# 4//The Ex's At War//Ch 15 on pg 141 n LINK FOR THREAD 5 on pg 1

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Posted: 9 years ago

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asowm writter u r.keep going.i just lve ur story.

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gracyparmar

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awsm..first of all sry bcoz i couldn't cmmnt on last 2-3 parts due to some problem..

But they all were awsm..

Kya bet hai manik ki..wow amzing..

And mitin ahaa so there is someone on the cruise apart from harshad who can make manik go mad..

And cavya woahh so when are they gonna tell it to others manik toh cabir ki bht udayega..

And i seriously loved the cruise ides it is damn amazing and the interiors are soo beautiful..

And manini and her cute acts..

And wahh cabir toh insects ka idea was yours well it had to be him only..

And manan k moments toh as usual soo mesmerising though we can't see it br the way u write it feels as if the scene is going on in front of us and the banners they are just amazingly beautiful..

Manik nandini ko leke kitna high ho jata hai mtlb he didn't allow even manini to come near her..

Manan lost together..gonna be fun..

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gracyparmar

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Posted: 9 years ago

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That was long..and awsm..

Manik aur nandini kitna zyada darr gaye they..k what if they split away..

What if they won't be able to see eachother feel eachother...

Manik was not wrong on shouting on nandni as he was damn scared and in the heat of the mone t he forget manini was witnessing his anger and even the people there too..

And wah what an idea to prove the police that they were married and manik such an oppertunist he is even in such a condition didn't forget the bet..

And finally thank that person who knew a bit english..

Nandini ne kitne sensible trh se manini ko samjhaya and made her patchup with her dad..

Jab manini manik se baat nhi kr rhi thi kitna zyada sad ho gya tha voh as if someone has snached half of his heart..

And the moment jab she came running into his arms that was soo blissful and bit senty too the way he kissed hee showered her with love was beautiful..

And a brother it was such an amazing moment bt briught some sadness too..

Manan had lost there child bt how and when...

And this rewa and dad????