MANAN FS : MY POSSESSIVE HUSBAND (UPDATE ON PG.44 + NOTE ON PG.52)21/3

assuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Awesome update...
Manik's state was well penned...
Hats off...
Flashback part was mindblowing and blissful...
Loved wen manik was scared of nandini...
Manan's convo and moments were beautifully written. .. nandini lost her memory and baby dat was shocking nd sad...
manik's words atlast part was phenomenal...
Loved it to core...
Totally an mindblowing update...
Eagerly waiting for next update...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm. ..

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debanjali93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Superb part
Manan ek dusre se kitna pyar karta hain
So sweet manan
Oh god nandu memory lost ho gaya islye manik so sad
Hope so nandu ki memory jaldi wapas aa jaye
Aur manan mein sab thk ho jaye
Update soon

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nandininiti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

beautifully penned update
u truly nailed it dear
nandu lost her memory and her baby as well
manik state u wrote very well
mind blowing update

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shristi sharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

It's awesome, really interesting,I wanna know what happens next so pls continue soon
I am a new reader of yours,so pls pm me also,pls

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anaita arora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

nice chappy tussi na jao wala dailogue was too cute and jaise nandu uski le rahi thi mind blowing emotional too loved it update soon take care i ll definitely pray for ur granni god bless her with his healing touch

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