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Posted: 9 years ago
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They have some hidden dreadful past which is related to myrah...
Is she Manik and nandini's daughter?
Let's see what happens next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow just amazing concept
Superb story line
I wish it could be a ff rather than ss
Plzzz continue soon
Waiting for next parts eagerly
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice update..a different story from all the other.. Waiting for your update
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It's awesome story..
Continue soon...
Do pm me whenever u update..
Looking forward to read further parts...
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awesome story...
its different totally... pls update soon,

pls pm aftr updating dr...

awaiting ur update...😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yrrr its not even full fanfiction ...its a short story
At least u can update this. Its been 9 days
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awwweeesssooommmeee

update Next Part ASAP

add more n more n more Manan hot romance n Grey Manik
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PART 3

" listen bohot ho gaya tumhara drama. Am sick and tired of it now. Sign the god dam papers right now." Manik yelled sternly.

" Manik please try to listen me first. " she pleaded again. " I know you are hurt. But I can make it up. Please give me one chance. "

He turned at her and tried to read her mind. And Asked " You can make it up? " She nervously noded.

He Chuckled then asked scrutinised " Soch lo ? Do you really want to make it up? "

She kept silent tried to measure the depth of his eyes. As his eyes were always remain crystal clear whatever the consequences was. It always conveyed the truth.

" Marry me then. "
Came out the straight demand from his side. It was more precisely an order instead of an option to her.

" What kind of demand is this? Why do you want to marry me? " were her counter attack. She knew it was the time to 'pay back' in his words but paying back with justification.

Manik glared at her. Her words started echoing inside him. " Why do you want to marry me? "

All of a sudden he noticed himself loosing his monstrous mask and returning to that ' Manik ' SHE had discovered.

Nandini's keen sense informed her that the monster was fallen weak . She slowly kept her palm on his cheek.
He looked at her instant but blankly. There was immense pain in his eyes. They were Shouting narrating his shattered devastated life.

She so wanted to ease his pain but she wasn't actually aware of his exact pain.
According to her mind, he hurt her toAccording to her mind, he wanted to hurt her to the moon and back. But her heart, it always knew that there was something which had hurt him more than her.
As Manik was not that person who would had been hurt her without reason. There was something big but what? She wasnt aware of it.

She pressed her palm against his cheek carefully and asked him softly " Where is the pain Manik? "

Manik blankly gazed at her and unknowingly cupped her palm with him over his cheek and slowly dragged her palm towards his heart. And pressed it against his heart.
" Here. " he replied and a lone tear moist the corner of his eyes.

Nandini felt him for few moment and tried to take that feelings inside her.
And unknowingly said " Manik sab thik ho jayega. Everything will be alright. "

And suddenly something happened and he just pushed her away and uttered straightening himself
" kuch nehi hoga. Nothing will be alright. You have destroyed everything. "

He ruffled his hairs frustratingly and then roared " Barbad tumne kia hai now tum sudharogi . You have spoilt my life now you have to pay back. "

She just stood there numb. Her brain was still stuck in the ' terrible hazardous deed ' of her.

" listen I don't have entire day for you. Just sign the contacts and marriage paper. And Get Lost. " he showed daggers to her and spat those with utter most irritation.
He knew if that encounter would had been going like that then he afraid to loose himself to her.

But Nandini was equally hurt so she came forward and asked " I will sign only and only if you are going to tell me my fault. "

That's it for him. All the brutal incident flushed in front of his vision and salted his still fresh wound.
He exhaled an exhausted over frustrating breath and clutched her arms firmly and about to give his piece of mind when suddenly the door of his cabin flung opened and there she entered exhausted and breathing fast.


" What happened Mukti? Why are you here? " Manik asked her being concerned.

As soon as Myrah had watched her father , her happiness was in no bound. She started struggling from Mukti's grip to be embraced by her father.
But before Manik could took her from Mukti she was snatched by Nandini.

" Myruhh " she hugged her with so much passion that the little girl made frowns.

" Myruhh my baby. " she kissed her face like mad and again pressed her tiny delicate frame against her heart.

That time Myrah made a little sound and started crying with the sweet intense torture by Nandini.

" Stop Hurting My Daughter "
Manik in a swift move snatched Myrah from her and started patting her back to sooth her. That little angel kept sobbing until she totally felt his father's comfortable warmth.

Manik kept rubbing her back whispering sweet nothings to her till she adjusted herself comfortably over his dad's chest keeping her head on her papa's lovely comfortable shoulder.

Nandini just kept gazing that sight lifelessly.

After he felt Myrah's calm even breath over his shoulder he came nearer to Nandini and whispered not to break his princess' s sweet sleep

" How many times I have to say you to stay away from my daughter? "

Nandini stared at him with painful eyes and then said somehow " She is My Daughter too Manik. I am Her Mother. "

" No You're not. You certainly are not. You get that? " he announced with uttermost hatred in his voice.

" I have given birth to her . She is my daughter. " tears rolled down from her eyes aimlessly.

Her daughter. Her own daughter wasn't familiar with her touch.
The baby who had grown inside her womb.
Nine long months!!!!
The baby who has given her the best twelve months of her life now couldn't felt the warmth of her.
It was a great slap to a mother. Nothing could be worst than this for a mother not to recognised by her own child.

Manik knew she need to give her the reality check now. So he just signalled Mukti to take Myrah but as soon as she drifted apart from the best place , her slumber got disturbed. And she started frowning.

Seeing her daughter Nandini came forward to take her from Mukti but promptly got stopped by Manik.

He again took Myrah in his embrace and getting her papa's love , that little one slept again.

" I told you to stay away. " he showed her glares. Nandini couldn't took it more and started crying vigorously.

Mukti tried to calm her but the mother inside her broke into shattered pieces. She again for the second time died for the uncountable times feeling so detached with her daughter.


---- flashback ----

Manik Malhotra , the name himself was a famous classy ecstatic brand.
He was a well established, self made business tycoon who has named his golden entry in the forbes magazine awarding with the title of the most eligible young businessman of the country.

He was man with sharp sexy jaw line, heart warming smile that could take you to your death, deep brown talkative eyes that was a perfect place to loose sanity , pinkish white skin complexion which could give you complexation with your own, well toned masculine frame to get protected. In short he was 'Greek God' with human habitats.

He had his empire Malhotra Heights. He was the Chairman of the company. Hard work, dedication were his keys of success.

He was the role model for the dream watchers. He was the fantasy to the thousands of girls. He was the jealousy to those evil businessman.

But he was the man with few words. He was a very introvert , self belonged human being. No one knew exactly about his personal life. He was arrogant. He was composed. He was rude. He was soft. He was monster. He was the prince.
He was always a mystery!!!

In short he was the full package of Beauty-Brain-Beast.

But his life suddenly took full 360 degree when he accidently bumped with her. Collided with Nandini. It was a Collision of spark.

Nandini Moorthy , sweet bubbly girl with chubby creamy cheeks, pouty rose lips , big dreamy doe eyes. She was a girl who was the definition of ' full of life and happiness'.
Technically she was an orphan but yet she wasn't. She had the entire world whom she considered her.
But there was only one thing in this universe she loved the most. It was The Manik Malhotra.

Yes !! She was a die hard, hilariously crazy fan of that arrogant prince.
Fan in the sense, she wasn't drooling over his killer irresistible face but the Him. Only the Him. His everything.

And holding that dream one sunny morning she tried her luck in Malhotra Heights. She was that time a fresher commerce graduate. She applied for the secretory job and by the grace of God she bagged that too.

And from that her life started roaming around him in real. She got appointment letter of the secretory of The chairman of Malhotra heights.

From the very first day she started ogling him like a love sick puppy which exactly she was from the prior days. He was giving her instructions and she was drooling over him being lost in his persona.
His sitting to walking very style was epic and unmatchable. And she was just lost in that aura.

Day started passing by its own accord and Nandini's deep admiration got increased like that with each growing day.

But only one disappointed which slowly made home inside her was Manik's aloof towards life. His ' only work no waste ' mantra started making that bubbly girl sad day by day. But she yet didn't try to force herself but wait .Wait for the time. The wait might be became forever. But yet she was determined to wait seeding a hope tree inside her heart.

And one day after her eight and half months of tiring job, the great God showed some mercy on her hope tree.

It was a tale of One fine morning

Nandini was working on her laptop making his schedule for the day. She was reported always fifteen minutes earlier than others in the office just to make sure of his flawless day schedule with his hot steamy Earl Grey Black tea on his table as her boss was always on time. Like it was not him who was going according to time but the time itself.

He was always serious in his job. No talk only work kind of strict boss who was named with " Monster Malhotra" by his entire stuff with love.

But to her , his every good-bad thing was correct. When he scolded her for his messy files and her untidiness , she just returned a sweet smile to his irritated frowns. Firstly he used to became hell annoyed with her but then gradually he also started accepting that 'she was a typical gone case'.

But Manik was impressed with her sincerity . With her punctuality. With her flawless job except that messy table of her.

So back to the story ,
one day Nandini was doing her work when on sharp 10 am Manik entered followed by his manager Aman Mathur.

Nandini wished both of them "good morning sir. " Where as usual she received a smile along with wish from Aman and just a " hmm" from Manik.

But she was more than satisfied with that ' hmm ' as even that mere hmm was only awarded to her. No else in the office got any reply from him.
That's why she considered herself little bit special than other employees and indeed she was.

Aman was describing him about some deal when she got a call from him .She slowly went to his cabin and started dictating his schedule.
Sipping the tea he listened his day plan and asked her to leave.

But when she was about to unlock his cabin suddenly he pushed the lock button and asked her
" ermm Nandini do you have any problem with your job? "

She was surprised. All of a sudden why that big boss was enquiring about her wellbeing. Its simply impossible.
She nodded saying " No sir. I am all fine. I am very happy sir. Actually too much happy. "

Manik looked at her amazed then said " If say so then fine. "

Nandini was shocked again. " Why did he randomly showed concerned to his mere employee? "

" have I done any mistake sir " her trembling lips uttered thinking very deep .

Manik noticed her pouty lips with cute pout. He felt something unexpected inside him. But swiping it away replied " Nothing. Bus try to avoid my name in the schedule pages. I mean from last nine months I am getting this only. I am bored now. So think something new from now on. Okay. Now you may leave. "

Manik completed with his smirk when Nandini wished the earth to tear apar and let her dig her face inside in embarrassment.

She quickly came out and entered into her cabin adjacent to Manik. She started cursing her absent mind for drooling him and as a pathetic results she was landed up drawing his name on the schedule papers.

But she was little amazed too as Manik had for the first timed talked some witty nothing talks with her. That made indeed her best day.

Day started passing by and Manik started opening up to Nandini. They started talking like friends. They started sharing their random discussions. Manik was behaving extremely different with her .
And as per the fate call, they fall for each other in next few months.

One lovely evening Manik confessed his love to Nandini. That was her best evening till date.

Manik drove her to his penthouse and they shared a very romantic time with each other.

That night was very special for both of them. Manik had arranged a surprised dinner for her in his house.

Manik was extremely happy confessing his heart whereas Nandini was in the pool of ecstasy.

They danced after their confession. They sealed their confession deal with a passionate kiss. Both of were having the best time in each other's embrace. Their proximity got increased with the growing night.

And finally they got carried away forgetting the whole world.

The way Manik took her to the bed in his protective arms.
The way she herself kissed his the most tempting ever mole above his lips and his groan at the time of her sweet torture on the mole.
The way they shared the passionate kiss rolling on the bed fighting for dominance , moaning on each other mouth feeling the heavenly love.
The way he asked for her permission and her shy blinks as an affirmation.

The way he showered wet intoxicating kisses on her each and every corner of her body making her body full red with his immense love marks.
The way she blessed him with her calling kisses all over his face, neck ,board shoulder , chest ,his back every mere part of his body.

The way they both hissed in pain with there first heavenly thrust feeling.
The way they sometimes smiled, sometimes whispered sweet nothing on their ears while giving each other immense pleasure.

The way he slept on top of her being exhausted being two body one soul.
The way they both blushed hard after their first night being sore and flushed .
Were something very enhancing. Unforgettable. Commendable.

With each passing day their love grew more and more. Their trust grew with their immense bond.

But Nandini was not sure about other employees intention so on her plead they kept their relationship secret. Only Aman was the happy witness of that 'oh-so-much-in-love couple.

After about one and half month Nandini got fainted during an outdoor meeting. Hopefully there was only Aman and Manik with her without other office member. Manik rushed to the hospital with her .And there they got the most shocking news.


" Nandini Moorthy was pregnant. "


Manik was way too happy listening the news and he just hugged her tightly in front of the doctor. His happiness went no bound where Nandini was in little dilemma.

Manik understood her mental state and said " Love do you trust me? "
How could she deny those genuine love filled eyes. She nodded. And he kissed her knuckles and spoke further

" Then keep trusting me. Don't worry. Every thing will be alright. You have no idea love , how much happiness you have given to me. This is the best news of my existence. Nothing could be more happier than this. You are going to bless me with child. My Child. Our Child. I just can't express how happy I am today. It's the best I could ever had. Thank you. Thanks a lot. "

That was it. They hugged each other promising to get married soon. Manik started arranging for their grand wedding whearas Nandini kept thinking of how to face others?

Time passed and her pregnancy syndromes started coming up. It won't take time for others to pass assault judgement on her character.

Manik couldn't take it anymore and he announced Nandini as her fiance and soon to be happen wedding.

Manik wanted to marry her simply when her wish was having full ritualistic wedding. So they need to wait for her delivery as per doctor report she was bearing not so mature womb to carry a baby.

But Nandini was stubborn enough to carry her child while Manik supported her after his fifteen days of constant pleading sessions.

Manik took very good care of her during her pregnancy fulling her very sense to nonsense, sane to insane wishes and mood swings .

But the one thing surprised her was his interaction with his child.
He became too much protective about everything of that unborn. His time to time showering love to the child by kissing her tummy very often or kept talking with it now and then , really awestruck her. And the most thing lovestruck her was his full confidence of having a girl child.

She kept arguing with him for a boy but somehow he was sure about his princess.

That was might be a reason Myrah was very much fond of her father's warmth and touch. It really amazed Nandini how always Myrah made sure herself slept in her darling papa's arms from that very first month. She was a born papa's princess.

And for Manik , he was always around his daughter. No matter how busy he was he always made sure of giving proper time to Myrah.

After Myrah' s three months completed Manik suggested to get married and Nandini nodded a yes.

But before that he suddenly needed to visit Dubai for some work for five days. But it seemed to be three years to Manik. He wasn't at all wanted to go away from his baby.

Both the conditions of father-daughter were a treat to watch that time.

Manik couldn't concentrate on his work without his darling daughter and three months old Myrah kept roaming her beautiful big doe eyes all over the room just to find a glimpse of her dear daddy.

Three days flew away with that like Nandini to always be on the Skype chat with Myrah so that that papa-princess could cuddle each other through video chat. And on her surprise her daughter just kept touching her ipad drenching it with her saliva as if she was giving her wet touch to her daddy cool. And her daddy cool kept showering kisses like a fool forgetting the mother of his darling.

But she never complained as she very well knew what Myrah was to him.
If she was his star then Myrah was his brightest shining armour. His life.

Three days had fled away and Manik returned back to India without informing Nandini. He wanted to give his love a grand surprise with all ready for wedding preparation.

He firstly came home and found His princess was sleeping peacefully on her stylish comfy feathery cot and Nandini was no where to be seen.

Enquiring Mukti, his cousin sister who was very fond of Myrah and adored by Manik , he came to know that she had left for some work to office.

Manik frowned firstly as going out leaving Myrah alone !! But swiped away the weird thought thinking she must had some important work otherwise she would not had done this.

Manik then kissing his baby and adoring her cute face , went to office to surprise his lady love.

Manik reached office and carrying his that aura pushed the remote accessed door of his cabin and when he entered his world crushed into million pieces. What he found snatched the floor beneath his feet brutally to made him shattered.

" No it isn't true. It can't be true. " his head was spinning. He quickly grabbed the couch to support .

He again opened his eyes and saw ' Nandini was with some man standing very close and they were kissing.' Through the see-through glass which separated his and Nandini's cabin.

He promptly came out his cabin couldn't stand that horrible scenario more. That 30 seconds were more than enough to rock her entire world and crushed it harshly .

His dark face , terrified vision could not went unnoticed by Aman. And others.

Manik drove blankly that day without understanding what to do. He was shattered. He was feeling disgusted. How could Nandini did that to him? He loved her like mad and that was the reward from her side...betray?

"He wasn't in his senses. His love had betrayed him".

It was he could visualise on that moment pathetic moment. If anyone...Any damm one would had come to him and said about Nandini being betrayal. He could definitely pricked that man to the wall and beat him to death.

But how could he ignore his own eyes. He so wanted to thrust his eyes so that they could forgot that heartbroken scenario.

He drove to some deserted highway and cried out loud pouring his frustration, sadness, all.

He wasn't thinking straight that time. How could his Nandini !!!! His voice choked. And He started Walking On the road aimlesly given up his life.

He was walking shattered when suddenly some mellifluous tune twinkling on his ears. He didn't figure out what was that in first place. The when that sound turned into sweet giggle he got his senses back.

" MYRAHH !!! "

Her face flashed in front of him and abruptly he realised his mistake of giving up life. When he had a big aim in his broken shattered aimlesss life . His daughter. His Myrah.

He ran back to his car, hopped in and drove to his house as fast at he could.

When he had reached there Myrah was awake and throwing her tiny legs and hands and crying bitterly in hunger.

Manik just again lost his life watching his life crying so vulnerably. He in a swift move picked her up from her cot and hugged her.

Manik shouted out Mukti's name who was having bath. Getting verbal right left from Manik , she rushed to get Myrah feeder. Manik changed his sweaty shirt in a speed into a fresh one and cuddled his baby started feeding her .

After few minutes of pacing from this corner to that Manik finally made her sleep.

He slowly made her lay down on bed and covered her with comforter and took a vow to protect her from this cruel world. To love her to the moon and back. To take care of her sacrificing himself.


After one hour Nandini returned with little worried face but got excited seeing Manik returned home so early. She hugged her. but on her surprise he remained stiff.

Nandini took that as her weird imagination and kissed his lips first then his mole. But that time too Manik was emotionless.

She was about to enquire about that when she was cut by his straight " Where were you ? "

He was so praying to his God of her to say the truth. But his stars betrayed him when her shaky trembling lips replied " just little marketing "

He closed his fist when his eyes got moisten with heart broken tears.

Just then Myrah got up and started sobbing. Before Nandini could , Manik embraced Myrah in his arms and said those words which were never came in his way not even in his most scary dream.

" Nandini you should leave now. I don't want you in my life. In Myrah's life . I guess you are not worthy to be a mother. I loved you. Yes you have heard right. I loved you so much. Now it's all over between us. And one more thing get that straight in your head 'you have no right on my daughter. She is all mine .' Now you may leave. And thanks for the betrayal. "

Those devil words were the 'shattered Manik's' last words to Nandini. She pleaded. She cried. She begged for a chance to explain her aftermath. But Manik was way to broken to get cured. Moreover that he was worried for Myrah's future. Though he was always felt guilty whenever his little daughter sucked her thumb in sleep missing her mom's touch. But he was helpless for himself and for her too.

From that day onwards Nandini kept working in Malhotra heights like a normal employee. Manik shutted herself from him in every way.

But his fate again played a crucial game with him when after one month his step mom some day arrived with her evil plan to hurt him with some lawyers placing a charge against him being a single parent . They demanded Myrah to be sent to a child development authority. Manik could fight with anyone for his daughter.
He fought with the world with his all power and got succeed too but just for two extended months.
He again threw lacks of money to shut them up. But eventually he got court notice either he had to marry within four day or else they would take Myrah with them.

Manik understood what would be his next step and he demanded Nandini to do 6 months contract marriage.

--------- end-------

He recalled all the scary moment of last four months.

Nandini was then fully broken finding out her fault. She started sobbing bitterly clutching Manik's blazer. Both of were crying out their own but same pains. Pain of losing their beloved ones.


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its the third token of this FS. only one part left.
do comment like stay tuned.

HAPPY WALA NEW YEAR...

Edited by musicialtie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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happy new year
nice update
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Happy New Year :-) :-)
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its awsm di
loved it
looking forward
only one part left
eagerly waiting
Edited by Samruddhi_Kadam - 9 years ago

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