MANAN FS :OUR MARRIAGE (PART-3 (A) ON PAGE 58) PMS LATER 19 JAN

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#271

Loved it yaar

Nandini is sach mein 1 antique piece

Manik bhi kuch kum nahi hai...

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#272

loved it

nandini is superb

manik ki bhand bajega in future

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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navla

@navla

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#273

nice update...

nandini is too cute n bubbly ...

manik tld her abt his feeling...n she thought he is joking...

nandini talkg abt manik life partner...n manik is blushing...wow...

loved it...

waitg for next part...keep smiling...

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qamarkhan87

@qamarkhan87

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#274

Awesome

All the parts were amazing

Loved this chatterbox nandu and angry hulk manik

Manik ne cabir ko bol diya k nandu bhabhi hai uski bada hi fast nikla

Aur indirectly propose bhi kar diya

Eagerly waiting for nxt

Update soon

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alind713

@alind713

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#275

Please update the next part
Eagerly waiting for it

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ASDF101

@ASDF101

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#276

MISSING YOU ....

JALDI se next part post kardo naaa

Plzzz come back SOON..

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JiyaRajput

@JiyaRajput

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#277

hii
I m a new reader of your story
I had just read your two stories our marriage and our wedding night
both stories are amazing
unique from others
eagerly waiting for their update
continue soon stay blessed and be happy

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diya

@diyaNarwal

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#278

Hey guys ...missed me ...am sorry guys main iss story ko post karna bhul gayi thi ...I knew am very bad ...but please forgive me...so here is the update ...ENJOY😛

PART-2 (B)

MORNING-

Manik was standing in front of the mirror...he was gelling his hairs ...

MANIK'S LOOK

Manik Pov :

It has been a month since I came back ...but honestly speaking in this one month everything is changed ...Nandani ...or should I say MY BAKBAK ...hehe...yes my ...Firstly I thought that I like her as u knew who doesn't like like a beautiful ...cute and a hot girl ...but now I know I love her ...am falling for her ...her innocence ...her care ...her smile...everything about her I love it ...uski pagal pantiyaa bhi ...she is like a kid ...who wants everyone to smile ...who can't see anyone in pain ...maybe this thing attracts me towards her and most importantly her carefree and bindaas nature ...arre jo mujhe jaise akdu ko hassa sakti ha toh voh kuch toh hogi ...hehe ...today is her b'day ...and am going to confess my love for her ...vaise I knew she too likes me ...par pyaar karti ha yaa nahi yeh nahi pata ...par iss baar am scared ...I can't loose her ...bcz I love her ...I love my BAKBAK ...

Manik smiled and saw the time and said

Manik : shit! Am late ...manik bhag jaldi ...tujhe usse sabse pehle wish karna ha...

Manik horrifiedly took the car keys but stops in mid by listening someone voice ...manik turned and saw cabir and druv was standing in front of him and smirking

Manik mumbled : MAR GAYA

Cabir smirkingly said : kaha jaa rahe ho MR. ROMEO ...😉

Manik irritatingly said : Romeo like Scriously cabir am not romeo okay ...

Cabir smirkingly said : Accha ...nahi ha ...chal koi nii ...yeh bata kaha jaa raha ha ...voh bhi subha subha ...😉

Manik nervously looked here and there and said

Manik nervously said : voh ...main ...voh ...

Druv smirkingly said : arre cabir yeh bata aaj sooraj kiss disha se nikla ha ...matlab Manik malhotra subha ke 6:00am baje uth kar ...naha dho kar ...tayar shyar ho kar jaa rahe ha ...aakhir chakar kya ha😉

Cabir smirkingly said : haa ...haaa...manik bol naa ...kaha jaa raha ha voh bhi itna saj dhaj ke 😉

Manik nervously said : voh ...main ...haa ...jogging ...

Cabir smirkingly said : jogging ...ahhaa ...par jogging ke liye itna tayar 😉

Manik pov :

Kaha phasa dete ho Nandani ke baba jii ...ab kya karru main ...kaise inn do namuno se picha chudau ...sachme manik bakbak bilkul sahi kehti ha ...main bolne se pehle kuch sochta nahi ab kya karru ...haa ...yahi sahi rahega ...

Manik : ummm ...actually voh kya hua naa ki ...mere paas office se phone aaya tha ...voh mathur valli deal ha naa ...uske papers nahi mil rahe he toh bas vahi dekhne jaa raha tha ...

Cabir smirkingly said : Accha subha ke 6 baje ...😉

Manik irritatingly said : haa subha ke 6 baje or kuch ...dekho mera dimak mat khao ...mere paas aur bhi bahot kaam ha ...huh ...Bye ...

Manik hurriedly left from there and cabir and druv both gave hi-five to each other ...

Cabir smilingly said : finally iski life main bhi khushiyan aa gayi ...varna mujhe dar tha kahi yeh ek mere attraction ki vajhse apni life spoil naa kar le ...

Druv : tu sahi keh raha ha Cabir ...par jo bhi ho ...buddy ki BAKBAK ha bahot sahi😉

Cabir looked at him and druv continued

Druv smirkingly said : Arre manik malhotra ko subha 6 baje utha diya ...yeh koi kam ha 😉aur voh bhi jogging ke liye😉

Cabir smirkingly said : Arre nahi nahi druv paper's ke liye ...😉

Cabir and druv laughed loudly...

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Drashtiii

@Drashtiii

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#279

Res
unres
awesome. .
I too love manik's BAKBAK. .
Waiting for confession. .

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diya

@diyaNarwal

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#280

PART-2 (C)

MURTHY MENSION-

Manik reached murthy mension ...he hurriedly came out of the car with bouquet in his hand and a smile ...which she loves ...he rang the door bell and entered her house and directly weny towards her room...and the sight which is in front of him ...makes him fall for her once again...nandani was wearing a red suit ...she was drying her hairs which wss wet now ...few water droplets were on her face ...manik came towards her slowly ...and nandani was so engrossed to drying her hairs ...she didn't noticed manik ...manik holds nandani from back and kissed her shoulder and suck water droplet ...nandani instantly looked at him ...and blushed

NANDANI'S LOOK

manik saw this and smirks ...he came near her ear and said

Manik : Happy birthday Miss BAKBAK...

Nandani came out of the trance and said

Nandani smilingly said : Thank u Mr. Khadus ...

Manik makes a cute pout by listening Khadus and said

Manik : Am not khadus yaar ...now toh am smiling naa ...why u always called me khadus ...

Nandani innocently said : bcz u call me bakbak ...kya main itna bolti hu ...

Nandani makes a saddy face...Manik smiled and pecked her forehead and said

Manik smilingly said : Nope tum nahi bolti ...hum kam bolte ha ...issiliye tumhara bolna jyada lagta ha ...

Nandani smiled and said : exactly ...accha ab chalo baba jii wait kar rahe honge ...

Manik smiled and said : hmmm

Both came towards guru nanak jii portrait ...nandani joined her both hands and do the same bcz nandani said soo ...nandani closed her eyes and said to baba jii in his ears ...

Nandani : Baba jii ...today is my first b'day when I am praying with someone that too on my b'day ...kamal ha baba jii ...aap ne mere last year ki wish ko toh complete kar diya ...ab iss saal mujhe aapse bas itna hi chahiye ...mujhe mere mr. Right se mila do ...taaki mqin next year uske saath pray kar pau ...(writter pov : baba jii ne tumhari wish complete kar di ...hehe ...)

Manik:baba jii ...as u knew I don't knew how to pray par yeh kehti ha ki jo bhi man main ho voh keh dena chahiye ...give her world best happiness ...uske chehre par hamesha khushi dekhna chahta hu ...kabhi nahi socha tha ki kissi ke liye itna serious ho jaunga ...par ab chahta hu ki mere hisse ki khushi bhi isse de do ...iski aankho aansu baradasht nahi kar paaunga ...

In short meri yahi wish ...MERE SAARE SUKH ISKE ...AUR ISKE SAARE DUKH MERI JHOLI MAIN DAL DENA ...BCZ I LOVE HER ...

Nandani looked at manik ...whose eyes were still closed ...

Nandani smilingly said : esa kya maang rahe ho baba jii se ...

Manik opened his eyes and smirkingly said : TUJHE ...

Nandani eyes widened in shock and manik laughed loudly to which nandani frowned ...

Nandani angrily said : shut up u gaddha ...hamesha mere saath esa karte ho ...kabhi toh esi harkate may kiya karo ...huh...

Manik smirkingly said : Accha maine konsi harkat ki ...bolo ...

Nandani angrily looked at him but couldn't understood his double meaning talks ...so she innocently said

Nandani innocently said : Tumne mujhe kyu maanga baba jii se ...mujhe toh sirf voh maangega jo mera husband hoga ...aur tum mere husband nahi ho ...

Manik mumbled : Abh tujhe kaise batau vahi toh banana ha ...

Nandani raised her eye brows and said : kya kaha ...

Manik : kuch nahi ...abh tum tayar ho jao ...party bhi ha naa...

Nandani confusingly said : hai ...party toh shaam ko ha ...main abhi kyu tayar hu ...

Manik smirkingly said : arre abhi jaaogi tanhi yoh shaam tak vapas aaogi ...u knew ...😉

Nandani slap his shoulder lightly and said : Tum naa rehne hi do bahot bure ho...

Manik smiled and said : Arre main bura nahi hu ...see mere seegh nahi ha raakshas ki tarah ...

Nandani smilingly said : Really ek baat batao...JAISE MAGIC WAALE KO KHUL JAA SIMSIM BOLNA JARURI HA ...KYA TUMHARA BHI YEH BAKWAAS KARNA COMPULSORY HA...

Manik gives a angry glare to her to which she pulled his cheek ...

Nandani babishly said : cho chweet u ale (so sweet u r )

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