Voyage: A Manik-Nandini Fiction| *Completed* Ch11, Pg 27

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Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Res
unres

yeah. .!!
1st one to comment. .

Well it was a nice start. .

But about the question that u asked about feeling. .

Well i guess jealousy is now somewhat old fashioned u knw what i mean. .

But ya maybe distance can bring them closer and make them realize that they cant live without each other. .

Even caring can also be a part of realization. .

This are my thoughts. .

Continue soon
Love and Take care

Edited by DhruShti - 9 years ago

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ak88

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Awesome start

Loved it

Pls cont soon

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19dishayadav

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Aww! I love the bond!
And it's good to know that you'll be updating this fast :')

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Cooldude101

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Res! Need to work on writing one beautiful comment to this beautiful work! <3

Unres!

And let the voyage begin!

Oh! The start is so beautiful! The lingering feelings and the thoughts eating him alive because of his anxiousness!

Have I told you how amazing you are? I haven't I guess.

Don't worry whatever you plan I know is going to be the best I can ever get.

This beauty! Ahhh!

Dude where do you get this perfectionism? Haan?😳

I'm waiting oh god!

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: DhruShti
Res
unres

yeah. .!!
1st one to comment. .

Well it was a nice start. .

But about the question that u asked about feeling. .

Well i guess jealousy is now somewhat old fashioned u knw what i mean. .

But ya maybe distance can bring them closer and make them realize that they cant live without each other. .

Even caring can also be a part of realization. .

This are my thoughts. .

Continue soon
Love and Take care

Yes, you are 😆

Thank You. Let's see how much more gross-ier can this get once taken forward.

Ditto thoughts about Jealousy. Rather I'd say, it is cliche and over-used. Well, it's over-used for a reason. It is a tried and tested formula. The safest bet, you can say. So, I am little reluctant to use it. For one, I have worked on that factor like many more times than I now wish to. I am willing to try other things for now.

Jealousy, if is a part of the test, would have to wait..

Distance, is something new that I have heard of, let's see if things can workout for this distance formula. About Caring that's already in my rough-list ;) Though, how, still remains a mystery to me.

Well, you are free to share more thoughts in case you get a few in future, that is till the end of this journey.

Thanks once again.

Loves you back.

Take care.