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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
No problem with updates date.will be waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update soon.
Thanks for the note.
Take care.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
heyyy i read your story in one go and i loved it . i appreciate of ur hardwork and thankful for this amazing story wanna PM 4 this story and waiting further for Manan meet. Plz PM me eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Sorry to tell you but i felt that it's a little boring
But i hope next chapters will be good waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 5 [Meeting the Rockstar]

Hey Lovelies...
I feel tht I forgot to tell u guys abt something...
So I'll tell you ..
1st the age of the characters...
Manik - 28yrs
Mukti - 29yrs
Cabir - 30yrs
Navya - 28yrs
Abhimanyu - 30yrs
Alya - 27yrs
Dhruv - 28yrs
Nandini - 18yrs

So 10yrs ka diff between the Hero n heroine ... Kesi hogi story
Plz mujhe trust krna n don't think main koi kabada karungi jst trust me...
A full kiddish nandu n mature manik let's see kesa hoga equation..!!!!
Guys I have a full story made up in my mind...that's why I just want a chance to write it down... Hope u all will support me...



Recap : Deal between Manik n YASHRAJ PRODUCTIONS ..Manik n Nandini drinking the beauty of ni8 sky

NEXT MORNING...

The sun rays reached out lightening up the sleeping planet... This morning the su n rays were not so irking or hot...it was a bright day yet cold winds dint let it becm hott!!!! The winds were flowing in a different way... As if giving the message of smthing new

@DEHRADUN :

Nandu's sleep got disturbed by the continuous buzzing of her alarm...she woke up n ran to get ready for school ...

In Shekher - Dipanita 's Room :

Dipanita : I guess iss baar sb kuch acha hoga

Shekher : I don't knw Dipanita all these work n then all these house problems...

Dipanita : plz shekher tum Nandini k wajeh se apna mood mt kharab karo...wo kabhi nai sudheregi wo haath se nikal chuki hai

Shekher : Mene usse music deke usse barbaad kr diya...or wo usko pakad k or badi galati kr rhi hai...

Dipanita : ye SB sirf teenage ka junoon hai...utar jaega

Shekher : and what abt tht scientist thing????...I don't knw how such things come in her mind... She z jsy being fancy

Dipanita : uske frnds they r really very misguiding n upar se tumhari beti v kam badi bewakoof nai hai...

Shekher : I feel lyk ya toh usse kuch kar dun ya khud kuch kar lun...ye ladki hame society mei sir utha k chalne layak nai chodegi

Dipanita : usse Jane do u concentrate on today's meeting chalo let's go...

N they exited their room

All this was heard by one person who was in tears tht was Chaand Bi ..

Chaand Bi's POV :

Ya khuda rehem kr uss bacchi pe... Uss begunah ko na jane kin kin baaton ki saza mil rhi hai...bechari inn sari baaton se bilkuk anjaan hai... Mere maalik itni nazuk itni paakezah cheez bana k tu usse ese berehem logo k saath kese chod skta hai... Ab bas usske liye uska farishta bhejde..mujhe yaakin hai ki tu koi karishma zaroor dikhayega...lakhon ki bheed mei koi toh hoga Jo uski nakli muskaan k peeche k wo aansu dekh paega or unhe pochega... Rehem Jr mere maula rehem kr ...

N just then the Azaan of the mosques was heard by chaand Bi... As it was early morning at that very moment in Mumbai

Manik opened his eyes n at that very moment he also heard the Azaan...he was not at all an early person BT something abt the winds n this morning made him go to the balcony...he stood there n inhaled the early morning breeze...the freshness...n he felt smthing new in it...holding some !message..

Manik's POV :

How this early Malhotra ??.. Huh...Mukti ko pata chala toh bechari Mar jaegi (n he chukkled) okay so as I'm up I shud proceed for my day..!! (He then freshened up went to his gym which is responsible for the existence of such a sizzling physique on earth!!)

@DEHRADUN

Nandini's POV :

After getting ready I stepped down to find mom dad on the breakfast table... Naina di was not there mtlb she z still sleeping Khumbkaran kahi ki... Then I went down to the dinning table I jst was abt to wish mom dad when mom said "Not now ur dad has to leave for an important work plz not ur arguments now"

I felt hurt I wanted to say gud morning

Me : BT mom

Mom : shut up Nandini el baar mei samajh nai ata
(tears came out of my eyes ...she z bad )

I looked at dad who turned his gaze from me as if ignoring me
I then ran out of the house wid my school bag it really hurt me to the core...

End of POV

Then Shekher left for Mumbai ...

@MUMBAI :

Manik was all done with his workout now he went to get ready for the day's schedule

Soon shekher reached Mumbai n signed in in the hotel...
After 2hrs the meeting was with manik

Here Manik was at YASHRAJ n was discussing something I portant with team about his Music vdo...

Soon he received a message from his P.A. about the meeting with Shekher ...

Here Manik was stuck in the meeting


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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
finally u updated..

I wasissing ur story

nandinis parents r heartless..soo cruel
how can his papa say like this abt her..
n her mother oh god..

waiting for manan meet..

I thought manik.is gonna come to dehradun n he will meet nandini but looks like thoda aur intezaar..

excited

waiting fir next update

plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was now exactly 11:00am the tym at which the !meeting was supposed to happen between Shekher and Manik n Manik dint reach yet...

@DEHRADUN [Nandini's School]

It was break tym n all the students were hanging out with their frnds n having chit chat...

Nandini n her frnds were also sitting and having chit chat when Nanc!y came n poked them

Nancy : Luk whoz here the failures ...awww competition se pehle hi darrr kr bhaag gye ...(she said all annoyingly)

Seeing every1's facial expression changed to annoyed

Nandini's POV :

Uff ye namuni kaha se aa gyi???? Godd!!!! Abi vese v uss Amonia Liquor ne dimaag ka destructive distillation Kara hh noe this save me mahnnn!

"I heard ur boyfriend left u alone at the pub last ni8..." Or main soch rhi thi bs yahi bol skti hh here goes Anu ...

"Ahmm..no he went cz he had smthing important to do" she tried to cover up

"Oh yeah thts y were literally hunting for him lyk everywhere " aditi mocked

" I was jst concerned fir him tht he went or not " she said ..."Unlike others who don't hv ppl to even care...parents are only not concerned abt them " she continued with a disgusting smile

And all knw this was for whom???? Ovio me ...her indirect jst hit me n we all understood she was being mean...

"Concern unko dikhao who need n value it...don't keep wasting tym on others...its precious ri8..as u are our biggest well wisher even we wish gud for u ..." Here i shooted my AK47 ...all the others giggled ...N she walked out with a furious face...

"That was awesome one dude!!!! " n I halted at my place...n "Sid" I blurted out jst then I turned to find my BF (don't think esa vesa BF = Bakwaas Friends...cz ye jb v bolta hh bakwaas hi krta hh)

"Tu " I said a bit shocked ye idhar kb aya

Sidharth Rajput



"Haan main luk kya de rhi hh bhoot dekh liya kya???" He said n now my facial expression turned into angry ones...

"Tu tha kidhar???? No khabar n tera fon wo kha gaya kya???" I said angrily ovio I had a reason he jst disappeared for 1week without telling anything to any1

"Yup tere hi fridge se Nutella nikal kr uske saath mix krke kha gaya.." He said irritating me

"Tu ja yaar tu mt baat kr mujhse " n I started going when he said

"Dad se Milne gaya tha...wese ...n he haulted then made a i-am-so-shocked-face n said kahi tu mujhe miss viss to nai kr rhi thi????"

"Noway khudko itni importance dena band kr " I mocked

"Hey Sidharth " anji chirped

"Hello babes " n he hugged her awww these tooo

"Guys apni adult movie baad mei continue krna bell baj gyi let's go to class " n again Anu was back

We all started moving towards the class n I slapped at the back of his head...n said "tu class ke baad mil Teri class lagati hu"

N he pulled me keeping his hand around my neck "tu pehle ye bata tera 6ft zinda hai ya ..." N I gave him a deathly glare

"Manik M A N I K ...simple sweet n very awesome MANIK got tht " I said gritting my teeth ...wese tune ye kyu pucha

"Cz u hv knw whts happening in the world around u so i thot tujhe uss se tym kese mil gaya " ...n I rewarded him wid a punch on his stomach n v walked further... To attend the assembly

End of POV

All the others were also proceeding towrds the assembly BT there was one person not seeming okay

That was Anjali

Anjali's POV

I don't understand Sid ko mere saath tym spend krna chaiye BT he z busy wid Nandu ... Itne dino baad he came n mujhe ese ignore kr diya ...h Nandini shud also understand he z my boyfriend ...she shud give us some privacy ...

End of POV

And she also followed others

@MUMBAI

Manik hadn't reached yet n shekher was all annoyed on this although Manik's P.A. had informed him tht Manik was busy with YASHRAJ meeting
Bt still he was angry

Shekher's POV :

This Manik Malhotra I don't understand what the hell does he think of himself ...itna attitude he has kept me waiting...such a unprofessional person n dad chahte hh main isse ARMAANI ka face banau... I don't understand kya dikhta hai unhe issmei ...Mene toh isse dekha tk nai hh...BT I can surely tell ye ladka kuch nai kr paega aage...n mujhe wait krwane ka price he will hv to pay

End of POV

Manik reached 15mins late for the meeting as he reached his P.A. informed shekher tht he was here...

Manik's BMW haulted at the RENAISSANCE Hotel


N he came out in his all tym famous attitude...as this meeting was meant to be kept personal so media was taken care of...so nothing disturbed him he came n b4 ppl realised who was in the arena he immediately made his way to the lace shekher was waiting

He entered a bomb fell on shekher

Shekher's POV

This boy...ye toh wahi ladka hh Nandini ke paas jiski photos hai...wo bekaar se show wala ...dad ne isse pasand kiya hh???...
N Luk at him kitne attitude mei aa rha hh...hai kuch nai...bs thodi teenagers ko pasand hh m thts it...Nandini ko bhi acha lagta hh tb toh pakka ye bekar hi hoga...BT koi nai u hv to pay for making me wait Mr.Malhotra

They shook hands n exchanged formal greetings

Manik : Mr.Singhania I really apologize for making u wait...so let's start for what we r here for

Shekher : yeah . .

And the meeting started they were discussing abt the contract n all...everytym shekher tried to make Manik feel lyk he was working for him

Shekher tried to be bossy...BT Manik handled it very nicely ...amusing shekher

At last the meeting got over n the deal was final...

Shekher : and there z a condition u will hv to come to dehradun for this...as u knw ARMAANI 's C.E.O can't leave all the jobs n sit here...so (he tried to be superior again)

Manik : ah thts okay... (Manik was okay as his Explorer side was jumping wid joy to roam the streets n inhale the beauty of the mountains of the city of dehradun )

Shekher's POV :

Manik Malhotra now I'll show u who I am

End of POV

Manik's POV :

Ah finally smthing awesome!!! I got a break it will be fun ...n I feel a very strong feeling towards dehradun as if smthing z there...let's see...it will be fun to explore the city of mysteries

End of POV

@DEHRADUN :

School was over n Nandu was back home she went straight to her room as her 12th boards were starting n she concerntrated on studies ...

@Nandu's parent's room :

Dipanita got the news of that the deal was final so she called up Chand Bi

N now was sitting on the bed with a magazine

There was a knock on the door

D : come in

Chand Bi : ma'm apne bulaya

D : oh yeas... Shekher 's deal is final so he will be back to dehradun soon ...so I wanted to ask whts Nandini doing???

Chand Bi : wo padhai kr rhi hh...pr ma'm usne kuch khya nai hh ap plz usee khane bol dijiye

D : bhagwaan ye ladki...khana pina chodke padhai krke kya prove krna chahti hh??? Ki how v torture her...ab bimaar ho jaegi n ye deal v kharab karegi ye ladki ..

I'll tok to this girl

Chaand Bi felt bad for Nandu BT wht can she do she was jst a servant in he house

Dipanita went to nandini's room

@Nandini's Room :

Nandini was sitting on the bed with books scattered n she was engrossed in her chemistry buk with specs on n a dairy milk in hand...she was studying seriously...

Jst then her mom barged in
"Nandini " she shouted due to which Nandu was startled n the dairymilk in her hand dropped on the floor mat...

"Mom " she said

Nandini's

Mom just came in shouting my name n I was startled n my dairy milk dropped ...when u luked back I saw her luking at me furiously n "mom" escaped my mouth

"Ye kya hai ese padhai hoti hai????n ye kya kiya tumne floor mat kharab kr diya??? Tumhe sirf barbadi hi ati hai na????" She suddenly blasted on me

"And tumne khana kyun nai khaya ??? " mom asked n I was lyk she cares??? I was overwhelmed mom ne mujhse pucha mere baare mei I was happy tears formed in my eyes...

"Wo mom.." BT she cut me

"Wo kya haan wo???? What u want tum apni health kharab krke ye ese padhai krke ke kya dikhana chahti ho??? Tht we torture u to study???? Ur dad's deal went well so I was happy n now u spoil ur health n har baar ki tareh iss baar bhi sb barbaad kr dena okay????? Yahi toh tumhe ata hh"...she shouted n shouted on me...I was now in tears...not happy BT sad ones

"No mom" ...I tried to justify BT a loud sob escaped my mouth n " ye magarmach ke ansu mt girao...ro kr kya sabit krna chahti ho????" Kha lena mujhe koi tamasha nai chaiye when yr papa returns ...n shouting at me last tym n then threatening me she exited ...leaving me to cry... Chaand Bi n Naina di Robin all were watching...even Casper came ...

I cried n then as mom exited Naina di came wid food n said
" koi baat nai tu chachi ki baat ka bura mt man ye lo khalo.." She tried to feed me

"No di I have to study main kha lungi ap ye yanhi rakhdo " what wud hv I told her...I was so sad...mom's words were hurting ...Naina di also understood n left keeping the plate

"I cried n cried n tried to study...soon my tears dried up n I was engrossed in my studies...

When I looked outside I found tht the sun was set...it was dark I had been studying for quite long ...it was 8pm now ...

Then I luke at the food ...n wondered ..

" kya kabhi koi nai aega jisse really fark padega tht I eat or not...I sleep or not...am I happy or not...what I feel ...kabi koi nai hoga who will understand me...who will fi8 wid me for me????.."

Koi nai hoga jiske liye meri smile matter karegi????" I was jst thinking .

Screen freezes on nandini's face with ouffed red eyes...n marks if dried tears

************

So finally an update.
I'm really sorry guys for being super late
Bt to be very honest I was not in a condition to write
My personal lyf was a complete mess...
Break downs...heart breaks n emotional outbursts...
Hope u will forgive me...I'm really sorry

So ho gyi Hero or Heroine ke papa ki meeting...
Do tell me how was it . wese I knw it was not gud ...

N do tell me ur Fav scene mine was The way manik handled the situation with Shekher though he was not gud wid him

All ande tamatr joote accepted

PS: IF GUD RESPINSE NEXT UPDATE THIS WEEK ONLY

Don't forget to hitt the star n shoot ur comments

Stay Happy
Stay Blessed

Okay thanks byee

Love Vidushi

Edited by chocopie26 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: KYYian

beautiful update

my fav ones r Manik n his dad convo n
d way u describes condition of grls n guys after seeing Manik..

when will manan meet?

plz jaldi milwado unhe

& u r a beautiful writer & age really doesn't matter when it comes to creativity.
the part of meeting was also penned nicely


Thanks dear...
N the condition description well thanks for tht Manik Malhotra hai hi esa 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: parisultana

Oye my lil RockStar first of all really sorry for commenting so late.

Now coming to story.
Aww...Naina N.Nandu's bonding was pure bliss.
Finally the most awaited Manik Malhotra ki entry ho he gai,Adorable entry.
N Loved Manik N.Mukti's bonding.


Finally aa gya meri didu ka comment tysm!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
awesome second part

I liked d most..d way nandinis frnds took stand for her..then d way naduni described Manik to her BF (I like full form of bf..hahaha..bakwas frnd)...

nandinis parents r real or surrogate or step or adopted? what's d exact status? bcoz I don't think any real parents can hate their kid...

but I know, dis is d main part of d story...manik is gonna compensate for all d tortures n absence of love in nandus life..

loved d update

waiting for d next update..

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