#2 Khamoshiyaan (link of thread 3 page -1) 21march - Page 9

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Sukanyadhar12 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Congratulation to you for your new thread. Coming to the update it was beautiful, interesting one. Waiting for the next part. Continue soon. Thanks for the pm. Tack care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Nice update...
cont soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
awesome story...read all parts in one go...
why is nandu doing this...?? is she having some health problem but after the party she got changed so that is not possible...so someone in the party had told her something coz of which she is staying away from him...but she was fine when she came to mumbai...then something happened in 2 days...that she called mukti to mumbai n did all this...??

u know in when i read the prologue n then read the story in the starting i was angry with mukti as i thought that mukti made her do this...but then when in flashback it came that mukti was doing all this nandu asked her...it became so confusing...

update the next chapter soon...cant wait to see what nandu had planned..?? n will mukti manik cabir aliya's plan will work or not..?? will nandu get drunk n open up...??
i hope that mukbir's plan works...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
That was an amazing update..
But I really wanna see what happens next as soon as possible.. Please update soon..
U r an awesome writer...
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Promo

Surprise Surprise Surprise

Mall

"Angel.. Go.. Na.. Try.. This.. One.. " mukti said giving her 14th dress to try

"Mukti.. Bsh.. Hum abhi ghr ja.. Rhai.. Hain.. Mujhe.. Nhi.. Leni.. Aur.. Dress..." Nandini said putting dress back

"Angel.. Pka.. Last.. This one is best.." Mukti said again giving her the dress..

"Okay.. Lekin.. This is one.. Is last.." Nandini agreed n goes to try room

"So.. Finally.. " mukti said taking the long breathe

"Lekin.. Yeh.. Manik... Ab tk.. Aya.. Kyo...nhi.. Cabir.. Ko.. Call krti.. Hn.." Mukti said n take out is phone from her bag

_____

Nandini was trying the dress
"Why.. can't u.. understand.. that i love.. u.. i.. really.. really.. love.. u.." His word echoing in her year again again

"Why.. u can't leave.. me.. kyo. Mujhe.. itna.. pyaar.. krte.. ho.. ki.. nafrat.. krni.. itni.. muskil.. padh.. rhi. Tumhare liye.. why.. u.. making.. everything.. difficult for me.. mein.. hr.. rhi.. hn.. "she thinks looking herself in mirror having so much pain inside.. her..

"I love.. u. Manik.. take.. me.. out of this.. shits... "nandini said touching her head mirror n tear fell down from her eyes

"
Wht she heard her breath.. become faster.. as he listen manik melodious voice

Abhi abhi toh mile ho
Abhi naa karo chhootne ki baat

"Manik.. "she whispers his name.. like a prayer..

___________


Hum toh haare mahiya re
Moonde naina, neendh tihaare

Manik completed the song.. n only.. tuning.. his guitar than he heard her voice "manik..."

He become shocked all looked towards her manik too...


"I love u.. manik.. i love.. u.."All people sides away n she ran n jumped on him n confesses her love


Shocked or.. suprise.. yeah.. both.. suddenly.. wht happened to her.. that she confessed her love.. yeah.. toh.. part.. ane.. ke.. bd.. hi.. pta.. chlega.. abhi.. bs.. enjoy.. the trailer.. full picture.. tomorrow... hopefully.. one more.. n guyz.. this story.. just started many.. many.. shocking twist r to be come.. n next will going to be full dhamkedar part...

big thanx.. for suggestion on mujhe teri JAROORAT hai.. i have planned something very tortures for them hope i will not get bad comments.. n guyz.. real culprit will not be revealed soon.. as his name.. will shocking.. it going.. to be revealed at the end of story.. when nandini will get normal So that nandini herself punished him.. many twist are.. to be coming so stay tune with story...


Love Mehak

Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Awesome promo.eagerling waiting for update. Hope soon nandini confess everything to manik.thanks for pm.keep writing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
nice promo...
bt little confuse...
waiting fr the update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Interesting promo Dr...
At last Nandu confessed her love to Manik...
Waiting for the revelation s Dr...
Thanks for the pm dr...
Waiting for the update eagerly Dr...
Always stay blessed and happy Dr
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Amazing promo!!
Eagerly waiting!!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Wow promo..
Cant wait to know what made nandu confess her love...
Update soon...
Thnx for pm..

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