Secret best friends- A Manan FF Chp 1 Pg 16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

so so so intersting ,,,i love this kinda stories..eagerly waithing and actually i love the intro that hi m nandini ...an all
plzzz continue eagerly waiting

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thamannamanan1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

read prologue A B C

really interesting

u r an amazing writer

iam already a big fan of yours

I read almost all ur stories

now here u r with a new one

with totally different concept

waiting for this one also

pls post next part sooon

why nandini send a msg like that ????????

kabeer n druv s reaction was painful!!!!!!!!!!1

manik telling no its not nandini

really awesome part

😊

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Annieeeeiee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Hmmm intrigued and glued. This will be one interesting thing to read.

I cannot comment much until you know I have this understanding with the whole plot itself. I want more of it. More and more.

And I love the way how you come up with different story lines altogether. Like how???

And each character is different in every story. Everything is different. Like wohh!

I love you so

Annanya

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LoveIsManan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

The prologue is great..

Waiting for the story...

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Geet *wink*

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Finally I read this.
vaise jyada nhi chuta h..
abhi to story start hogi..
So First of all Introduction Was very great..u know likee very cutee..
They r shoo sweet ..
I seriously loved the nervous nandu jo bakbak kr rahi thi...
n this "oh m so cool" attitude vala manik.
that's sooo sweet...

Edited by gtilwani45 - 9 years ago

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Geet *wink*

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Prologue A ..Aree yar Nandu khaa chali gyi.why she left him..Poor manik kya halat ho gyi h.Something poor boy...Or Goodbye Forever ka msg. that digest nhi hua ...But that will be interesting. ..

Edited by gtilwani45 - 9 years ago

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Geet *wink*

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Prologue B...ThaT was damm shocking...Haww nandu ka murder seriously...Oh God..me to hairan ho gyi...Sacchi me..yar ye kaisee..or upar se uske murder k liye manik ko arrested...Seriously...Oh God .That's getting thriller type...poor manik kitna shock hoga na...

Edited by gtilwani45 - 9 years ago

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Geet *wink*

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Finally Prologue C. Oh God.. Manik arrested. . cabir n dhruv also r here. manik's state is so devastated.. Poor he is just so blank n emotionless. . N cabir n dhruv just helpless.. Soo nandini is also close to dhruv.. Manik ne nandini ki body check ki. N oh god..how he was tracing all features of ThaT girl's face.. N he was so sure that was not nandini. Thank God Jaan me Jaan aayi.. Ab dekhna h aage aage kyaa hogaa. Waiting for next.. Nicee concept.. I think kuch thrill ka tadka bhi h...

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