# 4//The Ex's At War//Ch 15 on pg 141 n LINK FOR THREAD 5 on pg 1

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Alinakhan270

@Alinakhan270

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1101

Amazing... update... Loved it... The angry manik is so scary... Manini started to cry seeing angry manik... Even at such situation manik is thinking about his bet... N then the last part made me cry...

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misha1118

@misha1118

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1102

I must say you are an amazing writer seriously... It's really awesome... All your 3stories... I have one question. Are you a school going girl????

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twenkling

@twenkling

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1103

awesome update. ...
loved it to the core. ...
manan lost their way. ...
manik was so afraid of losing them , that too he didn't realised that he was shouting at nandini in front of people nd specially manini. ...
poor soul got arrested. ..
manini want a brother. ..
nandu remembered her worst past. ...
Both of them are trying to talk. ..
but again that bitch interfere between manan. ...
pls end her chapter. ..
just getting irritate by her presence. ...
nandu getting everything wrong. ..
is it really the thing which she is thinking. ...
waiting for nxt update. ...
continue soon. ..
stay blessed nd take care

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keekz26

@keekz26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1104

i just love your story... the way manini character is sooo cute... its sooo natural not like some dramatic story... nandu' emotional is portrayed very well. even manik loves the duo very much... till last update his character was understandable but what happen to him... is he gone mad? WHY THE HE IS TOLERATING that REWA??

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shruthi.kumar

@shruthi.kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1105

😭 end mei rula hi dia na?
yr rewa 😡 i hate her man...n wat was dat.. y was manik so happy..i want to punch him..
i think mayb some business proposal..h na?
vhi ho..
anyways loved it.. dat caring manik i loved..

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erujaslam

@erujaslam

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1106

this was a complete package - romance, pain, drama, feelings and what not.

Thank you so much for such amazing update. :)

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pinky

@kimnana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1107

superb update ..nandani tried to help manik finding way to cruise

but lost ..manik was worried for them ..at police station 4 down haha

nandani explained her daughter manik loves him the most

they wanna live together ..pls make it happen now ...

rewa 😡 spoiled manan moments

ty for pm ..sry for late reply

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neetimehta

@neetimehta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1108

Awesome update

i hope reva kisi deal ki bat kr rhi ho jiske liye uske dad ne haa bola na ki koi relation ke liye

the update was fullon drama

manik angry bird

manini manaofy

manan lil past

manan 4 Down ofcourse

well u rocked in short

thnx for pm

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WhyNot_Mee

@WhyNot_Mee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1109

Wow that was such a beautiful, emotional, awesome update! You make me fall in love with manik more and more like can anyone BE that perfect?!? The way he loves and cares for his wife and daughter is just so adorable! Can't wait to read more! Wonder why manik is excited to meet rewa's dad... probably a business deal?!

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MahimaSankhla

@MahimaSankhla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1110

First of all, it was a long one.. like a really long one.. so thank u so vry mch... 😊

Both of them were hell scared of nt finding each other..U b'fuly wrote tht part.. The thing i loved the most is tht Nandini nvr leaves any bad influence on Manini, especially in Manik's case..

Lastly, when they were almost sorting thr differences yeh REWA kaha se aa gayi??? I knw she mst be talking about some business deal but she portrayed it in a way tht Nandini took is o/w. But wat is wrong with Manik? Why he didn't stop her?? He sometimes behaves like a jerk but i knw he'll mk up for it.. I hp Nandini doesn't over think..

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