MANAN FS :OUR MARRIAGE (PART-3 (A) ON PAGE 58) PMS LATER 19 JAN - Page 29

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Drashtiii thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ok waiting fir sath me comment krungi. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
both the part was awesome
manik truly love nandini...
Waiting for the B'day party
Update soon
Take care dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kaha chali gayi?? Sometime boli na..!! And ek baat bolun, murthy babaji nai bolte re baba..🤣🤣 chalo koi nai update was super awesome.. But today also i punched you.. Hehe.. Sorrie.. Nautanki..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear nice updates nandu ka happy birthday hope manik propose karde jaldise and cabir and druv teasing was hilirous pls update next one soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Love it
Cont soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww...Manik is so cute...☺️...hayee......MAR DALA...☺️.
His self convo...I have my battisi all the while reading that part...😃.
DhruBir teasing session...😉...ek dam rocking...😎.
Not to forget...prayer wala part...😳...so CUTE...😳.

C😉nt s😃😛n.
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow wonderful update manik realised that he loves her amazing manan conversation was good continue soon waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Diya
Ur so late.
Awww update Karna bhul Gaye, aur hum yahin intezar kar rahe the.

Update was superb.
Manik itna jaldi need he's uthaya ????
Nandani ka jadoo chal Gaya.
Cabir n Dhruv pulling Manik's leg. 😆

So cute both praying together .
Awesome Manik asking for her happiness only.
What a superb ans he gave TUJHE. 😉

She is so innocent really cute.

Nx jaldi karo
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART-2 (D)


After doing a lot of masti ...pulling leg of each other ...manik left from there ...for to get ready ...for the party ...

IN EVENING-

IN MURTHY MENSION-

Guest were started arriving ...manik too came ...and saw nandani who was standing on the main door ...manik was just looking at her

NANDANI'S ATTIRE



Manik Pov :

Shit! How can someone look so beautiful ...so angelic ...her eyes ...her lips ...today everything attracts me ...kya karu ...kyu itna julm kar rahe ho baba jii mujh par...jab yeh samne hoti ha tab toh control nahi hota ...aur ab toh yeh bilkul angel ki tarah lag rahi ha iss dress main ...ab kaise control karu ...pura badla le rahe ho naa aap ...chalo koi nii ...manik control kar ...control ...par kaise karu control ...I want to kiss her ...no manik...kiss mat karna varna kahi pappi ki bajaye maar khayega ...control ...

Manik came towards nandani and smiled

Manik smilingly said : Happy birthday once again Miss BAKBAK ...😉

Nandani smilingly said : Thank u once again mr. Khadus ...

Manik frowned by listening Khadus to which nandani chuckled and smilingly said

Nandani smilingly said : Baaki sab kaha ha ...fab5 ...Mukti ...mom dad ...

Manik smiled and said : Abhi aa rahe ha ...maine socha kyu naa main hi pehle chala jaau ...u knew ladkiya kitma time lagati ha ...😉

Nandani angrily said : Manik

Manik smilingly said : Accha baba sorry ...par ek baat batao tum entrance pe kya kar rahi ho ...kahi mera wait toh nahi😉

Nandani smilingly said : jii nahi Mr. Khadus itne bure din bhi nahi aaye mera ...voh actually am waiting for someone ...

By listening someone manik instantly said

Manik : who?

A voice came from behind

Voice : Me ...

Nandani smiled widely and run towards the person and hugged him tightly ...

Nandani : I missed you ...

Guy smilingly said : Missed u too my sweetheart...

Manik who was seeing all this burning in anger ...

Manik Pov :
What the hell ...who is he ...why she hugging him ...chal hug toh thik ha ...par voh usse sweetheart kyu bol raha ha ...aakhir ha kon yeh ullu ka patha ...

Nandani broke the hug and guy kissed her forehead ...to which nandani smiled ...but manik anger was rising ...

Manik Pov :

What the hell how can he kissed her ...that was my right ...huh ...or yeh madam itna hass kyu rahi ha ...

Manik came towards them and fake cough to which nandani looked at him and said

Nandani smilingly said : Aryaman meet manik and manik this is Aryaman ...my best friend ...

Aryaman smiled and hand shake with him ...to which manik gave a fake smile ...

Nandani smilingly said : chalo guys ab ander chalte ha ...

Trio entered in the party ...nandani was dancing with her friends ...and cracking jokes ...manik was sitting on a counter and Aryaman came towards manik and sit beside him ...manik looked Aryaman ...who was just looking at nandani ...that brings more fuel in fire ...

Manik Pov :

Kamina ...dekh toh ese raha hai jaise abhi kha jaayega usse ...agar usse kha gaya naa toh main isse kacha chaba dunga ...khote daa puter naa hoye taan ...huh ...

Aryaman looked at manik who was looking at him or should I say shooting dragers towards him ...

Aryaman smilingly said : tum yahi soch rahe hoge naa main uski taraf ese kyu dekh raha hu ...

Manik fake smile said : haa batao naa ...

Aryaman smiled and said : yeh ha hi esi jo usse dekhe bas dekhta hi reh jaaye ...

Manik Pov :

Abbe saale dekhta hi rahe dill toh kar raha ha teri aankhein hi noch lu ...bloody jerk ...

Manik nodded his head as yes forcefully ...

Aryaman smiled and said : Vaise tumhara kya khayal ha meri aur uski jodi kaisi lagegi ...

Manik Pov :

Jodi ...my foot ...tujhe toh main yahi naa maar dun ...kya ha yeh bakbak ...pata nahi kaise kaise dost bana rakhe ha ...huh ...

Manik was lost in his thoughts...Aryaman placed his hand on his shoulder to bring him out of the trance and said ...

Aryaman smiled and said : kya hua dude kaha kho gaya ...

Manik sarcastically said : kahi nahi ...in fact tum khoye huye ho ...

Aryaman confusingly said : matlab ...

Manik angrily said : kuch nahi ...main abhi aata hu ...

Manik came towards nandani and holds her hand ...nandani looked at him surprisingly ...

Manik : I have a surprise for you ...come ...

Nandani smiled and followed him ...

IN GARDEN-






Nandani was so shocked by looking at the decoration ...she looked at manik who was sitting on his knees

Manik : jab tumhe pehli baar dekha tha ...toh mujhe laga tha ki tum ...chalti firti aafat ki dukaan ho ...matlab kon itna filmy hota ha ...and then u kissed me ...sacchi batau toh esa laga u r taking all my pain...aur phir tum mujhe apne ghar le aayi ...mujhe laga ki shayad tum pagal ho ...kyunki ek anjaan ko koi ese hi apne ghar nahi bulata ...par phir mujhe pata laga that u have a pure heart ...then we became friends ...I again started laughing ...joking with my friends ...tumse ladna ...tumse baatein karna mujhe accha lagne laga ...mujhe yeh pata lag gaya tha ki main tumhe like karne laga hu ...par pyar...I was not sure that time ...aur dhire dhire this feeling became stronger and I realized that I fall for you ...am in love with you bakbak ...I love u ...i will not promise you about anything bcz I knew vaado ke tutne pe bahot dard hota ha ...but yaah u can trust me ...trust me ...I will never leave you ...never make u cry ...never ever hurt u ...I want to give you world best happiness ...I want to give you family nandani ...kya tum meri family ka hisaa banogi ...

Nandani was just looking at him with tearfully eyes ...she bend down and said

Nandani cryingly said : tum bahot bure ho ...tum hamesha ese rulate ho ...par mujhe tumse hi pyar ho gaya ha ...am in love with you too Mr . Khadus ...I love u ...

Manik wiped nandani's tears and said

Manik smiled and said : I don't like ur tears please never shade them ...I want to give you world best happiness ...not these tears ...I love u my bakbak ...

Nandani : I love you too Mr. Khadus ...

Manik smiled and placed his lips with her ..and started kissing her ...nandani too responded with equal favor ...both were sucking each other lips ...manik was holding nandani's waist tightly to pulled her more closer ...nandani hands were on his hairs ...manik bitted her lower lip gently and entered her mouth ...there tongues were mingled with each other ...both were exploring each and every corner of mouth ...after some good 5 min. Manik broke the kiss and joined there head with each other...both were panting heavily ...nandani blushed by remembering there kiss ...she hugged manik and manik too smiled looking at her innocence ...and hugged her back ...





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Phwww done ...sorry thoda late ho gayi ...kaisi lagi update ...acchi lagi yaa nahi ...well agar nahi lagi toh sorry for that but I'll try my best and yaah guys main iska ladt part or wedding night ka last part ek saath post karungi ...maybe tomorrow or day after tomorrow ...actually I have some work ...hope you understand ...AND YES I WANT LONG COMMENTS ...HEHE ...AND TELL ME WHICH PART U LIKE THE MOST ...
Love you all
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛
Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww...

how cute they are,,,,,,,,,,

cabir and dhruv manik ki leg pulling k bina kaise reh sakte hai...

cabir ko to hamesha hi manik ko tease karna hota hai...

but i just love their bond.,,,,,,

aww my nandu she is so cute...

Miss bakbak & Mr.khadus... wow kya name hai...😆😆


manik ki pray...haye maar hi daala ...

how much he loves her miss bakbak...

hamesh aise hi rahe dono

nandini being innocent soul manik ki baatein kabhi samajh nahi paati

bs ab in dono ko jaldi se ek kar do,,,,

eagerly waiting for the manik's confessoin...

loved the update,...,,

update soon next part

thanks

keep shining baby

Reet


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