|| MANAN SS: YOUR EYES DON'T LIE || Chapter 6 A,B on pg 15 Note on 19

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rimsha01

@rimsha01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Omg 😆

Nandu would be talking about her teddy but our Alpha Manik wont understand. This would be so much fun to read. I wanna read more now.

Nd somehow i dont blv cabir would be dead. He cant die so easily. There is definitely something more to it.

I liked that manik doesnot want her to bow down in front of him cause she is his mate. ❤️

Nd when he said

And I will mate you, whether you want me to or not, but it will not be tonight. You are my mate, it is your duty to please me and carry my pups. That is what She Wolves do".

It was just so HOT!!

Nd he even kissed her cheek. Their first kiss. Nd manik's rules. Everything was Amazing.

Please update soon. I really really want to read Manik's reaction :)

Edited by rimsha01 - 9 years ago

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Shivani

@shivanichauhan1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: rimsha01
Omg😆
Nandu would be talking about her teddy but our Alpha Manik wont understand. This would be so much fun to read. I wanna read more now.

Nd somehow i dont blv cabir would be dead. He cant die so easily. There is definitely something more to it.

I liked that manik doesnot want her to bow down in front of him cause she is his mate.❤️

Nd when he said
And I will mate you, whether you want me to or not, but it will not be tonight. You are my mate, it is your duty to please me and carry my pups. That is what She Wolves do".
It was just so HOT!!

Nd he even kissed her cheek. Their first kiss. Nd manik's rules. Everything was Amazing.

Please update soon. I really really want to read Manik's reaction :)

Hahaha..thank u...for liking it...hopefully update soon!

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samanf

@samanf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Super cool update it waz... Loved it..

Ohh..I m so excited reading our MANAN in a supernatural story..

I m sure Nandini must be talking abt her teddy. ..

But MANIK no matter whether he z a human or alpha will remain a jealous fool...hehehe...super fun it will be to read da next part..

Plz do continue soon. ..don't make me wait n crave for it much..

Take care

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avantimanik

@avantimanik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

awesome update..continue soon..
and thank u for the pm

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soothu

@soothu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

manik gave his blood to nandu,,its a vampir thing,,

butmanik isa werewolf...total cnfusion

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Aamikrish

@Aamikrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Awesome update.

So Manik saved Nandini. His blood z now on her veins.

Awe he kissed her cheek, der first kiss.

I loved wen Manik said don't bow down, because you are my mate.

Wat was she crying for, I guess her doll or something z missing.

Continue soon.

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lovePANI

@lovePANI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Beautiful update

i don't understand when
he knows it was her family
her clan then y the hell he attacked..
to show his alpha Power :(

oh my lord did he killed cabir
i hope he didn't or else nandu hate towards him will only increase yet she wants him ;)

i liked the description of nandu with
new look..

last para said by manik was hot at the same time romantic ;)

damn was nandu talking about her soft toy hahaha he misunderstood

thank u
keep smiling.

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Hey,

Finally today morning i got a chance to read your story... sorry for not being able to do it for a long time...

I must say you sound to me like a fan of super natural stuff... coz of the names and details you provided were really good... i haven't seen vampire movies or anything of that sort coz i always refrained from them...

But, today after reading your story i felt yeah not bad ... I can read this genre...😊... thank you for keeping the blood shed and other stuff in a very subtle manner... I quite liked the way you expressed Nandini's reaction when she came to know Manik was his Mate... Beautifully penned scene in the last update... the castle part.

I am looking forward now to read this story without any reservations lol...

Thanks a lot.

Take care.

Edited by ankita_t - 9 years ago