MANAN FS AGAR TUM SATH HO BANNER ADDED ON PG 153 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Ty for d pm...
Woh I so can't wait to read d updates...
Its super interesting...
Plz plz continue soon...
ll' b waiting for d update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
please update dear
eagerly waiting
take care 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Loved the concept. Waiting for update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Amazing update...
Very well written...
Loved it to the core...
Cont soon...
Plz pm me if u can...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Nice strt...
update soon...
thnx for pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
awesome prologue yaar
nandu ka marriage honewalithi? with someone else omg
fab4 ka dialogues are superb
u r amazing u penned it
thanks for prologue
continue
eagerly waiting for next part

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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Please update this story
Eagerly waiting
Take care dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
PART 1 :

A girl dressed beautifully looking no less than an angel was sitting on a chair before mirror looking down on ground instead of herself in the mirror...

MISHTEE...!!!!!!!

knowing no one would ever call her MISHTEE expect HIM she slowly raises her eye lashes and smiles faintly seeing HIM through mirror...

He stands at her back looking her through mirror not blinking his eyes for once saying nothing...

nandu...!!!! neche sab agaye hain tu and nyonika stops abruptly walking into room watching his son...

maaa and nandu stands turning towards her...

chelo and nyonika starts walking simply holding her hand...

mujhe mishtee se bath karni hain and he holds his mishtee hand not letting her walk away...

nyonika without turning closes her eyes and nandu neeche ladke vale agaye hain

bas thodi der and he makes his grip tighter on her hands while nandu stands looking his pleading eyes...

nahi... and nyonika starts walking only to get stopped again listening nandu voice...

maa...bas do minute...aap cheliye main athi hoon...

nyonika turns and looking nandu jaldi kar...

nandu blinks her eyes while nyonika walks out giving deathly glare to her son...

nandu looks him and raises her eye brows asking what...

He holds her another hand too and lowers his eyes...

manik..!!!!!

He doesn't say anything nor looks her while she knowing him whispers softly jaan...!!!!!

He immediately raises his eyes and smiles looking her while she continuous kya bath hain kyu pareshan ho...

He caresses his thumb on her knuckles and kuch samaj nahi aara...sab kehre hain ki main galath hoon...galath karra hoon...wo kehre hain ki main tumse and stops sighing

she takes a deep breath and hmmm sunri hoon

MANIK :

Mishtee...!!!!! Kya tumhe bi and stops looking into her eyes and then mishtee tum tum kush ho na...

tum kush ho na..!!!!! and she questions him back instead of answering looking him without blinking her eyes for once...

Knock knock knock...

He controls himself from drowning into her eyes and slowly leaving her hands moves back...

Knock knock knock...

He without looking her starts walking towards door while she stands looking him controlling herself gulping her saliva not wanting words to slip out from her tongue...

Pal bhar thahar jaao
Dil ye sambhal jaaye
Kaise tumhe roka karun..

As if he heard her unspoken words he stops at door instantly and turn towards her looking directly into her eyes...

Meri taraf aata har gham phisal jaaye
Aankhon mein tum ko bharun
Bin bole baatein tumse karun
Agar tum saath ho..
Agar tum saath ho...

He didn't loved her and at least he believed that but yet he couldn't stop himself from standing their looking into her eyes listening to her unspoken words...

Behti rehti..
Nahar nadiya si teri duniya mein
Meri duniya hai teri chaahaton mein
Main dhal jaati hoon teri aadaton mein
Agar tum saath ho...

Her unspoken words affect him so much that he not being able to control starts taking steps towards her while she immediately lowers her eyes as if she had committed a mistake...

Teri nazron mein hai tere sapne
Tere sapno mein hai naraazi...

As if she heard him she looks into his eyes instantly while he continuous to speak silently through his eyes moving close to her...

Mujhe lagta hai ke baatein dil ki
Hoti lafzon ki dhokebaazi...

Door gets opened and with in a blink nyonika walks out taking nandini with her while he stands speaking to himself smiling faintly...

Tum saath ho ya na ho kya fark hai
Bedard thi zindagi bedard hai
Agar tum saath ho...
Agar tum saath ho...

seeing people all around from a little far she closes her eyes standing frozed at her place

Palkein jhapakte hi din ye nikal jaaye
Bethi bethi bhaagi phirun...

Having her eyes closed she takes two steps ahead only to get slipped but before she could get hurt hitting the ground a pair of hands holds her protectively making her open her eyes instantly knowing the warmth...

Meri taraf aata har gham phisal jaaye
Aankhon mein tum ko bharun
Bin bole baatein tumse karun
Agar tum saath ho...
Agar tum saath ho...

He pulls her close hugging her ever so tightly hiding his face in crook of her neck while she stands clutching his shirt at back crying loudly yet silently...

Teri nazron mein hai tere sapne
Tere sapno mein hai naraazi
Mujhe lagta hai ke baatein dil ki
Hoti lafzon ki dhokebaazi...
mein hai tere sapne
Breaking the hug suddenly she runs down without looking him while he stands looking her speaking his words out not even realising that his eyes were filled with tears...

Tum saath ho ya na ho kya fark hai
Bedard thi zindagi bedard hai...

ye aansu kyu and he comes into his senses seeing his mother standing infront of him wiping his tears...

kuch shuru hua bi nahi aur tu abi se rora hain hmmm and she tries hard not to burst into tears then and there infront of him...

MANIK : wo...main...

RAJ : nyonika nyonika

NYONIKA : aari hoon and leaves smiling...nodding her head...looking his son...

Manik closes his eyes and then opening them walks down taking a deep breath...

RAKESH : arey manik agaya tu kabse dund ra tha aaja

Manik smiles and walks close to rakesh...

(Rakesh and preeti parents of nandini)

RAKESH : aryaman ye hain manik nandu ka bachpan ka dosth

PREETI : aur ham sabka ladla

RAKESH : haan aur manik ye hain aryaman nandu ka and before he could complete manik offers his hand heyyy

hiii...!!!!! and aryaman shakes his hand with manik...

DAMINI : beta yaha aana

(Damini is mother of aryaman)

Nandu moves close while damini lovingly kisses her forhead and bohuth sundar lagri hoo beta bilkul pari ki tharah...

Nandu smiles slightly while she continuous beta bina sagayi ke seede shadi ki rasme shuru kardi hamne tujhe problem tho nahi hain na beta isse

Nandu nods silently while she smiles further looking her...

Aryaman was leaving to US after four days so they decide to get nandu and aryaman married directly without engagement...

NYONIKA : nandu ham yaha bath karenge tu jana aryaman ko apna kamra dika jaa

NANDINI : maa...main...

NYONIKA : haan tu ab jaa

ARYAMAN : arey nahi it ok aunty

RAJ : nahi beta tum log mile hi kaha ho isi bahane thodi bathe bi ho jayenge tum logon ke beech tho jao na

FAB 4 who were sitting silently look each other sadly and then manik angrily...

Aryaman gets up and nandu silently walks infront of him showing the way...

Manik sits shaking his legs looking them not knowing why he was worried...

ARYAMAN : woww beautiful

Nandu just smiles without saying anything...

ARYAMAN : nandini...

she looks him yet saying nothing

He gestures her to sit and then after sitting beside her at a little distance hmmm friends...

She looks her and smiles slightly

ARYAMAN : so batao kon hain wo

NANDINI : haa

ARYAMAN : arey wohi jisse tum pyar karthi ho

Nandu looks him for a second and then naa naa nahi koyi nahi hain

ARYAMAN : relax...was kidding...

She looks sideways while he calls her nandini...

She looks him while he continuous look nandini I really want to be your friend before any thing else...

She blinks her eyes while he continuous further let's just forget that we are going to get married and talk to each other happily without thinking about anything...

Nandu nods again saying nothing...

ARYAMAN : kya tum batha sakthi and nodding his head to right and left ye konsi language hain mujhe samaj nahi aara

Nandu smiles a bit huge and mujhe bi nahi patha

ARYAMAN : thank god at least you smiled

nandu smiles and thank you

ARYAMAN : kis liye

nandu just nods and tum ache ho

ARYAMAN : aur tum mujhse bi achi

She smiles again while he offers his hand so...friends right...

She shakes her hand with him and haa friends...

ARYAMAN : thnx friend for becoming my friend

NANDINI : thnx to you too

Aryaman smiles and chele

NANDINI : haan wo tum chelo na I'll just come

ARYAMAN : okkk

manik gets up making an excuse to check out nandini but seeing aryaman coming down sighs and settles back

ROSHAN : beta nandu kaha hain

Aryaman settles beside him and aari dad

damini,rohan and aryaman were sitting on one couch while manik along with preeti and rakesh were sitting opposite to them...

FAB 4,nyonika and raj were sitting on two other couches...

Nandu comes and stops looking the couch filled with alia,mukthi and kabir...

two persons stand instantly looking each other and then nandini...

hmmm its and aryaman stops in between seeing nandu walking towards him...

He smiles and moving a little settles back on couch along with nandini while one person was still standing looking them without blinking his eyes...

HIS MISHTEE HIS NANDINI sat with an other guy even though he the great manik malhotra was standing infront of her asking her to sit beside him

She committed a big mistake didn't she??? yes she did... at least he thought this and hence without saying anything simply walks out fisting his hands in anger...



Phewww done...tho bolo kaisa laga... jaldi am waiting...aur haan smile just because you can...luv u...tc...byyy byyy...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
finally like finallyyy
u updated mishtee...sigh 😛 😆

coming to update...
Sooo emotional update 😭
poor nandini...
she is getting married with stranger bt still the fact she cared about is her manik...
if he is happyyy...then she is also happy...

manik is dumbest guy...
he is crying...he is restless...he cnt see her even sitting with sm1 else...
bt he is clueless 😡
how can he behave like that?
pata nahi kab akal aayegi isse 😡

aryamaan seems to b a nice guy...
hope he will figure out nandu's dilemma...
nyonika n fab 4 ...helpless...

song choice is perfect...
blended with situation very well 👏

cont soon
waiting
Edited by manandeeplove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Manik loves nandu but didn't realised yet
I hope he realise soon before it's get too late
Loved it
Ab to manik ko gussa aa gaya after seeing his misty sit with aryamann instead of him
Sayad ab manik ki akal thikane aa jaye
Continue soon

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