MaNan TS : Are we Friends??? Last Chap 2 on pg 5

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megha94kumari

@megha94kumari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

so cuteee... schi mein... manik kitna cute lgta h...

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Bhavik Dave

@davebhavik93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

The second part is really awesome. no words to describe about your writing now not talking about writing come to point of story : every part, every scene, every situation is described such that reader can feel while Reading... Keep it up. waiting for another story soon.

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dsrohit

@dsrohit

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Awesome update dear...finally manik ne bol hi diya...😆😆😆😆😆

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

when your add your next "TS"

good going keep writing...

love you dear...

love you dhrasti...😉😉

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Dua Arafat

@dua_arafat

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

res...

agr two days tak unress na kia to yad dila dena...

I want to read this

but time problem to pata nai kab hoga...

but do reming me agr na kia to😊

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mona

@cmamona

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Hey
Firstly congratulations for this beautiful ts...
It was so magical...
They r sooo dammm cute when they r together...

Car k upar jakar Confession Was solo good and interesting...

Maniks restlessness was well penned...
So cute so romantic story...
And nandu ka datna and maniks grinning was enjoyable...
I loved it...
And pics made it more beautiful...
Nice selection...
Keep writing...

Keep smiling
Stay blessed

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Nice one.

Do write more like this.

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Drashtiii

@Drashtiii

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: cmamona
Hey
Firstly congratulations for this beautiful ts...
It was so magical...
They r sooo dammm cute when they r together...

Car k upar jakar Confession Was solo good and interesting...

Maniks restlessness was well penned...
So cute so romantic story...
And nandu ka datna and maniks grinning was enjoyable...
I loved it...
And pics made it more beautiful...
Nice selection...
Keep writing...

Keep smiling
Stay blessed

Thank u so much. .
I am glad to have a review from a writer like u. .
Thanks
Love,
Drashti

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rockstarlover

@rockstarlover

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Loved it.
Nandini's imagination is epic.😆

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mona

@cmamona

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Drashtiii

Thank u so much. .
I am glad to have a review from a writer like u. .
Thanks
Love,
Drashti

Are yar how can I not when reading such a good stuff...
And u r such a sweethrt...

Keep smiling
stay blessed

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1044737

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

AMAZINGGG!!! JUST AMAZING!!!!!! 26 ALPHABETS ARE NOT ENOUGH TO EXPLAIN THE WAY YOU PENNED THIS STORY... DON'T WORRY I WONT KISS YOU..HEHEHE.. CONFUSED?? UR CONFUSION WILL BE CLEARED IF YOU READ MY FIRST OS FIRST KISS.. ANYWAYS BACK TO THE STORY.. ITS FLAWLESS.. I READ 15 TIMES.. HEHEHE..

EVEN I WISH I COULD BE BACK WITH MY EX-😭

I MISS HIM TOOO BADLY..

AYE..AYE.. GALTHI USKA HAI..

I AM NOT TO BE BLAMED..

HE LEFT ME WITHOUT REASON..

MUJHE AAJ BHI REASON NAHI PATHA...😭😭

OKKIE ENOUGH OF MY SENTIMENTAL TALKS..

YOU ARE SERIOUSLY AMAZING...

DO WRITE MORE...😃😃😃

TAKE CARE!

STAY BLESSED!!
KEEP SMILING!!!