stay and party with us...

[ Nandini looks at MANIK... he gives a cute smile ]

ALIYA : yeppiee!!! We will have loads of fun... Let's ROCK IT guys... It's fab5's party... let's make it BIGGG...
NANDINI : par Aliya... wat is the reason behind ...this party..???
MANIK: haa... yaar... guys... kya reason hai????

For the timing ... let's keep this party's reason a suspense and wait for my new update ... and till then think or just keep guessing about this party..wat is the reason?? Wat will they do in the party to make it biggg...THINK THINK THINK harder...till then see ya...

Love u all , and a big thanxx for supporting me...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello!!! guys i m sad that their r no replies for the second post of mine... it' okay... i will still wait for them to come...i hope u all would reply and let me know abt it if u liked it or not...
it would not be possible for me to post the third part now but will soon try to post it...

LOVE U ALL...,
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome
but where is the 1st chapter?

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