|| MANAN SS: YOUR EYES DON'T LIE || Chapter 6 A,B on pg 15 Note on 19 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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😊 Its really interesting Dr .I love our monster manik nd our cute lovely nandini.finally they met with each other.plzzz post the next part soon Dr I'm egarly waiting for the next part.luv u manan and lots of loves nd wishes for you Dr .plzz keep updating the parts .thanx for such a lovely story of our monster manik and lovely princess nandini.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awooosome update yaar
waiting for the next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazinggg
Superbbb update
Firse attack nandu ke pack pr...wo manik hai apni nandu ko lene aayea hai...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
amazing chapter
you are a really talented writer

cann't wait to read the next chapters

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow oh god its make me crazy .its really intresing yr .luv u Dr for updating .I don't know wat to say about this it is really amezing yr .I'm egarly waiting for the next part .I'm dying to know wat will happen next.manik came to take nandini with him. luv u manan .and lots of luv and wishes for you Dr plzzzx keep updating like this yr.plzzz post the next part soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Just came across ur story...and d only word dat came out waz Wowww. .awsum..superb..
Uh kno I waz alwaz very much into supernatural stories..
Dese tale's alwaz attractd me ..
I m so glad dat uh came up wid sumting lyk dis on MANAN..
Story z going superb so far...so monster MANIK found his mate..
Lets see wat will he do now..as now she z in blood..
Uh end it on a cliff hanger...
Plzz do continue soon...as dis story of urs has actually arise da hidden love of mine for wolfs n vampire...
So come up wid next chappie soonish..
If possible plz do pm me..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Superb update.
So nandini turned 18,time to meet her mate, and her mate z already thinking of her only.
Mukbhi was awesome.
Ayyo nandini z hurt, feeling sad for her. But I hope Manik will save her. Waiting for the next chappy.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey first of all about the msg you wrote in the pm about us giving you ideas reagarding the story and that got me thinking...but honestly after a lot of thinking nothing came to me. Pdobably it will eventualy but not yet.
But I will give you some ideas for sure :)


About the update...
I really like that you give insights of both manik and nandini. Rather than just one of'em.
It is a whole new concept and I am thoroughly enjoying reading it. You are doing a brilliant job girl!
But it was heart wrenching to see New crescent's setup being destroyed yet again! I mean they have had just started to get back their lives together and Manik's pack attacked them.
I think it would be difficult for Nandini to forgive him for this and moreover why is he so ruthless?? Some secret,huh?
Yes he is powerful but that does not mean he can missuse it. But girls fall for bad boys right? And he is her mate tooand she can't help but give inn. They both are destined. Is it possible to have mates in other packs? And they can communicate through telepathy haina? How cool :D
I love the mysterious aura around the story. Everything that has mystery attracts me and a well written one toh just bowlds me over! :D
Clifffaaayyy? Why? Oh whyyy? Sure she is not dead or the world will have to face Manik's wrath. Uh oh.

Annanya
Ps update soon plajj
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annieeeiee

Hey first of all about the msg you wrote in the pm about us giving you ideas reagarding the story and that got me thinking...but honestly after a lot of thinking nothing came to me. Pdobably it will eventualy but not yet.

But I will give you some ideas for sure :)


About the update...
I really like that you give insights of both manik and nandini. Rather than just one of'em.
It is a whole new concept and I am thoroughly enjoying reading it. You are doing a brilliant job girl!
But it was heart wrenching to see New crescent's setup being destroyed yet again! I mean they have had just started to get back their lives together and Manik's pack attacked them.
I think it would be difficult for Nandini to forgive him for this and moreover why is he so ruthless?? Some secret,huh?
Yes he is powerful but that does not mean he can missuse it. But girls fall for bad boys right? And he is her mate tooand she can't help but give inn. They both are destined. Is it possible to have mates in other packs? And they can communicate through telepathy haina? How cool :D
I love the mysterious aura around the story. Everything that has mystery attracts me and a well written one toh just bowlds me over! :D
Clifffaaayyy? Why? Oh whyyy? Sure she is not dead or the world will have to face Manik's wrath. Uh oh.

Annanya
Ps update soon plajj



Thank u for the telepathy thing i will used for sure...i m happy n smiling dat u liked the update...well i can't promise to give u another chappy frequently but i will try!...if any ideas come to ur mind dont ever hesitate ..n tell me to improve it!

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