RN ff: Rajveer and Naina: Second Chance to their love

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This ff is based on left right left show. It's my first time.. I am a big fan of Rajveer and Naina story.. so I wanted to start my writing from tbeir story. In my ff story is same till rajveer accident. My story continues from rajveer's accident. I hope you will like it.. pkease give ur valuable comment on this. My story starts from Rajveer's death after his court martial.

Rajveer and Naina : Second Chance to their love

Chapter 1:

Court proceedings are going on. Naina Singh Allhuwalia is fighting the case to get back the respect and honour of her brother Navin Singh Allhuwalia nd her mentor, her confidant, her Capt. Sir and her love Rajveer Singh Shikawat.

It's been 6 months after that tragic incident, which snatched her sir, her mentor, her love from her and may be her life too. Yes it's true that for others it was only rajveer, who died in that incident, but for Naina... Naina too died with her love. Her love... hmm. She wasn't even enough lucky to tell him that she loves him, to hear from him that he loves her, forget about living their love.

She only has one memory related to their love confession which was also left incomplete. It was the last time where rajveer was with her, last time when Naina was able to see him, the last time where she was in his arms. Yes she has been in his arms quite a number of times. They hugged each other before too, but it was the first time when they were able to feel their love for each other. They both wanted to confess their love at that moment. They both wanted to be each other for the lifetime. They both wanted time to stop, so that they can be together always. But they both knew it's not going to happen. They were getting separated. Naina didn't want him to go. Rajveer told her that this system has snatched everything from him, his friend, his respect, his lo..

Yes even in the last time he couldn't tell her how much he loved her. But yet she heard his unsaid words. But she was unfortunate she couldn't even say those half words also.

When Rajveer died in that car blast, Naina was not able to understand what was happening. Rajveer Sir, those were the last words which she said, before going into shock. She was not able to believe that her sir, her mentor who was always there with her, who always supported her even when she didn't believe him and tried to kill him, has left her in that brutal manner. Her sir is not going to come now. He left her alone. She was not able to accept that fact. She fell down on her knees. She was continuously seeing that burning car in which her sir, her love was there. She didn't blink her eyes, not only for few minutes, but for hours. Hours more than anyone could believe. She didn't speak with anyone. After those two words Rajveer Sir, nobody heard her for 10 days. She was going through mental trauma. It was as if he too died with him. And yes it was indeed true. Yes she was living, she was breathing, but she was not nothing more than a living dead body. Her soul left her with him.

She found herself living again only for him, for his promises. He asked her that even if he died, she has to continue his battle. She has to fight for her brother's justice,respect, pride. She needs to prove his innocence. He believed in her. He asked her to have confidence in him because he has confidence in his cadet Naina Ah Singh. He wanted her to become the best cadet pass out of Kma. She needs to become A soldier. So she started living her life to fulfill his wishes. Now nothing left in her except his memories and his wishes, which were keeping her alive. These 6 months she fought a dangerous battle against Lala Gehlot to prove her brother's and her mentor's innocence, to give them their respect, their pride back. She was successful in these. She proved Lala Gehlot was the main culprit. He was the traitor not her brother and her sir. With the help of her friends Alekh, huda, Pooja, Ali, Yudi, Captain Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan, Captain Gunraj Singh Randhawa she was successful in proving Navin and rajveer innocence.

Today is the last hearing of the case, which was going on in the military court. Again it was Naina who was fighting this case against Lala Gehlot and Major Nair. After Navin's death she was studying military law too to prove her brother's innocence but couldn't use her knowledge. Whatever happened during the court trial of Rajveer's case gave the push to Naina to stimulate her knowledge. She knew she will need to use her knowledge while fighting the case to gain her bother's and Rajveer's respect. She didn't want to rely on anyone. It was her own battle and she wanted to fight on her own. Therefore she studied military law thoroughly and became a proficient in military law.

Now when the accusations against Lala Gehlot and Major Nair was proved true, Naina was taking her last stand against this system, which too was equally responsible for whatever happend with Navin and Rajveer. She was equally angry with this system too.

Naina: You honour, it has been proved that it was Lala Gehlot and Major Nair who were trying to steal the nuclear triggers and they were engaged in smuggling our country's arms and ammunition to the terrorist. Capt Navin and Capt. Rajveer were the one who died while fighting against them. They were saving our country, but what they got for their sacrifice. They died while saving our country, they became shaheed but our system accused them to be traitors. Sorry to say this, but our system too is equally responsible for whatever happen with both the capt. In both the cases no full enquiry was made. Both cases were hurriedly closed. No proper enquiry was done. Capt navin and Capt Rajveer both were best cadets of KMA and best soldiers this country could ever have. Both saved this country from the enemies no of times. But still even after all that both were not given proper chance to prove their innocence. Neither of them was provided with advocate who could fight their case and prove their innocence. Both the cases were closed in the shortest time ever possible. I want to ask is this the way our system treat the soldiers who are fighting and keeping their life in danger to protect our country. If this system is going to continue to make mistake like this then I am afraid that in future not many people will want to join our army because they will have this fear that they can be declared traitors instead of shaheed while they were saving our country.

Everyone was silent in the court. The judges who too were military personnel were feeling ashamed. Naina was indeed correct.

You honour, now when Capt. Navin Singh Allhuwalia and Capt Rajveer Singh Shikawat are proved innocent, I would like to ask only one thing from this court that is total justice. I want this court to give their pride, respect and honour back to both the capt which was snatched from them. They died while saving our country, they were shaheed but our system labeled them as traitors. I would like this court to announce them as shaheed and also that this court should apologies for the unfairness and injustice which has been done with both the captains. It's not only the captains who had suffered but with them their families, their dear ones too has suffered. I would also like to ask this court to see that the injustice which has been done in both the cases will not be done again. No soldier should be treated like the way Capt Navin and Capt Rajveer were treated. With this I rest my case.

Naina fought this case bravely. Court apologized for the injustice which was done in both the cases. Capt navin And Capt Rajveer were proclaimed as Saheed and their repect and pride was given back. Court also announced that from now onwards proper enquiry will be made in cases like this and proper treatment will be given. It will be seen that this type of injustice will not be done again.

With this Naina proved her brother and rahveer's innocence. The battle which she started with navin's death, she won that battle today. But she lost soo much for winning this battle. She lost him, her only strength, her only support, her love. Naina wanted her brother's pic on Wall of fame. She became successful in that but never in her dream she imagined that she will be seeing Raveer's pic too beside navin's pic on the wall of fame. BC has appologised Naina for the injustice which was done with navin and at the same time he was proud on her. She not only proved Navin and Rajveer's innocence but also removed the black mark from the KMA. BC asked Naina to put the pic of both Navin and Rajveer on the wall of fame. Everyone was happy and proud of her. But she was lost. She won her battle but she lost herself while fighting this battle.

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Chapter 2: After 2 month from Court trial:

Today is the day when Naina and her friends are going to pass out from KMA. From cadets they are going to become lt. Today two most important announcements are going to be made. First is about the best cadet pass out and in second announcement it will be announced who will be given the sword of honour.

All cadets are happy. They are going to graduate. They are going to become lt. from cadets. But there is one person who is not feling anything. Neither she is happy nor she is sad. That person is Naina. In these 8 months Naina stopped feeling any emotion. Her every feeling, every emotion died with her Rajveer. Today she is going to graduate from KMA. She is just hopping that she will become best cadet pass out of KMA. Not for her but for him. He wanted her to become best cadet pass out like her brother. It was his wish. Naina wants to fulfill his wish. She gave her everything in these 8 months. She dedicated her self towards her goals, which were the promises which she made to him. She fulfilled her one promise by proving Naveen and Rajveer innocence. Now it was time for her second promise. She devoted herself fully in becoming the best cadet pass out. She stopped smilling, she stopped crying, she stopped going out with her friends, she stopped wasting her time by chatting with her friends on any random topic. It's not like that she was avoiding her friends. No. But she became more focused towards her goals. She still talks with her friends but not more often like previously. She focused on her study and training and also encouraged her friends also to do that. She told them that Capt. Rajveer wanted them to become good soldier. So they must focus on that. She still helps her friends, she still solves their problems, but she doesn't show any emotion. She advised them; give her opinion whenever they asked her but without feeling anything. In these 8 months only one good thing happened with her. Her bond with Alkeh grew stronger. Alekh always supported her like Capt. Rajveer. He always respected her. Even when this truth came out that she is sister of Naveen Singh Allhuwalia, whom everyone considered traitor, he without any question supported her and helped her in her battle of proving her innocence of her brother. After Rajveer, Alekh was the one who was always with her. Alekh was the one, who made her realised that she loves Capt. Rajveer. He was the one who really was happy for her when he came to know about her feelings for Rajveer and he was also the one was was broken by seeing Naina dieing by each passing day after capt. Rajveer's death. Alekh was orphan. Her father killed her mother and he killed her father. He was not having anyone in his life. He was in jail before coming to Kma, for killing her father. He was transferred to Kma for rehabilitation and to make him a good person. He was not having anyone. He didn't feel any emotion. There was only pain in his life. That's why he was attached with Naina, because he always saw pain in her eyes. He felt related with her. That's why when he came to know about her brother, he made promise to himself that he will always with Naina, like her brother. Naina also felt brotherly affection for him. Nobody can replace Naveen's place in her life, but whenever she was with Alekh , she always felt as if her brother is with her and supporting her. Alekh has seen and felt her pain, her brother's loss. He has seen how broken she was because of her brother's death. He has also seen that because of Capt. Rajveer she was coming out of her pain. After Naveen's death only anger was left in her but because of capt. Rajveer, she started smiling again. She started to be happy again. She was able to feel other emotions. Alelkh was the one who realised that both Capt. Rajveer and Naina love each other, even before they themselves realised. He has seen Naina living her life once again because of Capt. Rajveer, without even her knowledge that how much Capt. Rajveer means to her. Therefore after Capt. Rajveer's death, Alekh was much tensed about Naina. He knew that this time Naina was lost for forever. He knew that Naina too died with Capt. Rajveer. But how can he leave her alone. He promised to be with her and it became even more important to be with her. Even though Naina stopped feeling any emotion, but she always felt little calm with Alekh. After Capt. Rajveer's death, Naina was reluctant in becoming close to anyone, because she felt that whoever she loves leaves her alone. She felt that she is a curse. She has lost Naveen and Rajveer, now she didn't want to loose Alekh too. Therefore she was trying to maintain distance with Alekh. But Alekh understood why she is trying to avoid him. Therfore she explained her that it was not her fault and she is wrong by blaiming her for whatever happened with Naveen and Rajveer. Alekh didn't leave her alone and because of his care, affection and determination he was able to reduce Naina's guilt. Naina too was alone. Now for both Naina and Alekh, it was only them who were there for each other. Yes there other friends were there too, but the bond they both share was stronger then with others. May be because, it was pain who bonded them together. Alekh got his sister, his best friend, his only family in her, whereas Naina got her brother, her best friend in him. That's why today now when they are graduating and they know that may be they are going to be separated because of their duties, they promised each other that whatever happens they will be always there for each other. Nothing and no one can separate them.

Naina was also thankful to Huda, Pooja, Ali, Yudi, Capt Abhimanyu, Canpt. Gunraj for their help, because of which she was able to prove Naveen's and Rajveer's innocence. Cpat. Gunraj Sigh Randhawa was also a friend and fellow cadet of Naveen and Rajveer along with Abhimanyu. After knowing that Naina is Naveen's sister he considered her as his sister too. For Abhimayu Naina was his only friend after Rajveer with whom he can share anything and with who he can be himself. Naina's friend and Capt. Abhimayu and Capt. Randhawa, they all knew that how much Naina is suffering and how much she is broken after Rajveer's death. But at the same time they all were very proud of her for her strength and her determination because of which she was able to fight that dangerous battle. They all knew they have lost Naina with rajveer's death and they can not do much for bringing her back but just be with her and support her in her every step.

Back to convocation, BC (Brigadier Chandok) congratulated all the cadets and wished them luck for their future. As wished by Rajveer, Naina became best cadet pass out of KMA. Not only that She was also awarded with Sword of honour along with Alekh for proving Naveen and Rajveer's innocence, for showing real face of Lala Gehlot and Major Nair. BC was really feeling proud of her. He remembered the first day when Naina came to join the academy, BC told her that she will look more good in girls clothes rather than in a soldier uniform. BC always thought Naina will not be able to become a soldier, because she is a girl. For some unknown reasons BC always thought that girls are week and they can not become soldier. But Naina proved him wrong. Today Naina not only became a soldier but also became best cadet pass out of the academy. Not only this, she showed immense courage while fighting against Lala Gehlot and proved that KMA always produced best soldiers of our country including Capt. Rajveer and Capt. Naveen. Today BC was really proud on her. He wished her all the best for her future and told that KMA will always be proud on her. He told her that She proved Capt. Rajveer was correct, when he told him that Naina will not only pass out from this academy but will also be the best cadet pass out. He told her that today Capt. Rajveer will be very proud of her. Naina felt her eyes becoming teary but she controlled herself. She does not want to show that Capt. Rajveer's favorite cadet, his protg is emotionally weak. But what she didn't know is the fact that BC was also able to see the pain, the emptiness in her eyes, which was there because of Capt. Rajveer's death. BC always felt that Capt. Rajveer was emotionally attached with Cadet Naina Singh. Later when he came to know that Naina is Naveen's sister, who was Rajveer's best friend, he thought that may be because of that Capt. Rajveer and Naina were emotionally attached with each other. He and total KMA knew that both Capt. Rajveer and Naina trust each other completely. May be it was the reason that BC allowed Naina to claim Rajveer's personal stuff, which was left in KMA. Naina also made a request to him that Capt. Rajveer's room should not be given to anyone else. It should be locked. She told him that Capt. Rajveer gave his life for his country, atleast KMA can spare a room for him as his memory. BC accepted her request and told her that Capt. Rajveer's room will not be allotted to any other faculty member and it will be kept locked.

After the convocation every cadet was informed about their postings. Huda was posted in North East, Pooja was posted in Gujarat, Yudi was posted in Mumbai, Ali was posted in Rajasthan. For Naina and Alekh it was a relief that they were posted together in Jammu and Kashmir under the guidance of Capt. Randhawa. All departed except Naina Nad Alekh from KMA with a promise to stay in contact with each other and meet with each other whenever possible. Naina and Alekh are supposed to leave KMA tomorrow.

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Today Naina needs to leave KMA to join her posting along with Alekh. She is In deep thoughts. She is watching each and every place of KMA and remembering her days. Memories, she has many memories with KMA. KMA has given so much to her and at the same time has snatched someone very dear to her. Someone, who has her heart and her soul. This KMA was the witness of Rajveer and Naina's love, their unfulfilled love, their immense trust for each other. KMA has given Naina her Rajveer, her mentor, her friend, her teacher, her guide, her love. Everyplace of KMA holds memories of Rajveer and Naina.

KMA, hi wo jagah thi jaha mile the pehl aar Raj and Naina. Do anjaan log jo pehle ek dusre par shaq karte the, wahi do log ek dusre pea ankh band kar ke bahrosa karne lage the. Yeh sab hua tha KMA me. KMA ne dekha tha Rajveer ki support Naina ke liye. Rajveer ka Naina ko motivate karma ek acha soldier and best cadet pass out banana ke liye, Naina ka Rajveer ke pass aana apni har choti choti problems leke aur Rajveer ka un problems ko solve karma bina kisi irritation ke. Ye wahi jagah thi jisne Naina ko ye ehsas dilya tha ki wo akeli nahi hai, koi hai uske saath, usko support karne ke liye, uski taakat banae ke liye, ushe sahara den eke liye, agar wo koi galti kare to uski galti sudharne ke liye, ek esa insaan jo hamesha uska saath dega, jo kabi use akela nahi chodega.

Naina khadi hai Rajveer ke kamre ke bahar. Ye wo kmara hai jaha Niana bina kisi jijhak ke aaya karti thi. Jab bhi wo udas hoti, ya jab bhi wok hush hoti, agar kisi problem me ho to bhi or agar kisi problem ka solution dondh liya ho to bhi. Naina apni har choti se choti baat bhi batane aaya karti thi Rajveer ko aur Rajveer, aisa lagta tha mano jaise wo Naina ka hi intzaar kiya karta ho.

KMA has witnessed their trust, their repect, their love for each other, which they didn't confess to each other. It has witnessed one of the most amazing and pure relation between them, but not all understood it correctly.

Some doubted their relation and named it impure. Fellow cadets accused Naina and Capt. Rajveer for having an affair and considered relation between teacher and student impure.. Those accusations were one of the reasons that Capt. Rajveer didn't confess his love for Naina and tried distancing himself from Naina for her respect. He even ended up getting engaged to Dr. Ritu Mishra, (who was later found to be a spy and the one, who cheated Naveen,) for saving Naina's respect and dignity. But with passing time both Capt. Rajveer and Naina proved that the relation between them is pure. Those accusations died with time but somewhere deep down total KMA was witnessing the love between Capt. Rajveer and Naina. It's the other thing that both of them didn't confess their love and tried to suppress their feelings for each other. For Rajveer he was sure what he felt for naina but didn't confess her feelings because he was in guilt of killing Naveen and also he thought that Naina will never love him. He thought that why Naina will love him, after all he was the one who shoot her brother and because of him Naveen died. His doubt became stronger when naina fired on him during mock drill of Capt. Rajveer, during which he was transferring nuclear triggers from KMA to a safer place. But what he didn't know is that Naina too felt the same for him. She too loves him but it's just that she was confused about her feelings. She was focusing only on her mission of proving her brother's innocence. At that time she didn't want to distract her. Also she was never in love before. Therefore she was not able to understand her feelings. She always thought that what she feels for Capt Rajveer is pure admiration. She has immense respect for him. She knew that Capt. Rajveer is very important for her and what she was not able to understand was how much important and why. Yes she fired on Capt. Rajveer, but that was an act of mixed emotions. When Naina came to know that, Capt Rajveer was the one who shooted on her brother, she was angry on him. But she never hated him. She was confused and angry on herself too that why she was not able to hate him even after knowing that he was the one who was responsible of her brother's death. She took out her anger on him. She tried every possible way to avoid him. She avoided him, she shouted on him, she told him that she doesn't trust him anymore, but still she didn't hate him. She still felt something for him, which was too strong compare to her anger. But she was not able to identify that feeling. It was Alekh who made her realised that what she feels for Rajveer is pure love. But it was too late for her. Before she could tell him, confess her love for him, he was killed.

Naina is standing in front of Wall of KMA and watching the two most important people of her life, her brother and her Rajveer. She came here to prove her brother's innocence, which she proved but that cost her losing her mentor, her love, the only person who was there with her, on whom she can rely for anything and everything.

Naina pov: Bhaiya me aayi thi yaha aaki begunahi prove karne. Maine wada kiya tha ki aapki jis tasveer to is wall of fae se utar kar pekha gaya tha, main use vapis yaha lagaongi, mene apna wo vada pora kia bhaiya. Par ye mene akele nahi kiya. Ye sab possible ho paya aapke best friend Capt. Rajveer ki wajah se aur mere dosto ki support se. Agar Capt. Rajveer ne mera saath na diya hota to main aapki innocence to dur ki baat, is acadmay se bahut pehle hi nikal di gayi hoti.

Capt. Rajveer aap chate the na ki me best cadet pass out banu, dekhiye main best cadet pass out ban gayi. Jo jug aap chathe the ki main pori karu aur jeeto, wo jang bhi hum jeet gaye. Hum jeet gaye Capt. Rajveer aur humare aur humare desh ke dushmano ko unke kiye ki sajah mil gayi. Jaisa aap chathe the sab waisa hi kiya maine. Bas aap new o nahi kiya jo aapne promise kiya tha mujse. Apne kaha tha ki aap hamesha mere saath rahenge, hume koi alag nahi kar paayga, par dekhiye aap mujhe chod kar chale gaye, akele. Kyu aap mujhe chod kar clae gaye. Aap ki Cadet singh itni strong nahi hai ki wo aapke bina jee sake. Main thak gayi hu ab, mujhe aapki jaroorat hai, plz wapis aa jaiye mere pass, apni Cadet Naina ah sigh ke pass. Main akeli hu. Aap or bhaiya muje akele chod kar chale gaye.

Tabhi koi piche se naina ke kandho par haath raktha hai. Wo koi aur nahi Alekh tha. Nina ki aankho me aanso the jo bahar aane wale the par wo unhe bahar aane se pehle hi puch leti hai. Par Alekh ko pata hai ki Niana kis halat main hai.

Alekh: Kya karle rahi tu idhar. Tujhe pata hai na kit era bhai or apun ke Capt. Rajveer tujhe aise rote hue dekh kar bilkul khus nahi honge. Capt. Rajveer to apun ki wat laga denge ki maine unki Nina ka ache se dhyan nahi raka. Tu kya mujhe joote padvna chathi hai.

He tried to light her mood. Nina gave him a small smile.

Dekh apun jaanta hai Naina ki tu kya feel kar rahi hai, par kabhi bhi ye mat sochna ki tu aklei hai. Hamesha yaad rakhna ki main tere saath hamesha hu. Itni mushkil se ek behen mili hai mujhe, wo bhi itne saalo baad, main tujhe aise nahi chodonga. Tujhe apun se koi chutkara nahi dila sakta. Amjhi tu. \

Naina: thank you Alekh. Main janti hu tu hamesha mera saath dega aur main chathi bhi nahi ki tu mera picha chode. Mujhe bhi to mera bhai mila hai tujhme. Ek bhai pehle kho chuki hu, dusra nahi khona chathi.

Both Niana ad Alekh hug each other.

Alekh: Chal abhi emotional mat ho aura pun ko bhi emotional mat kar. Tu janti hai na ye rona dhona mujshe nahi sambhalata. Aura b chal hamare jaane ka time ho gaya hai.

Naina nodded. Both Alek and Naina saw wall of fame and saluted Capt. Navin and Capt. Rajveer. Alekh made promise to his sir, that he will never leave Naina alone and will always support her and take care of her, the way, Capt. Rajveer supported him and took care of him. Alekh has high respect for Capt. Rajveer because Capt. Rajveer was the one who saw that Alekh can become a good soldier. He was the one along with Naina who didn't judge him for his past and supported him. Capt. Rajveer inspired him to be a good soldier and to always fight to protect our country. Today whatever he is, is because of Capt. Rajveer's guidance, trust and support. Naina and Capt. Rajveer both mean so much for him. He has lost his teacher, his guide but didn't want to loose his sister, his friend, his only family. He knew Capt. Rajveer loved Naina soo much, so he made promise to him to protect and look after his Naina.

Both Naina and Alekh left KMA, with their final salute to KMA to join their new posting.


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Chapter 4

After 3 years, in J&K Military hospital operation theater:


Operation is going on. Doctors are trying to save the patient. The patient got badly injured due to terrorist attack. Operation is going on from past 4 hours. Doctors have treated all the wounds, have taken out the bullets, but still they are not hopeful about whether they will be able to save her. Her body is not responding to the medicines. It's looking as if she has left no hope in life, as if she doesn't want to live anymore. Doctors are trying their level best.

Outside the Operation theater, one young man is pacing around operation theater. He is very worried about her.

After 7 hours, Doctors comes out from operation theater. That young man, who is non another then Alekh, rushed to doctors and asked

Alekh: Doctors Naina kaisi hai? Wo thik hai na. use hosh aa gaya? Main abhi milsakta hu usse? Bataye na chup kyu hai?

Doctors: Operation was successful. We have treated all the injuries, but?

Alekh: but what doc?

Doctor: I am sorry to say Capt. Alekh Sharma, but Cpt. Naina Singh Allhuwalia is not responding to our medicines. It's very important for her to come into consciousness within 24 hours. Otherwise we won't be able to save her. Aisa lag raha hai jaise wo khud jeena nahi chathi. humne unhe ICU main shift kar diya hai, ab bas unke hosh main aane ka intzar karna hai

Alekh: Nahi Doct. Wo itni kamjor nahi hai. Wo jeeyege. Wo hosh main aaege. Yeh aisa pehli bar nahi hua hai. Aap phikar mat kariye doct use kuch nhi hoga. Wo kabhi kamjor nahi padegi. wo hosh main aayegi apne liye na sahi to apne pyaar ke liye. Wo apne mentor ki sikh ko nahi bhool sakti. Wo wapas aayegi, unke liye.

Inside ICU: Naina is lying unconscious. But her mind is still not at rest.

"Jis din tum sab ne KMA e kadam rakha tha, us din tumne apni zindgi desh ke naam kardi thi. Yeh zindgi ab tumhari nahi, is desh ki hai".

" Ek sipahi apni aakhri saans tak ladta hai. Aur jab tak wo aakhri saans baki rahti hai, wo umeed baki rahti hai"

" nahi Naina umeed mat chodna"

"ek sacha soldier kabhi bhi jung bich main nahi chodta"

" Naina na tum sirg ek sipahi banogi, balki ek aval darje ki sipahi banogi, aisa mera tum pe vishwas hai. So just beleive in yourself, because i believe in cadet Naina ah singh"

" Naina mere baad ye jung tum ladogi, jo bhi unhone mera china hai, mera career, mera dost, mera pya"

"Naina maine apna pura career intelligence main nikala hai, wo mujh tak nahi pauch paayenge"

then she remembers their last hug, where amidst the firing they were hugging each other one last time. both not willing to let go off each other. den she sees him going off from there in jeep.

Suddenly she sees smoke around her, everything around her disappear. Her friends, enemies shooting at them , everyone disappears. All sounds become quite. Only they both are there.

Rajveer: Naina yeh kya kar rahi ho. Tum umeed kaise har sakti ho. Meri Naina itni kamjor to nahi thi. To phir ab kya ho gaya.

Naina: Ha main kamjor nahi thi kyunki tab aap mere saath the, par ab main akeli hu, aap mujhe akele chod kar pata nahi kaha chale gaye.

rajveer: amin kahi nahi gaya Naina. Main to humesha tumhara saath hu. Main bhala apni Cadet Naina ah singh ko chod kar kaha ja sakta hu. Main to yahi hu, tumhare pass. tumhare saath. phir tum aisa kyu kar rai ho. Kyu zindagi ki jagah maut chun rahi ho?

Naina: nahi sir ab mujhse aur nahi hota. Main thak gayi hu. Main ab aapke saath rehna chathi hu. Ab mujhme aur himat nahi. Sab kehte hai aap nahi ho, ki aap mar... par main nahi manti. pichle 4 years se maine apni umeed nahi chodi aapse mine ki. har pal aapka intzar karti hu. par ab bas. ab aur nahi hota. ab main aapse aur door nahi rah sakti. Mujhe nahi pata kya sach hai, kya jhooth. Main bas itna janti hu ki main ab apke bina aur nahi rah sakti. Jo log kehte hai agar wo sach hai to mujhe ye maut bhi manjor hai. mujhe wo har chiz, wo har rasta manjor hai jo mujhe aapse mivaye.

Raj: Nina

Naina: nahi sir, ya to aap mere pass wapis aa jaiye, ya phir muje apne saath le chaliye. ab ain aapse alag nahi rahogi. Aap to mere pass aate nahi, to thik hai main aapke saath chalongi. Mujhe aise zindagi nahi chaiye jaha aap mere saath na ho. Waise bhi maine apne saare promises pure kar diye. ab bas mujhe aapke saath rehna hai.

Raj: Naina, main bhi tumhare saath rehna chata hu. main promise karta hu main jaldi tumhare pass aaonga, tum bas apni umeed mat chodo. mujhe kuvh nahi hoga. mere intzar karna, main tumhare pass jaroor aaonga.

Suddenly smoke gets clear. Now she is again able to see her friends, those terrorists who are firing them. Then suddenly bullet hit rajveer hand and they broke there hug.

Naina: sir

Raj: main thik hu. kuch nahi hua. sirf cho kar nikli hai. ab mujhe jana hoga. apna khyal rakhna.

Then she see him going in jeep and suddenly they hear a big sound and sees jeep burning into fire.

Naina: Rajveer sirrr...

Present time in ICU

Naina shouts rajveer sir and comes back into conscious. she is breathing heavily.

Naina: Aap har bar mujhse vada karte hai ki aap aayege, par aaj tak nahi aaye, na hi mujhe apne pass aane dete hai. Kyu sir, kaise reh lete hai mere bina. then she hears one voice

" main to hamesha tumhare saath hu, tumhare pass"

Doors burst open and doctors come inside.

Doc: to aapko hosh aa gaya. Thank god. agar aap ek ghanta late aur ho jati to hum aapko nahi bacha pate.

Naina said with small smile: mujhe kuch nahi hota Doc. kyunki koi hai jo mujhe kuch nahi hone deta, har baar mujhe bacha lete hai.

Doct seems to be amused. kamal hai. aapke dost bhi yahi keh rahe the. ki aapo kuch nahi hoga. Aap aur apke dost itne confident the. sirf hum doctors hi the jo syre nahi the. anyways aapko rest karna chaiye. main aapke friend ko andar bhej ta hu.

alekh comes inside .

Alekh: kaisi hai, apun ko pata hai achi hi hogi. wasie tera mission kamiyab raha. Tune terrorist ke thikane ko pura udadala. saare mare gaye. waise tujhe itni bahaduri dikhane ki kya jarorat thi. Akele unpar hamla karne ki kya jaroorat thi. rescue team aa rahi thi. kyu har baar apni jaan ko kahtre main dalti hai. pichle 3 saal me kitni baar marte marte bachi hai. par tujhe kya. tujhe kya padi hai. na apni na apun ki.

Naina: Alekh tu janta hai na hum soldiers hai. Humara kaam hi dushmano ko marna hai. Aur tu yeh kaise keh sakta hai ki mujhe tere koi phikar nahi hai. tu janta hai tu mere liye kya hai. aur dekh main thik hu. tujhe to pata hai na mujhe kuch nahi hota.

Alekh: janta hai apun ki tukhe kuch nahi hota. Tere Rajveer sir hai na humesha ki tarah tujhe bachane ke liye. par apun ki ek baat sun le, apun ke pass bas ek tu hi hai. saalo ke baad koi apna mila hai, tu dubara mujhe akele karne ki sochna bhi mat. apun sirf tere ko kehne ke liye behen nahi manta balki sach main manta bhi hai, ek tu i to hai apun ki apni. alekh says with tears.

Naina: bas bas itna senti kyu ho raha hai. aur mera bhai rough tough hi acha lagta hai, aise rote hue nahi. aur main kahi nahi ja rahi. yahi hu tere saath. acha ye sab chod aur ye bata, tu yaha kya kar raha hai. Tujhe to KMA main hona chaiye.

Alekh: tujhe kya lagta hai ki tu yaha is halat main aur apun waha KMA main rahega . Apun ko jaise hi pata chala apun turant yaha aa gaya. Chal ye sab chod aur tu aaram kar. apun tere se baad me milta hai.

Naina: nahi alekh, tu ab wapis KMA jayega. Main ab thik hu.

Alekh: Naina par

Naina: nahi alekh, dekh tune bhai hone ka farz nibhaya, tu yaha aaya. par ab main thik hu. ab jake apne teacher hone ka farz nibha. tere students tera wait kar rahe honge. Waise mujhe ab tak samajh main nahi aay ki achank se teri posting KMA main kyu ho gayi. Tu jitna acha soldier hai us hisab se tujhe KMA me teacher ki posting, thoda ajeeb naji hai.

Alekh looks little worried but says that are apun ko kya karna hai. apun to jaha bole waha chala jata hai. phir thik hai na. pichle 3 saal se ladte ladte thoda thak bhi gaya hai apun. ab KMA main students to padaonga to thoda aram mil jayega aur phir apne suriji bhi to hai waha. Aur tu mujhse jalna band kar. Tujhe bhi aaram mil sakta hai, par tu hi hai jise katron se kelne ki aadat hai. isilye to pichle 3 saalo main sabse khatarnak misson leti hai aur apni jaan khatre main dalti hai. Chal ab apun chalta hai. Waise bhi apun ko aaj hi KMA main report karna tha. Wo BC to mera wait karte karte thak gaya hoga. Chal apun chalta hai. aur tu apna khayal rakhna aur mujhe phone karna, hum phir jaldi milenge. Bye.

Naina: Bye. take care.

Alekh leave from there hurridely.

Naina thinks pehle to jaane ko tayar nahi tha au ab itni jaldi main chala gaya. ye bh na.

Outside hospital alekh calls someone

Alekh: hello sirr, ha wo thik hai. tension ki naat nahi hai. apun abhi use mil kar aa raha hai. aur ab apun KMA ke liye nikal raha hai. aapse KMA me milta hai.

Person: par tum aaj hi kyu wapis aa rahe ho. Tumhe Nina ke pass rukna chaiye. tum yaha ki phikar mat karo. Naina ko tumhari jarrorat hai.

Alekh: Apun janta hai sir, par usko doubt ho raha tha ki apun ki posting aise achanak KMA me kaise ho gayi. wo apun se sawal puch rahi thi. agar apun yaha raha to wo paka dubara is barre amin sovchegi. aur aap phikar mat karo maine aapne aadmi rakhe hai yaha wo Naina ka pur dhyaan rakhenge.

Person: thik hai phir tum aa joa. Tumse KMA me milta hu. Aur dhyan rakhna. Tumhe pata hai na yumhe kya karna hai.

Alekh: ji sir, aap tension mat le. apun sambhal lega. Bye sir.

Person: bye.

and call gets ended up.

" Naina apna dhyan rakhna. bas kuch din aur phir tum yaha hogi, mere pass, mere saath, aur phir koi tumhe mujhse door nahi karpayega"

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its a nice start.. Do continue soon.. But I guess it needs to be shifted to Fan fiction section. This is a forum of some other show !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Who rajveer nd naina????
This is ky2 forum. Only reserved for MaNan
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hiii
new RN fic
i m so excited to read it
plz continue soon
n plz send me the pm
all the parts is fabulous beautiful written
update soon

love Arti

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