MaNan SS - DO YOU REALLY HATE ME?? Chap 5 pg42 /4th May PMS sent - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Yeah, manan school days.. Want to read more if you gonna update regularly.. Update soon, would love to follow the story..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
awsum story...loved d update...
both r fighting like tom n jerry...
their Familyy r too gud...
manan mom r too sweet
waitg to read further ...

Edited by navla - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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All the best for ur exam
Nice


Awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii guyss!! Here I am...exams overr...yayieee...thankyou all for ur wishes...my exams went pretty well!! So here is the next chapter...enjoy!!

Chapter 1(B)


It was the last day of their school...Yes! Last day of school. The whole school was decorated for them. It was their farewell. All of them had arrived except the 4 girls.

Manik was wearing white tee with a black blazer on it & was looking like a Greek God! Every girl present there was ogling at him but he paid no heed to them.

Cabir was wearing an off white colour blazer. He was looking hot & handsome.

Dhruv was wearing blue colour blazer & Abhi was wearing a red blazer.

Cabir, Dhruv & Abhi were gossiping about their school days & Manik was looking around busy in his thoughts.

Maniks POV
Last day of the school...Like seriously LAST DAY!! pata hi nhi chala kab time chala gaya aur hum 1st standard se 10th mein aaye aur ab yeh...it seems like time is going soo fast. Ab se roz no waking up early morning for school, no homewrk, no scoldings from teachers...ufff!! I'll soo miss all this. Ab hum sab ki ek nayi life shuru hogi. College life! Sab alag ho jayenge...par I dont want us to separate...please hume saath rakhna bhagwan.

End of POV

He was busy thinking all this when his trance was broken by Cabir,
"Oyee Manik kaha khoya hai?? Yaha tu aise boring chup chap khada hai aur ab tak ladkiya bhi nhi aayi...yaar kitna time lagati tayar hone me...mein naa un sab ko..."

Dhruv "Ohhoo madhubala ke aashiq dekh udhar aa gayi sab"

All 4 turn towards them & as soon as they saw them their jaws dropped down.

Alya was wearing pink colour one piece reaching till her mid thighs, her hairs were lil curled up. She was looking like a barbie doll! Dhruv was not able to take his eyes off from her.

Navya was wearing silver colour one piece, hairs were left open. Cabir was awestruck by her beauty seeing his Madhubala looking so hot.

Mukti was wearing a blue colour one piece. She was looking damn sexy! Abhi was drooling over her as she always used to wear shorts & tank tops.

But out of all of them, one person was even not blinking his eyes. Ofcourse Manik Malhotra! He was mesmerised by Nandinis beauty. She was wearing a black colour one piece looking hot & sexy.

Maniks POV
Omfg!! Is that Nandini?? Like seriously?? Ek to yeh motii hai nhi phir bhi main isse motii bulata hu so that I dont get distracted...aur ab yeh itni HOT dikhegi toh main toh...Damn! I LIKE HER SOO MUCH!! How do I tell her that how much she affects me. Control Manik! Control. Dont look at her. Yes! But kaise she is looking so beautiful. Oh God! Help me!

End of POV

The scenario was same with girls. They were also drooling over the boys.

Nandinis POV
Uff!! Aiyapaa yeh Bandar aj itna HOT kyu lag raha hai?? Ek toh koi angle se bandar nahi dikhta phir bhi main jaan muj kar bandar bulati hu...aur ab yeh...oh god nandini chuck it..whatever!

The girls joined the boys & everyone complimented each other. And then Cabir added some mirch masala "Nandu aaj toh badi hot lag rahi. Kisiko maarne ka plan hai kya??"

Nandini "Huhh??"

Abhi "Arey baby doll zara aas paas dekho sab tumhe hi dekh rahe hai"😉

As Abhi said this Manik took a look around & saw all the boys ogling at Nandini. He gritted his teeth in anger & murmured some abuses to them under his breath.

Nandini blushed & said "Shut up both of you!"

After some gossiping & some speeches, dances by the teachers & juniors, it was time for them to go home...but how could they do so without giving a closure in their style. Manik signalled Cabir something & he started...


Yo listen up now,
school' s out hear the bell ring
Tera kya hoga i' m do my thing
I' m a be rich, dressed in bling
I' m a spread ishq can make you sing
(Cabir sang...& winked at Navya)

School' s out hear the bell ring
Tera kya hoga i' m do my thing
I' m a be rich, dressed in bling
I' m a spread ishq can make you sing
(Dhruv repeated the lines walking towards Alya...)

Khoyi khoyi aankhon mein jo meethay meethay sapne, kya yeh dil kare
Pehale pehale din ki yeh nayi nayi subah, aao chill karein
Gumm ko chabatein jaaye, sabko bataatein jaaye, apni hasratein
Yaar matt bhule jagah, hai yeh badi cool, suno suno zara let me say...
(Manik sang remembering his school days)

Bhulenge hum tho nahin,
sochenge hum bhi kabhi
School ke yeh din sabhi aayenge na, na na na
Sikhenge hum yeh yahin, hai kya galat kya sahi
School ke yeh din sabhi aayenge na, na na na
Aayenge na, aayenge na...
(All of them sang together dancing happily)

Yo listen up now,
school' s out hear the bell ring
Tera kya hoga i' m do my thing
I' m a be rich, dressed in bling
(Abhi sang looking at Mukti)

School' s out hear the bell ring
Tera kya hoga i' m a do my thing
I' m a be rich, dressed in bling
(Cabir repeated the lines...)

Theory mein kamzor hai, practical champion
Todh de hum deewaron ko, hai bones mein calciun
Padhne se jo ho na ho, teacher se pyaar ho
Future ho raste pe, aankhon mein stars ho
(Manik sang first two line making a puppy face & then showed his arms...Cabir sang the next two lines encircling his arms around Maniks neck...)

Darr bare ghar chodhe, jo bhi mile use chede, masti mein chale
Kiday baane khaane lagey aise kyun kitaabon ko chasme lag gaye
Science padhe, arts padhe, din padhe raat padhe, kuch bhi na padhe
Sar pe dandey hain, syllabus gandhe hain, phir bhi hum kahe
(Dhruv sang with books in his hand & wearing specks & scratching his head as to what to study...& throwing the books away)

Bhulenge hum tho nahin,
sochenge hum bhi kabhi
School ke yeh din sabhi aayenge na, na na na
Sikhenge hum yeh yahin, hai kya galat kya sahi
School ke yeh din sabhi aayenge na, na na na
Aayenge na, aayenge naaa...
(All sang together...)

Ladkiyan sabko churaya tho phir kya left hai
Pass honge aaj tho kya kal phir se test hai
Har jagah sab bolte hain yeh bano woh bano
Funda apana suno sab ki par apni hi karo
(Cabir sang going around everyone saying to do whatever anyones says, always do whatever heart says...)

Aao phir sar todhe, grass pe bhaage daude nange pair hum
Thakke lete ruthey ruthey sar ke ho nichay jitey, baadal giney hum
Rim jim pani aaye chaton ki deewaniaaye aise bhige unn
Kabhi bhi ye cofee shopee chai shai hai chike bole god bless you
(Manik sang taking Nandinis hand & running...& said God bless you to her when she sneezed..)

Bhulenge hum toh nahin
sochenge hum bhi kabhi
School ke yeh din sabhi aayenge na, na na na
Sikhenge hum yeh yahin, hai kya galat kya sahi
School ke yeh din sabhi aayenge na, na na na
Aayenge na, aayenge naaa...
(Lastly all of them sang together in pairs & holding each others hand...)

They ended the song with a group hug. All of them hugged each other Manik-Nandini-Alya-Dhruv-Navya-Cabir-Mukti-Abhimanyu!


After that all of them were in the campus talking & laughing with each other.

On one hand Mukti & Nandini were talking with each other...rather Mukti was asking her something.

Mukti : Nandu! Tu sachme Manik se sach me nafrat karti hai kya?? I mean abhi kal hi tum dono ek dusre se kaha ki 'I hate you' toh kya...

Nandini : Mukti I know hum dono ne kaha ki we hate each other...but its just ki uss waqt woh mujhe pareshan kar raha tha & meine gusse me woh bol dia...iska matlab yeh nahi ki I hate him...but I really dont know what is our equation...I mean Manik ek accha ladka hai...I know woh mujhe irritate karne ke liye Motii bulata hai phir bhi main irritate hoti hu...kabhi kabhi mujhe acha lagta hai jab Manik mere aas paas hota hai...lekin...

Mukti : Lekin tujhe nhi pata yeh kya hai...haina??

Nandini : Muku...

Mukti : Nandu! Do you like Manik??

Nandini was shocked with this sudden question. She just avoided the question & left from there making an excuse.

All this was overheard by Manik who was standing & listening them. He was smiling like an idiot. He thought to make Nandini confess her feelings or atleast show them...He thought of something & smirked!

Manik was talking & deliberately laughing with Soha. Nandini was standing a lil far from them but could easily see them.

Manik was again & again looking at Nandini to see her expressions but she was continuously avoiding them.

Seeing this Manik was getting irritated but only at that time Soha said "Manik can I hug you??"

Manik smirked & said "ofcourse soha"

He hugged Soha a lil tightly to show Nandini but again no response from her side. She was just talking with her friends.

Finally Manik was annoyed so in frustration he pushed Soha a lil & marched out from there.

Nandinis POV
Huhh!! Mujhe jealous kar raha tha aur uss idiot Soha ko hug kar raha tha na...ab main batati hu uss Bandar ko!!

End of POV

Nandini was standing alone after some time when Aryaman came towards her.

Aryaman : Hey princess! I hope I can call you that??

Though Nandini wasn't comfortable with it but then she saw Manik looking at them & listening their conversation. She smirked,

Nandini : Ofcourse Aryaman! You can call me that! (With a smile)

Maniks POV

WTH!! Yeh Nandini uss gadhe ke saath kya kar rahi hai?? Dekho toh sahi kese hass hass kar baat kar rahi hai jaise duniya ke saare jokes usse hi aate ho...huhh!!!

And then suddenly Aryaman hugged Nandini. Nandini was shocked with this sudden hug & broke it immediately as she was uncomfortable!

Maniks POV
Haww!! Iski himmat kaise hui 'Meri Nandini' ko hug karne ki?? Abhi batata hu iss gadhe ko mein, ki 'Meri Nandini' ko hug karne se kya haal hota hai.

End of POV


Aryaman : Sorry! Meine tumhe aise achanak hug kar liya...I hope tumhe bura nahi laga.

Nandini (hesistantly) : Its..ok..Aryaman!

Then she saw Manik coming towards them with anger in his eyes! She got scared seeing him angry!!



Pheww!! After a long time...hows it plz comment karna lamba lamba...& silent readers next chapter will be Pmed to those who will comment on this chapter!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Manik try to make nandu jealous but manik get jealous

Sooo sweet muku convo

Waiting for next eagerly

Coun sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Amazing update
Loved it
Its a treat to read Jealous manik
What will manik do with aryaman?
Will be waiting for next update

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Wow awesome...
Manik wasn't able to take his eyes off Nandu...
Both like each other😳
Song was wow...
Manan r trying to make each other jealousy...
Aryaman is soo dead...
Can't wait for next update...
Luved it...
Thnx for pm...
Update Soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Hey dear awesome update
Boys ke hosh udagaye girls ko dekar
And our manan re on jealosy track
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Awesome update.
Both feels they r hot😉
Manik realised he likes moti
Hope Aryaman remains in one piece in nxt part😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Awsmeee update

such a long part

contd soon

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