BAS ITNA HAIN TUMSE KEHNA- MaNan OS UPDATED PART 1/2/3 ON PG 6&7

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

ohhh wow

thank god u gave different ending.

a happy ending.

its very much interesting. .

I loved it.

itss awesome.

more write..like this.

Love Geet

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neetimehta

@neetimehta

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Oh my god

u made me speechless

my god u amazed me

it was awesome

compltly diffrnt

gal u naild it

m spellbound by ur writing

awesome update

thnx for pm

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FairyGamer

@FairyGamer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

awe

superrr cute

loved it so much

the last pic was super perfect

soo lovely updates

it is one of the bst os

i ever read

ty for pm

loved it

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Iqra

@Iqra1309

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

A tale of love that every girl dreams about

How cute and magical it was

Had aBlissful experience reading it

You just penned it beautifully

Take care

Thanks for pm

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Simikumari

@Simikumari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

It was a beautiful story...

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Alo Manan

@Alohomora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

"Apurva darling... Ab toh smile karde, tero hero aagaya" 😉

Yes darling, I'm finally here 😆 Without a link 😉 And to start with, the first part made me go BOING. Right where Nandini pulled Manik's cheeks out of the blue. Honestly, from the way she giggled and pulled at his cheeks, I thought that you were going to portray her as someone with a little bit of issues "up there". 😆 But no, I rather loved the bubbly one she turned out to be. Reminds me of the hyper and ever excited Geet from "Jab We Met" 😛

Second part had me go all aww. Manik was adorably cute in his shy, reserved avatar. ☺️ Loved it when he covered her up from the mud splash.

And third part had me biting my nails. I felt that something was going to go wrong. And when she finally said that she was engaged, I felt so down in the dumps. 🥺

But I'm so glad that it was a happy ending. No rhona dhona. Just together forever. A very warm, and beautiful love story. Deep Massive Sigh

Edited by Alohomora - 9 years ago

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Ashwitha Sheregar

@Aashnaa83

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Cheek pulling ws da best... luvd t lotz... missed dialogues though..its lik a beautiful dream..

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rimsha01

@rimsha01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Indeed it is really beautiful.

But u know what. I have a COMPLAINT. I am angry like hell.

All the time manik was narrating d story to his little champ he was using past tense for nandini. Nd i thought she is no more. I read d whole story with tears in my eyes.

Only for nandini to appear in the end. And den i still had tears flowing, but they were accompanied with a wide smile.