# 4//The Ex's At War//Ch 15 on pg 141 n LINK FOR THREAD 5 on pg 1

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Garima

@Luving_Gari

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#1111

Awesome didu...Maine toh update padhkr roe dia

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ashusingh678

@ashusingh678

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1112

very emotional update yar
can feel the pain of both through ur dialogues
nicely written
keep updating
tc waiting for next

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Kirtikunwar

@Kirtikunwar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1113

Finally they reached back at ship...hehe kitna drama hua...
Amazing part was tht he remembrd that bet even in that situation...:-D
1 Moment before manik was like he is sad...N another moment he behaved like jerk..n that to met reva's dad!!!!!!
seriously...such a churel she is...

plz update soon:-)

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piyu008

@piyu008

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#1114

What an update yar..emotional kr dita...

So starting from the start. .manik mst be really scared. .poor guy..n those cops..haha what mst be their situation whrn they found out them normal couple😆

N last part was really emotional yar..m sure nandu took it all wrong. .n thay gadha manik why he keep hugging that rewa..I don't likw rewa at all..huh..

When manik can't tolerate any man near nandu then he is also not allowed be with any girl..he should have stopped nandu...

Your last lines made me smile

That they are manan that's why they would be together😳

Update soonish with loads of manan

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Cooki

@Cooki

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1115

It's awesome update..
Full of drama...
Lost in an unknown place...
Language barrier...
Police station..
Father and daughter moments...
Naughty manini baby..
Confrontation...
Thnxxx for the pm...
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read further parts...

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windowseatbug

@windowseatbug

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#1116

Awesome update.

Full filmy tha yar.

Getting lost in an unknown country.

The fifteen minute separation.

Manik was really worried for them.

And when manini didn't speak to him.

Awww. Poor guy.

Nandu is a sweetheart & perfect mother.

She managed to bring the father daughter together again pretty easily.

I felt really bad for her at the end.

She is so insecure with all the things happening & manik & rewa are definitely not helping in it.

But I still didn't get what manik is up to.

May be meeting her father is somewhere gonna help him with the business.

Continue soon please.

Thanks for update & pm 😃

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Sudha14

@Sudha14

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#1117

Yes di..senti chilo, olpo sholpo na.. amar moton emotional manush er jonno ektu beshi e senti hoe gese update ta. why was the ending so sad?

I know nandini misunderstood manik for sure. He still is too much in love with nandini to think about anyone else. But still i'm feeling sooo bad for her..poor girl, she must be all heartbroken to think that her manik is moving on 😭

Loved manik in today's update.

Nandini n manini ke khuje pawar por Manik jei reaction ta dilo..uff, loved it to bits. Love, aggression, anger shob kichu ekshathe. He found his peace finding them. Loved the bone-crushing hug too.

Just manini baby got a little scared.

N manik being manik, police station eo kissing bet thik e mone rakhse 😆

Glad that nandini successfully pacified manini..n she went back to her dearest daddy. Finally Manik found his smile back 😊

Bechari nandini must have felt so bad when manini reminded her of her lost child. Thank God manik realized this n went to her..after all the baby was "theirs". But the conversation that followed n the stupid rewa wala ending left me all heartbroken 😭 😭

I just want manik to run behind her, give her another tight hug n clear the misunderstanding.

Manik nadinir piche piche jabe toh right? 😲

Thanks for the pm di.

Love u.

Keep writing.

Stay blessed.

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parthmanikniti

@parthmanikniti

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+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#1118

hey...I read ur stories impulsive soul mate and then ex at war both Are just awesome superb firsy part cute romantc hot naughty actions jealousy was there...

in second part there is cuteness overloaded because of manini I love her yaar she is so cute her language specially wheb she said blahhh and ooouuu its too cute and manan ke bare mein to kya kehne wo ti best hi hote hai...

pls clear misunderstanding between them...
why he choose rewa over nandini????
any ways awesome writing. ...
pls update soon...
midweek update de dena now I cant wait pls...

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gazal.lubna

@gazal.lubna

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#1119

It was awsm full package updat really

Tht missing part and manik's concers was awsm

The police station scene :D

Then manini's problem all written so well

Yeah a bit emotional one but as always awsm one

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diju

@diju

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#1120

I recently just caught up with this ff and its prequel. They are both amazing!! I love your writing style...I am so glad you actually describe emotions and the ff is not just dailogue like so many others on the forum. Can't wait for the next update!

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