Aiyoo Ayyappa- FF- Thread 4- Chapter 63-on pg 140-4th Feb 2016

priakachan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#861

Originally posted by: etuu
I'm also surprised i'm too fast hehehe ;) i was looking for update stories which i follow then saw AA in 1st page then click it & read it... :p

😛 U are pretty fast yaar😳 Quite fast like Manik😆😆

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priakachan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#862

Originally posted by: Aashnaa83
Oh oh oh.. wat a update...girlfrnd ..story s great..updte s awesum.. love s definately n da air.. fr a very lng time...😳

Thanks, my dear and yes..Love is in the air😳☺️

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priakachan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#863

Originally posted by: saakshiii
awsm cute updte
loved it

Thanks, my dear😳☺️

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lovelydoll22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#864

Superb love u writer

Remembering manan ssly miss them soo much

Positivity z lyk flowing in this update hah par superrr

End mai PS ka naam

And green aww my fav color too

Keep updating lyk this

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esh ;)

@ps_angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#865

oowwwiieieieieiiei

manik ne maan liya k pyaar

bt nandini is so naive

abh tk ni smjhiii

nyccc

cntnue soon :)

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lovePANI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#866

it was priceless update

everything was awesome

u used lines, surrounding brilliantly i loved it

m loving it how they are taking up their realtionship

i loved that indirect kiss😆

they are opening up to each other

chalo undono ki patri thodi kinare mai aagyi😆

nandu is too innocent n cute

thank

keep smiling

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archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#867

Awesome update. Loved it to core. Way u penned this update was commendable. Hats off. Manan's convos and moments were beautifully penned. Manik's confession part was mindblowing. Nandini's state was well penned. Manan's friendship state was beautifully written. Rapid fire of Manan was blissful. Fireflies and stars part was phenomenal. Manik's words were fab.manik's reaction after hearing his name from nandini as her favourite singer was mindblowing. Nandini's hamesha words were phenomenal. Totally an marvellous update.Loved it to core. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.

Keep writing

Stay blessed

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priakachan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#868

Originally posted by: lovelydoll22
Superb love u writer
Remembering manan ssly miss them soo much
Positivity z lyk flowing in this update hah par superrr
End mai PS ka naam
And green aww my fav color too
Keep updating lyk this

Thanks a lot, my dear😳

I want MaNan to have a positive relationship...and PS ka naam tho pehle bhi hue na in this FF...he is the one with the mole😛😆

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