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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Poor nandani kitney insensitive hai uskey parents I really hate them...continue soon waiting eagerly take care read it in one go...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
why is nandini s parents like this ?


manik s entry

mukti married to abhi


druv Aliya kabeer navya all r there



how is nandini gonna meet manik now ?????????




waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Awesome update. Nandini's part was emotional.Naina and nandini's convo was blissful.loving their bond. How could nandini's parents do like this. Fab5,navya and abhi's intro was mindblowing. Loved it. Pics were amazing. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm
Keep writing
Stay blessed😊
Edited by archu_asok - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: chocopie26



Kr diya update...padhle n meri alsi maharani update kriyo...n like bhi nai toh mera punch ready hai😉

like abhi kar de ri hu comment kab karugii abhi socha ni hai...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
amazing chappy
nandu yaar uske parents use bina baat kyu daat te haii
hero ki entry ekdum mast thii
mukti and manik ki fight was superbbb
loved it
update soon
take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Beautifully written .
Amazing update .
Thanks for adding me in your buddy list .😃
Waiting for the next part .
Take care .😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
hello update was awesome
but sirf ek question he manik and nandini ki age kya he ?? 😕
poor nandu 😭 and our cute manik 😉
let's see what happens when both will meet 😆
thanks for the pm
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
update pls waiting for ur story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 4 [Aisi Chali Jab Hawa]


Recap : Manik left for office n Nandini goes to study...

A black BMW enters the lavish campus of YASHRAJ PRODUCTIONS...

A guard comes n opens the back door n here comes a sinfully hoy creature..all the media people come n surround him then his guards clear the way for him...he takes his fon txts

Text :

Here comes the Hero ..

Then he enter YASHRAJ n the whole office staff hault... The girls freeze at their place cz his mere presence sent shivers down their spine... N male staffs keep wondering if he z a man or God... He in his famous attitude carrying his million dollar smirk makes his way to the Terrace of YASHRAJ...

Here Yash was standing facing his back to Manik ...

Manik : hi Dad

Yash : (he turns towards Manik n says) idhar aao manik

(Manik goes and stands beside him )

Yash : Manik ye dekh rhe ho...kitni height pe khade ho aj tum...chahe kitni bhi uchayi pr pohoch jao lekin kabhi ye mt bhulna kabhi tum bhi wahi neeche thee...tumhe kabhi realise hua ki kese main tumahri khudse struggle kr ke apna carreer bana me ki baat maan gaya...cz u make me proud... kyu maine baki directors ki tareh tumhe kyu nai launch kiya...maine itne logo ko big break diya hai...BT u knw y dint do it for you...hmm.. (he looked at Manik who was looking straight) cz the moment u said tht u made me feel to be the best father...best director awards boht mile mujhe ..BT Best Father ka award uss din tmne diya...I'm so proud of that...after 5yrs struggle here u stand in front of me as the Rockstar of the country...

Manik I feel so blessed when people say that u have worked hard n made ur identity as Manik Malhotra not as Yashraj Malhotra's Son... I feel blessed when people tok abt ur talent...I'm happie tht tumhe koi yeh nai keh paega tht ye saari success tumhe apne dad se mili infact they will say tumne ye Khud Kamai hai...

Get ready for ur big day son... See u Mr.Manik Malhotra ..

Manik shuk hand with his dad n his dad left he was standing there n thinking abt his Life from start till now... Just then his P.A. called him told him to reach the conference room...

@MURTHY MANSION [DEHRADUN]

Nandini's POV :

It was now afternoon I had been studying n now my chotu Tummy was empty I needed fooddd... I was still a bacha...or nai toh kya my 18 bday yet to come...

I closed my book n went online to see what's up...n saw Manik's pic caption said he was going for a meeting in YASHRAJ PRODUCTIONS.. I feel so glad now he will meet his own dad as a business person...having earned his status n success all by himself... That smthings makes me proud of Being his fan also keeps me motivated ... I toked to my friends on Twitter n then posted a pic on IG :

POST :


Exams On HEAD..!!!!

Then I went down to do my fav thingy ...eat... As I opened my room door which wasn't actually locked I saw Casper sitting their ... As soon as he saw me he pounced in my my cutiieee pie...then Robin came n said...

Robin : Studies finished ma'm

Me : ji sir ji (I said sarcastically) common Robin call me Nandu ...ye ma'm n all Aunty lagta hai

Robin (chukkled) : tum sudheregi nai na

Me : never ever ..n wese bhi u r lyk an elder bro yaar...

Robin : oh yeah...wese ek baat Bata dun Casper tumhare room k bajar betha hai jbse tum padhai kr rhi thi... Mene bola ander jao BT nai gaya (then Chaand Bi called him from downstairs ...)

Robin : main jata hun (n he went )

Awww my Casper u are shooo shweeettt...u were waiting for me to finish my studies u care so much I love u Casper ...(I said gladly) n in reply he just

"Bhaoo Bhaooo..." Then I went down to see Naina di watching typical saas bahu wala serials... I rolled my eyes on this...

Me : Naina di kya bakwaas dek rhi ho...

Naina di : thi isn't bakwaas this z YHM

N I was lyk ye konsi chidiya hai

Me : mtlb???

Naina di : Arrey buddhu ye hai mohabbatein ...

Me : tumahri mohabbatein khatab ho gyi ho toh mekko T.V. dekhna hai...Abhi fox traveller pe food safari de rha hoga... Chalo remote do

Naina di : abhi or v dekhna hai mujhe...

Me : di plz mere dimag kharab ho tha hai it's so irritating

Naina di : it's so lovely such a cute love story

Me : oh yeah...ye sb na sirf t.v. pr hi hota hai...yr beautiful love n all...(I said lost somewhere)

Naina di understood that n switched off the T.V she started "dekh Nandu...(BT I cut her in between n said) Dehradun ghumne chale??? (cz I dint wanted to start it again I knew it will hurt only) she agreed n so we set out to the city of mysteries

@MUMBAI

In the conference room

The meeting was going on all the biggies were sitting there ...n the writers the critics. All were present big music directors were there along with singers lyk Javed Akhtar ... Manik's song vdo was played on the big screen in the conference room...

As the song vdo ended all the ppl were frozen lyk ice... Suddenly Javed ji started clapping his hand n stood up followed by all present there...Mr Malhotra was also flabbergasted on his son's talent...

He said " you are magic..."

After alot of praising finally the deal was finalized...

N then Mr.Malhotra n Manik Malhotra both shook hands... Lyk pure business men...n all the others clapped...then all had some more discussions...

[Sorry guys if I went wrong cz I dint knw what actually happens in such meetings I wrote what I cud wri8...I'm only 14 will be 15 on 26th this month olz pardon me ]




At ni8 they returned back home...n manik ran n hugged his mom as soon as he entered

Manik : mom I did it lyk finally I did

Nyo : I knew it...my son z a Rockstar (n she planted a soft Peck in his forehead )

Till then mukti came from behind n said

Muk : oyeee...tu sach bol rha hai ya bana rha hai

Manik : (rolled his eyes ) nai main toh Cabir or Dhruv k saath Marine Drive pe baitha tha...

Muk : haan ye Hui na digestible baat...

Manik : mom isko mute pe krna ka koi tarika nai hai

On which Nyonika laughed n said "shut up Mukti tm dono kitna ladoge..u married n manik now ur such a big boy no no u r man ...stop it u too...

Mukti then went n hugged manik n said " Congo bro..."

Manik too hugged her..

"Thanks di "

Mukti immediately broke the hugg n said " kya bola...come again...mom aj ke liye itne shocks kafi hai let's eat nai toh main shock se Mar jaungi ..."

Manik rolled his eyes n said " kuch logo ko izzat raas nai ati ...or na do toh taunt marte hain..."

N this way they continued fi8ing...n finished their dinner...

After dinner Manik was standing in his balcony of his room in MALHOTRA MANSION







[Poolside of MALHOTRA MANSION]


[Manik's Bedroom]

{Imagine him standing there near the railings]

Just then his P.A. called him his name z Nikhil

Fon Convo :

N : sir you have a meeting tomorrow with ARMAANI Company tomorrow...

Mr.Singhania the C.E.O will be coming

Manik : OK send me the details ..

Nikhil : n sir...mm...

Manik : anything else (he asked )

Nikhil : mm...congratulations sir ..

Manik : thanks Nikhil (he smiled )

Nikhil : welcome sir...good ni8 sir

Manik : gud ni8...n then he hung up

So tomorrow z gonna be a new day... Get ready Mr.Malhotra n he stood there gazing the star ...the wind was blowing with a little more velocity ..n stars were shinning a little more

Manik's POV :

This ni8...why does it feels...indicating me of a new start ... This breeze...it's lyk telling me of sm1's presence...okay enough dude...stop ur filmyness...boht dialogue Marta hai tu

He stood there gazing the stars

@DEHRADUN



Nandini was also standing in her Balcony gazing the stars n thinking

Nandini's POV :

This ni8 z so different...it speaks so much to me...BT I can't understand this wind has so many messages...carrying...as if telling there z smthing or sm1 T come...or a new thing to start...is it soo Dadi Ma ...arreey Dadi Ma z tht bright star Shining ri8 infront of Dadu's room...

She stood there watching the ni8 sky

Screen freezes on both of them drinking then beauty of Ni8 sky

********

I knw boht chota hai...I'm really sorry dearies...BT this part was needed NXT part will be...I wanted to show Yash n Manik 's bond hope u lyked it do tell me...

Let's play a game...u have to tell..me which partnu lyked the most n why

I'll also tell my Fav ...it's of Yash n Manik Dad Son moment cz I never got 1 wid my dad... Bt i feel content writing it...

Now your turn do kiss the star n comment plzzz

All joote chappal tamatar ande...accepted or chaho toh mujhe Malhotra MANSION k pool mei dooba dena ya fir manik ki Balcony se gira dena BT comment zaroor krna "" at least I'll meet him"""

Stay Happie

Stay Blessed

Love Vidushi

Edited by chocopie26 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome happyy well yeah my fav part was also dad- son duo as m very close to my dad u nailed it dear ut writinb was flauless loveddd itt updatr soon takr care thanks for pm

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