# 4//The Ex's At War//Ch 15 on pg 141 n LINK FOR THREAD 5 on pg 1

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sneha_glamarous

@sneha_glamarous

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1081

Wow...awesome update...
Manini is soo cute... she wants balloon... awww

Manik was soo scared when he didnt found nandu n manini... ANY ONE COULD GET SCARED IN THAT CONDITION

Nandu hd also became so much afraid but 4 manini she controlled her tears...n finally she got happy tht manik found thm...

The little kiddo git soo scared to see his father soo angry...

Poor manik he got arrested...

Nandu kissed him wow even in tht situation...manik thought of his bet in that cond also... he doesn't leaves any chance to tease her irrespective of in which n wht cond they r...🤣

Manan finally made the cops understand...

Manik was soo upset n disturbed tht his manini is not coming to him...

Luved mother daughter bond she made manini understand soo well... ONLY A MOTHER CAN DO THAT...

Manik finally got his life back... n she kissed him like maniac... awww so blissful monent...
He was soo happy and he knows only his nandu can do tht...

Manini wants a baby brother...
Nandu was soo upset after tht... Both can't stay away from each other... n glad to know that manik came to her to talk...

Both luvs each other soo much but r not accepting...

Both r soo upset after loosing thr child...

BUT THUS REWA CAME AGAIN...She is soo irritating... SHE WAS DESPERATELY TALKING ROUND N ROUND N IN DOUBLE MEANING IN FRONT OF NANDU SO THAT SHE CAN CREATE DIFFERENCES N FIGHTS BTW THEM...

But what she was talking about maybe a deal or something like tht...
BECause I KNOW manik can do something like what nandu is thinking...

Nandu was soo hurt after tht.. anyone could become aftr hearing those talks...

Last line really made me feel like crying...

Luved it... Cant wait for nxt update... update soon...😊

n thanks for the pm...

Edited by sneha_glamarous - 9 years ago

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lovely-009

@lovely-009

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1082

fantastic update...😃
thank u 4 da looong chappy...
loved it...
pls cont soon

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pravidya

@pravidya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1083

wowww its a fab update poor manini got scared bcz of manik and she didnt want to go to him manik became sad finally nandu explained her when they are trying to clear the mess rewa came and spoiled it hate her

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1084

Thanks for pm
Yay so I was right the officers took manik Caus he thought he is abusing them
Poor manini really got scared from manik
But loved the way Nandu handled it n specially the situation in police station lol the way she kissed him to prove he is her husband
I felt so bad for Nandu went manini asked for a brother
But m not getting why is manik so happy in meeting rewas parents
M confused re they like dating now no right!?
I think that us something to do with business I really hope
But m not sure now specially the way Nandu left giving him his jacket
He better be not dating This rewa pewa
If he is then I hope Nandu is really hard on him n gives him a rally though time lol

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Sajna2881

@Sajna2881

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1085

Awesome nd emotional also... by the end u really felt vry bad for both manik .nd nandu... pls clear the misunderstanding soon...

Loved the whole chapter... Thank you very much... Waiting for ur next...

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SNEHA

@snow_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1086

omg itna badaaa update...like seriously😲

thank u thank u thanku🤗

super super awesome chhapy

mera kuch bhi likhna kam padega...sach mein

the last part was emotional...got lil bit teary at the end

and the words this does not belong to me...was so so emotional😭

but just looovvveeed it😳😳😳

i forget all the mess that has happen between parth and vikas

or niti or the show has ended🤢🤢

your writting is so so awesome that me sab bhul jaati hun

just love the way you write how story has come so far

such an awesome writer you are

you should seriously give this story to a production house

it will be a big hit...i m damn sure 👏👏👏

take a bow girl take a bow...i mean such fantastic work you do

emotions come so easily through your writing

cant wait to read the next chapter

but its always worth waiting👏👏

ur stories are one of the reason i wait for weekends😃😃

so continue this awesome work like this only

God bless and all the best😊😃😃

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sadiya51

@sadiya51

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#1087

Well I felt this update a bit emotional
As at first manik nandini manini got stuck in those ambey valley and manik almost list his bond with his daughter
They got out of that situation after lot of difficulties
I'm happy that manini patched up with manik but at last what he did was not at all acceptable and that to during such a serious conversation with nandini about family and his baby
At one point of time he is saying that he is having pain inside him bcoz he is not staying with his family and immediately after that he is happy to meet rewa's dad
Don't know what is the reason begin his happiness to meet rewa's dad

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kajalgupta4

@kajalgupta4

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#1088

Awesome...finlly u gv d update...thnxxx a tonnn...hope to get d nxt prt soon... 😊

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hanin12

@hanin12

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#1089

thanx for the update dear update was owsm ... I love manini the most plz bring manan together...

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aishaph

@aishaph

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1090

Awsome
Superb
Amazing
Loved it

It was like Manan lost in a alien city
Nandu took charger and landed in fruit market

Manik was horrified when his two beauties disappear
His concern was clearly visible in his anger
Manini was so scared that she was not able to go near him

Police station scene was amazing
Manik is really an appourtunist

Loved nandu n manini's convo
it was beautifully penned
Manik n manini's scene was also blissful

Manini's wishes are superb

Manan's convo about miscarriage was too emotional

This rewa is always kabab mai haddi
Becoz of her nandu is hurt again

Thanks for bringing a big smile on my face with ur update

Edited by aishaph - 9 years ago

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