#5//The Ex's At War//Ch17 on Pg 126 n Link for Thread 6 on Pg 1

nikitanaik96

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Posted: 9 years ago

#641

Awesome update yaar...manini is damn cute and the way she troubles rose and rewa is too cute n funny...loved it..continue soon..!;)

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samdamn

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Posted: 9 years ago

#642

Aww I loved it. It was just amazing.

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Raka_bd

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Posted: 9 years ago

#643

yaaay... kiss kiss kiss... I missed them :(

Manini baby is the best... navya is right.. she should have poured some on rewa too...

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aarohi arora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#644

Amazing update...
Very well written...
Loved it to the core...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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aarohi arora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#645

Amazing update...
Loved it to the core...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#646

Thanks for pm
It was mindblowing
I had missed it so much
I loved to see this side of Nandu kind of
It showed how much she loved him n how she is not ready to accept the fact of him being away from her
N also this side of Manik where he is all like showing that Nandu is only his
M pretty sure the meeting with rewas dad will be something related to business Caus I don't trunk manik can even think bout anyone besides
Nandu
Manini was superb as a always
N he last room scene was intense between manik specially the part where he comes back n says u re no one to tell me bout my rights or so
Loved it
Now desperately waiting for next part already ahah

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Arunima

@jesse93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#647

Awesome dear,
love it a lot,
waiting for the next update.

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#648

Awesome update. Loved it to core. Nandini's behaviour towards manik was well penned showing her annoyed and angry state.manan's moments with manini was blissful and beautifully written. Jealousy manik was mindblowing. His reaction after hearing nandu from mitin was phenomenal. Manini's cute antics were beautifully penned especially rose's part.manan's confrontation was well penned.totally an mindblowing update. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm

Keep writing

Stay blessed😊

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MahimaSankhla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#649

Mind-blowing.. Completely worth waiting for another week.. Poor nandu trying to pass on her msg to Manik tht shez hurt, devastated, broken in every way possible n Poor Manik being clueless abt everything could not judge as to y is she behaving stupid n cold.

That Last line.. OMG i almost got jitters. skipped a beat.. hats off to u... Kaise likhti ho itni amazing lines.

I can't wait for the next update,, Jaidi se sunday aa jaye 😊

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Boomchelesa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#650

Missedd u sooo muchhh...!! Thanx for the update...n where did u stop..at manan...? Waiting desperately for next update...!! UPDATE SOON..!!
God Bless u

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