@manan@ A SECRET RELATIONSHIP PART15B PG(132N133) imp.note pg137 16/7 - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Will be waiting 2 know wat will manik face in d next update...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

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Posted: 9 years ago
amazinggg updet dear
i just loveee it.
very very very funny updet dear.
manik expretion full updet mey most of the funny part.
manik ki dada ji bali bath i just love it.so funny.
nandu the mini monster i just love nandu's this avater.
love the abhi &cabir conversetion.
mukti ,navia, aliya,maddy,aryaman sab ki panishment so funny.
manik ki panishment is so funny.ek gay ki shat
poor manik.uska ezath dengerzoon mey hey.
plz dear next part updet soon.
stey blessed keep smiling forever.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Loved it to the core...
Very well written...
Cont soon...


LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahaha awsum update... damn funny... nandu n her punishment... hehehe... update ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
An awesome story yaar...
Read all the part in a go...
Really loved it..
I love it way of writing...
Manik's punishment was just awesome...
I'm laughing like anything...
Cabir and Abhi were just superb...
Romance between manan were out of the world...
Continue soon...
Waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Sorry sorry for late dear readers.thanks for huge response😛😛, but I didn't got 200 likes😡, but still i'm posting to my readers😊😊, who asked me post. I couldn't post properly bcz I was too busy with my stupid assignment, which is not completed yet, but still i'm posting it for u people. so, i need ur huge response.

maybe this part is not so good, bcz I myself was not satisfied with my writing today, bcz my mood was totally off due my problem, on top of it my results are coming i'm scared guys, uff so many things, but still made for u, sorry for crap to may darling readers, maaf kardena😕😕😕.
Happy Republic day to all the INDIANS.
Happy reading to u, hope u may like it.
PART-6
😭Only her Aiyyappa😭

Nandini just gave glare😡 to cabir and abhi , they immediately stood not before watching BMMM😕😕 face, which was worth to see(I just missed it🤢) ,

Ma pav.

Aiyyappa I hate u😡, apse se zyada mera babji e ache hai, aiyyappa I'm katti with u , suna apne I'm katti with u😡😡, babji give some senses to my BABY'S AIYYAPPA AND MY BABY.

Na-so, now everybody leave, or else u need more of ragging for me😡😡(looking alya,)

Alya was holding manik hand for any plan, but he himself didn't know how to safe guard his manly ezath for his love, he was still in shock but his trance was broken by his own buddy.

Dhruv just came running into campus like manic🤢🤢, holding guitar in his right shoulder with both his hands and he himself covered with cap on his head(my one of the reader was so so worried about dhruv, so here u go, but I can't assure u darling that u will love him or not)

Dhruv came to know bout the fight b/w wings and fab5. He just stood before manan , who were facing each other

Dh-tum log perse ladre hai(still he was catching his breath , it was like he directly came from marathon🤢🤢-crazy guy)

Ca(there was one more person, who was controlling his breath due to , be a part of COMEDY DAY AND NIGHT WITH MANAN, that WAS OUR CUPID) dhruv es main naya kya hai(looking manan)

Dhruv sighed in disbelief , whatever happens in whole earth wings and fab5 , won't change. Dhruv looked nandini gave his blush wala smile😃😃.

Dh-hi nandu😃😛😛

Dhruv just hugged nandini, which she also gave as friendly one. But there was someone ,who became watermelon😡😡 due to his anger.(due u want me to say people, I guess my readers are smart enough to understand)

It was complete 1 min , nandini was feeling uncomfortable, where dhruv was feeling like heaven. Manik was already pissed 😡off badly, he really wanted beat him black and blue, but couldn't as he was his own buddy, his hands were already fisted inside his palm. seeing his baby in struggle , he couldn't not help, but to pull him.

Manik just pulled him back harshly, which surprised everyone, but three of them relaxed. Abhi pulled nandini in b/w cabir and him. Where as everyone are looking them as aliens.

Ma(he just was suppressing his anger with smile) dhruv hum bi zinda hai?(it was sarcastic tone)😡😡

Dh-sorry buddy😊(just smiled at him and his possessiveness , which he thought from him but he didn't know it is not for him😆😆), how are u? by the way how was ur 3 days??(he just hugged)😊

Ca-it will be awesome dhruv.. kyu manik?😉(gave him his naughty 😉wink)

Ma-off course dhruv😊, it was awesome😛😛😛(loonking both cabni)

Cabir and nandini were at shock😲😲 , they really didn't except this, where nandini turned into red😳😳, where as cabir made grumpy 😕 face because his leg pulling failed, where abhi was controlling😃 his laughter.

Dh-nandu ,when did u came from mangalore?

Manik wanted give his best punch to his own buddy, for calling his love as nandu(possessive kidda was still on- someone off it or punch dhruv), he just pressed his shoulder to control his anger. Dhruv didn't paid any heed because he was highly involved with nandini.😕

Na-huh(she was trying to control her blush😳 by biting her inner cheeks, which miserably failed) voh...

Actually she didn't heard single word, after listening manik's word. She went to la la land of manan world.

Ab-subha dhruv, she came morning, I mean we came morning

Nandini mouthed her thank u her brother, where he assured her with smile😊.

Dh-oh! I missed u so much nandu😛😛

That was it for, whole fab5 to beat him black and blue , reasons were different though😆😆, LADY DABANGS , where angry because of ragging thing , cabir wanted to punch dhruv because his cutie was not comfortable with this stuffs of dhruv😡. Where manik , I don't think u need to tell me.

Wings where no different , they don't like dhruv closeness near nandini, especially HER BODYGAURDS😡😡 . abhi always made sure to keep away nandini from him.

((other details about dhruv u will get to know sooner in my character sketch , which will come within 2 parts))

Nandini just gave smile to him, she didn't look at manik , she easily can vision his face in her mind at that time((this vala😡)),

Na pav.

Aiyyappa, please save me na😕, this man will turn up to POSSESSIVE MONSTER any time after this words from dhruv. I know my life is at stake. Aiyyappa save me😕

Aiyyappa always listen to HER AND ONLY HER, rather than her monster.😡😡

Nandini got call (uff aiyyappa , humse bhi es rehem karo, why only nandu😡😡). She gave look around her , where fab5 and wings were giving u will die look to dhruv, where he was gulping knowing what was coming. She just shrugged took her phone from her shorts.

The mere name on th caller id bought huge sile on her face, forgetting everything around she received the call

Na-hello(her voice showed exictment)😛😛

Nandini was talking so loud everyone looked at her, seeing her smile , everyone where surprise, the girl who was giving her draggers😡 to everyone, now was talking with caller all normal that with a smile😛 , as if nothing mattered her rather than caller, manik just frowned😕 , thinking , who the hell it was😡?

Ma pav-

Who the hell is the caller😡? See madam she is smiling as if her bf called her. Wait I'm only her bf, god why I'm forgetting everything😕😕, off course I should forget after this wonderful punishment😡😡, like seriously I have to stay with gay, and top of it she says I need to save myself from him😡, urggg nandini u are gone today😡, don't blame me😡.(he gave angry glare to nandini, who was looking at him)

Na-what??😡😡(her smile turned to anger)(she just gave sharp glare to manik) I will be 20. Bye...😡😡

Ma pav

yeh deko muje es gussa huna chaye hai, par look at her she is glaring at me, wait why she is yelling😕, arey where she is going now?

Ab-barbie , where ar...

Na-later , I'm getting late abhi, dhruv keep audi ready by an hour(he nodded) and haa abhi and cabir keep an eye on all of them, if u help any be ready for ur ragging😡😡(she said all this running towards her car)

Na-keys😡😡

Abhi just throw key to her, she just catch👏 it as if she is kohli of Indian team😆🤢. Nandini gave a manik I will not leave u look😡, which also got mutual reaction from him.

Within seconds nandini's car was out of sight. Here cabir and abhi gave naughty smirk to all others, if nandini was mini monster , other two were door keepers of monster house😆😆.

Ab-so girls , washroom ka direction deka du😉

ca-and boys are u ready😃

all gave I will not leave u look😡, but they couldn't do anything as they were helpless in there places.

Dh-ek second what happened here? Did I miss anything?

Ca-u missed many things dhruv..(looking at manik)😉

Ab-bohath lambi kahani hai, filala ke liye lets get into work

Ca-haa manik , see sahil is waiting for u.. go na😉😉(he will not leave chance dude😉)

Manik went gave hard punch on cabir😡, for pulling his leg , he was letting his anger on poor little one(is it so- but I didn't think so😕😕)

Ca-Manik chod😕

Sahil's all saliva was out already🤪 , I mean almost reaching his chin😆(yuk), ogling all manly human infront of him, he thanked nandini for this, his all desire were on, he just want to make greek god as his.(I really want to pull nandini's hair😡😡urgg- so one help muno😕😭😭)

Cabir was freed by dhruv from manik's hold.

Ma-I swear tum dono ko main nai choduga(referring cabni)😡😡

Manik just looked sahil, he was terrified🤢🤢, he was feeling his ezath is gone today for sure.

I know its short, but only I made for u, I promise u people next part be big and with more masla's.
warning-if I won't get 200 likes and 50 comments, I swear I won't post next part.
special buddy's conditions are same, where silent readers warning are still same people.
so, bye for now. love u all😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
I LIKE IT KEEP GOOD GOING STORY NEXT PART
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow update...
All of them a stuck😆
Manik was abt to kill dhruv...
Hw can he flirt with his girl😆
Abhir were having soo mch fun to see thm like tht...
Now what happened to nandu..
Whr she went...
Cant wait for nxt update...
Luved it...
update soon..
And yes ALL THE BEST for ur result...
Don't worry ull score good marks..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Totally luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Will be waiting eagerly 4 d next update...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg that blood for the PM and it was such a superb update! 👏

LOVED IT ALL!!! ❤️

Ahhh Manik being possessive I love it!! 😆

Stupid Dhruv needs to stop hugging Nandini! 😡

Oops what will he do now!!! Bechara Manik! And who did Nandini speak to on the phone! ⭐️

I hope Manan don't argue and sort it out!!!! Hayyeee love seeing jealousy mode on!! 😳

Please continue soon, impatiently waiting for the next part!!! 😊

Hope everyone comments and likes soon so you can upload next part!!!!!!!! 😃

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