Aiyoo Ayyappa- FF- Thread 4- Chapter 63-on pg 140-4th Feb 2016

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Tiara115

@Tiara115

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#871

Wow. . Yr u always amazes me...

Grt job...

Loving the bond between manan. .

Do update soon

Waiting eagerly

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#872

this time you took too much for update yar i know you have three ffs well i haven't read them yet will read them whenever i get the chance
coming to the update i liked that indirect kiss wala part your innocent nandu is something i like the most thank god she is not childish just innocent and yeah story is going great i m liking it keep it like this only a light weight entertaining ff only i love this update soon can't help greedy to read more

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priakachan

@priakachan

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#873

Originally posted by: lovePANI
it was priceless update
everything was awesome
u used lines, surrounding brilliantly i loved it

m loving it how they are taking up their realtionship

i loved that indirect kiss😆
they are opening up to each other
chalo undono ki patri thodi kinare mai aagyi😆

nandu is too innocent n cute

thank
keep smiling

Thanks a lot, my dear!☺️

Indirect kiss..hmm hmm...😉😛

Patri not fully on kinaara...it's still floating idhar udhar😆😆😆

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priakachan

@priakachan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#874

Originally posted by: archu_asok
Awesome update. Loved it to core. Way u penned this update was commendable. Hats off. Manan's convos and moments were beautifully penned. Manik's confession part was mindblowing. Nandini's state was well penned. Manan's friendship state was beautifully written. Rapid fire of Manan was blissful. Fireflies and stars part was phenomenal. Manik's words were fab.manik's reaction after hearing his name from nandini as her favourite singer was mindblowing. Nandini's hamesha words were phenomenal. Totally an marvellous update.Loved it to core. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.
Keep writing
Stay blessed

Thanks a lot, my dear! ☺️ It always feels wonderful to read the way you point out the parts U enjoyed most...😳

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priakachan

@priakachan

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#875

Originally posted by: MyGuitarVina
wow
enki story to track pe aana start ho gayi
it is interesting and romantic update
i enjoyed a lot
thankx

Yes..story tho abhi track pe aa rahe hai...😛

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priakachan

@priakachan

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#876

Originally posted by: Tiara115
Wow. . Yr u always amazes me...
Grt job...
Loving the bond between manan. .
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

Thanks a lot, yaar😃😳

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AsthaVerma92

@AsthaVerma92

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#877

Ohhh god wat a beautiful confession...
Manik awww...

Manik is full on flirty moments...
I so loved it...

Manan pure love ...
M so excited for manan proper confession...

Plzzz update new part soon
Don't make us w8...

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Sabahfatima14

@Sabahfatima14

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#878

Amazing update...

It was really beautiful...

Manan convo was blissful n cute...

Maniks teasing ...ufff!!!n nandus blush...aye haye...!!!!...

Awesome chapter...

Continue soon

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priakachan

@priakachan

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#879

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla
this time you took too much for update yar i know you have three ffs well i haven't read them yet will read them whenever i get the chance
coming to the update i liked that indirect kiss wala part your innocent nandu is something i like the most thank god she is not childish just innocent and yeah story is going great i m liking it keep it like this only a light weight entertaining ff only i love this update soon can't help greedy to read more

Yes yaar..I too know...but to get into the feel of 'Aiyoo Ayyappa' is a bit tough when compared to my other FFs..because the other ones are adaptations..while this one is my original creation. So I have to get into the mood to feel the way they'll be conversing..behaving. In this FF...I try my best to keep the KY2 feel as active as possible..to keep Manik and Nandini as close to the ones in the Season 1 of KY2😳 So when I get into the feel of it..I update😛 But thanks a lot, yaar!

The way U guys wait for my update..it motivates me to continue to give updates which will have tons of MaNan moments😳

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priakachan

@priakachan

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#880

Originally posted by: AsthaVerma92
Ohhh god wat a beautiful confession...
Manik awww...

Manik is full on flirty moments...
I so loved it...

Manan pure love ...
M so excited for manan proper confession...

Plzzz update new part soon
Don't make us w8...

Thanks a lot, yaar! In my imagination..Manik is full of flirting😆😆 I like that flirtatious side of his..when he plays around😛😆

Thanks for waiting...😳 and sorry for keeping you waiting too...but can't help it at times too...😕😆